Shout Outs wrote:/trainwreck/
Cassidy's character idea was absolutely neat; I could see this viscet targeting and absorbing nightmares to protect those around them. The writing present in your form was also nicely done ^^ I would have loved to learn more about Cassidy though, and I hope you're able to use such an interesting concept for another character one day.
Honorable Mentions wrote:Surroundingcrystals - x2 Stubs
Baby's life story is certainly quite the emotional roller coaster; all of the ups and downs you described that occurred to her in her life helped map out her character as her story progressed on. Learning about how she became the protector of the forest was interesting, especially seeing how her mother planned to be the original guardian when she passed away. The extra pieces of writing and art that you did also help further explain her character and her story ^^
Runner Up wrote:Humerussin
I really do love the literal take that you took upon Corona's character. Her being a guardian angel for spirits that traveled to and fro from the kingdom in the sky made for an interesting occupation. The explanation behind her duties and the tale of how she came to be a spirit herself were all wonderfully written, and I enjoyed reading through each nicely organized part of her story. I also appreciate the relationships you've already built upon; Sahaquiel, Azrael, and Evora all felt like important additions that helped further her character throughout her plot line.
In addition, the singular piece of art that you did of her is absolutely adorable. The soft expression and innocent pose really help convey her personality ^^)/
Winner wrote:True Knight
Your stories are always lovely True, and this one is certainly no exception.
Even though I knew Evangeline's relationship with Evanlyn would not end on a positive note (and I admittedly did try my best to brace myself for it), I still felt my poor heart get mercilessly pummeled into the ground after reading the heart breaking conclusion of Evanlyn's life and Evangeline's love. Regardless of how brutal it was to my poor heart, I honestly thoroughly enjoyed reading through the snippet of the angel's life. Likewise, the other viscets that you chose to appear in the story made for wonderful additions as well, as each and every one of them felt important to her life's story. The amount of character building present in your form is spectacular, for sure ^^)/
I also really adore the piece that Lex did for your form as I thought that the small scene captured from the story within it was super cute. I always dig art that relates back to the story line!
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