Re: LoC Adopt No. 128

Postby SukarettoYanagi » Thu Dec 28, 2017 7:20 am

We have a winner!! I had to bring in an additional guest judge(thanks a bunch, Hobbit Geek!) to pick between the two forms, but congratulations to .The Bootless Box. with Enoch!! I look forward to seeing the two of you around.
There was only one minor lore issue, and that is that LoC litters can only consist of four cubs or less. That is really the only thing that needs to be addressed.

Props to Fiern! My guest judge and I enjoyed your form as well, and we encourage you to continue to try for lions in the future.


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    ƲSERNAME ))
    .The Bootless Box.
    ИAME )) enoch
    ǤENDER )) male
    ЄLEMENT )) death
    ΔLLEGIANCE )) pride
    ЯANK )) fighter
    -because of Enoch's
    strength, he is rather
    ruthless in battle. As
    a fighter he is quick,
    taking lives swiftly.
    He isn't afraid to be
    heavily attacked and
    will go in headstrong.
    While this deadly
    side of him is very
    useful, it is also a
    downfall. He is often
    still eager to kill after
    the battle is over for
    some time, but once
    the blood lust leaves
    he is normally pretty
    calm and patient.
Ƥ E R S O N A L I T Y
patient - charming - persuasive - dark - merciless - sly - capricious - private
While Enoch looks like he could kill you at any moment, especially if you've
ever seen him fight, he is actually pretty calm. Enoch can be very charming
and very persuasive but he also has a dark sense of humor. While it can be
funny in certain situations, he can be a bit too sarcastic and candid with his
jokes. If you can get past that though, he is a good companion, and can be
very comforting or very honest with others. It depends on what he sees that
they need to hear. He is very persuasive, he is also patient. He won't usually
give up after a while of trying to convince you, he will stop and let whatever
he's advising you against happen. Then he'll try to convince you of his advice.
This can be a bit exasperating but Enoch will be there to support you through
whatever you ask of him. While he doesn't mind talking about other's lives he
can be a bit dramatic when it comes to his own. He's one of those types that
would tell a stranger 50 different stories on how he got a scar, simply because
it isn't their business. Yet he truly does not like to talk about his cubhood or
anything similar. He will change the subject or just quietly slip away, it makes
him a bit mysterious to some, and just distant to others. And, he may seem
distant but he is very loyal to the pride, but he is constantly changing his mind.
A simple interaction may make him slightly dislike you one day but make him
chuckle the next. Not only are his moods fickle but so are his battle techniques,
he can be blunt and quick or brutal and calculatingly slow. Usually he goes with
quick, sly blows that surprise and incapacitate or kill his enemies. In this way
he is sly, often coming from seemingly nowhere and finishing the job.

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    When Enoch was born he had four siblings, one more than most litters. But, he only had one parent.
    His father died in battle before he was even brought into the world. His mother, Olma, was a
    performer in the pride and her mate a tank. After his death she was unsure she still wanted to be a
    mother, but it was too late. Her five cubs came out seemingly healthy and she wondered how many
    inherited her husband's element of death. Olma knew that he was a good soldier and would never hurt
    a soul if he didn't have to, but she feared what her children might become if they were power hungry.
    Enoch was the darkest of his siblings and the largest. Quickly his mother knew that him and one of his
    sisters had the element of death. Olma named him Enoch and her Morrigan. The other three were fire
    wielders like herself. Ishaan, his only brother, Achabel, and Elidh were their names. Enoch was a strong
    cub, pushing past the others quickly. Olma didn't know what to do as her other four only grew weaker,
    and at first she blamed Enoch, but soon realized they were sick. Only days after they were born Olma's
    litter began to die. It wasn't something the healers could fix, it was genetic. Something caused them
    to pass. Ishaan was the runt and he passed first. If Olma hadn't wanted to be a mother, this was not
    want she meant. This wasn't what she wanted. Elidh passed next. Only three cubs were left.
    Miraculously Achabel, Morrigan, and Enoch survived, and Olma thought her suffering was over with.
    For fifty years her cubs grew and although Enoch was the only one who seemed normal in strength,
    the other two seeming weaker, they were okay. Achabel was the weakest, often sitting out during the
    games Morrigan and Enoch played. One day Achabel joined in and after some time just fell over, and
    didn't get back up. She was suffering, and so they laid her to rest in the lake. The genetic problem
    caused her great pain. Olma wailed for days, Morrigan and Enoch seemed unaffected. Later when the
    two cubs were playing Olma overheard them inviting Achabel to play, and got upset. She questioned
    them profusely, why would they say such a thing? Their sister was gone. Enoch simply replied that she
    never left, and that she was right here. Olma almost lost it when he pointed to an empty spot. She
    knew it was their element. She told her cubs to never speak of their sister again. Enoch hasn't seen
    Achabel's ghost since then but knows she's out there. Morrigan had a tougher time seeing ghosts, but
    she could hear them more. The cubs suppressed their elements to try and please their mother.

    Morrigan and Enoch almost made it to alduthood with no other mishaps. Almost. Morrigan fell ill.
    Enoch was deeply concerned about his only sibling, but despite his worrying, she became a vegetable.
    Unable to move, and unable to live normally. She was in so much pain her eyes had tears almost all
    the time. Olma tried everything to save her, life wielders, healers, but nothing helped. The genetic
    disease had finally caught up with Morrigan. Olma wished she had known her deceased mate had this,
    she cursed him for it. Enoch knew his mother was only causing more pain to Morrigan. He took her
    to the lake in the middle of the night, and with her last bit of strength Morrigan said, "do it." and he
    slid her paralyzed body into the waters. Soon after Olma came rushing after him and was so angry
    with her son that she clawed him in the face. Enoch cried, he felt rejected by his mother, but he knew
    in his heart he did the right thing. His mother never looked at him the same and was very strict with
    him from then on. As he became an adult, he pushed back at his mother's rule over him. He became
    a fierce opponent and distanced himself from his mother. Olma didn't regret pushing hims away for
    a long time but she did try to reconnect, and while cautious of her, Enoch allowed this. He wanted to
    tell her. But he knew he couldn't. Morrigan often told him he should, even in ghost form she was his
    best friend. Enoch wanted to tell his mother that Morrigan accompanied him places often, and watched
    him battle. She still haunts him. She never rested, and while Enoch loves his sister, he is afraid of
    her constant input. Enoch talks to her often, but hides this from everyone, especially Olma. The elderly
    lion would be distraught, but oh how Enoch wanted to tell her. Tell his mother of the ghosts he sees, the
    ghosts he knows.
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