Re: Rise | #0347

Postby Placebo » Sun Jun 10, 2018 3:10 pm

Roughly an hour left ^^
User avatar
Placebo
 
Posts: 9240
Joined: Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:01 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Rise | #0347

Postby Placebo » Mon Jun 11, 2018 3:29 am

>> Leafstorm515 wrote:Username:  >> Leafstorm515
Cat Name: Coyoteheart
Clan: Mireclan
Rank: warrior
Gender: Tom
Age: 30 moons

What is one thing this cat couldn't bear to do without and why?:
His mind was always a mess. Coyoteheart could never seem to quite get rid of the noise that bumbled around in his head, like a swarm of bees that had lost its queen. The Tom spent his time trying to remain calm, control his nervous ticks, and trying not to step on any toes. To Coyoteheart, everything was a maze. Relationships, communication, even simple every day tasks. He often imagined that everyone else was seeing the world in a 2D black and white picture, where as he saw it in 4D HD super color. It was like they could ignore the noise, the buzzing of their thoughts in a way that Coyoteheart couldn't.

There was only one thing that made it bearable. Each morning, Coyoteheart rose before all the other cars and would walk in the darkness out into one of the field that lay to the north of Mireclan camp. He would curl up on top of a small rock surrounded by brush, and wait. The dew was his refreshment, and the birds his company. Then, like an explosion, the first few Ray's of sun would poke over the horizon. The crimson, orange and yellow would explode across the sky, illuminating the earth in a golden glow.
And all Coyoteheart could hear, was silence.


Got some help on this one, so congrats Leafstorm <3 I personally enjoyed the 'show, don't tell' format of this piece. I'll update everything once I get around my PC.

An HM is going to areater for the interesting take on declawing!
User avatar
Placebo
 
Posts: 9240
Joined: Mon Aug 22, 2011 7:01 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Rise | #0347

Postby Areater » Mon Jun 11, 2018 3:32 am

    thank you so much and congrats leafstorm! <3
┌─────────┐




.
Imagex





└─────────┘
x
x
┌───────────┐


hecking moo.
⇢ she/her ⇠
⇢ atheist ⇠
⇢ queer ⇠



└───────────┘
x
x
┌─────┐





└─────┘
┌─────────┐




.
Imagex





└─────────┘
User avatar
Areater
 
Posts: 17733
Joined: Thu Dec 22, 2011 6:13 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: Rise | #0347

Postby >> Leafstorm515 » Mon Jun 11, 2018 3:34 am

!!! Thank you so much! I'm really excited to have the first tom for my clan! <3
Image
Image
Image


x
x
Image

Leaf/Leafstorm ~ she/her
Character Designer











Image
User avatar
>> Leafstorm515
 
Posts: 13906
Joined: Thu Mar 19, 2009 9:06 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: LadyCrowsong, Shadowhunter,, ►Athena◄ and 45 guests