[Macyduke]

Upon request this this has been extended 24 hours.

[Macyduke]

Closed.
I'll post results either tonight or tomorrow.

[Macyduke]

Holly crap you guy's forums were awesome. I had to ask a buddy of mine for a second opinion before picking a winner to come to a decision with this one. I seriously wish I could give this cet to all of you. -_- First, some comments on you guy's forums, then onto the winner.

Ten- I loved the Yolanthe's personality, her relationship with Tomasso, and your story. The end of your story was both infuriating and interesting- because for one, I love mysteries but for two cliff hangers kill me. I thought her prank was really good- would have had me laughing too if I were her. Your forum as a whole was amazing and well thought out. I hope you reuse this idea at some point because I would seriously love to know what happens next, her backstory with Tom, and the kind of creature she is.

Prophecy- I liked when Annika laid on the floor and sounded out words that didn't look like real ones. I may have to try doing so next week at some point if I don't have anything to do. Your story had a very real quality to it- meaning I could every easily see that happening to someone. It really does kill me to say that I couldn't give something to everyone because I can imagine their surprise when it takes them awhile to brush off Snow's car and would have loved to read about what they did the next day.

And the winner is Mint Chip. I loved how her reason for trying not to laugh showcased her personality. You wouldn't have had to read what you'd had written for her personalty to know who she was. I also really liked how she had to restrain herself from laughing in the face of the guy who could have easily beat the crap out of her after pinning her to the ground. Her backstory seemed tragic at first, but I was glad to see that her mother had survived the storm as well. I questioned whether or not she was alive up until the end where she met Raven half way in an embrace. I seriously can't wait to see what kind of trouble not having a filter gets her into, especially since it's absence already ticked off one of the higher ups in local gang.

[dzo]

Congrats Mint! :)

[dzo]

bought from mint; transfer confirmation here
claiming with the name Tälgat & he/they pronouns

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viscet offspring:

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[magpiemochi.]

viscet offspring:

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