View topic - Viscet #1383 - Robin

My gallery · by **~Ash Wolf~** » Mon Jun 05, 2017 4:37 am

Little bump. Sorry ;^;

My gallery · by **~Trompy** » Mon Jun 05, 2017 10:37 pm

Sorry about being so late on this! I did take a LONG time choosing a winner, it wasn't just sitting! All three of the completed forms were amazing, hence why it took so long to judge, and in the end I had to get picky about what I felt were flaws in order to choose a winner, because I honestly loved all three forms.

The winner is Swoorny!! Your story that incorporated the egg was well-written and the personality flowed and added to the form nicely. As a whole, the form felt complete, and really stuck with me after I read it. It was unique and I wouldn't have thought to use the egg as a way to conceal goods xD

I am also giving a x1 RU (or x2 HM tickets if you wish) to howlingtothestars. Your form left me wanting more. I feel that the story was perfect the way it was before using the extras to continue it; which is where I got disconnected from the story and made the form feel unfinished to me. I would love to see the entirety of this story though, so keep it for future use because it almost won <3

Ash Wolf, your story was sad and adorable, but a little hard for me to read. It just seemed a bit rushed; although I loved the idea you were going with about the egg being a memorial music box. And I loved the little art, so cute.

Thank you all for participating, and making it so hard to judge! Have a nice day, and congratulations on your new viscet!

*Remember that this adopt counts for your spring event adoption slot and does not count towards main thread or nursery adopt limits.

My gallery · by **Hail.** » Tue Jun 06, 2017 1:09 am

Thank you for the runner up and congratulations, Swoorny ^^ I will message you soon, trompy c:

My gallery · by **~Ash Wolf~** » Tue Jun 06, 2017 8:21 am

Congrats guys! Thanks Trompy for the feedback, I'll make sure I but more effort in my forms in the future!

My gallery · by **Swoorny** » Tue Jun 06, 2017 10:16 pm

OH Wow, thank you ! Congratulations howlingtothestars for the RunnerUp!

My gallery · by **Swoorny** » Tue Sep 01, 2020 6:44 am

Gifting to Tenlittlesoldierboys. She Will reply with Name & Gender

My gallery · by **tenlittlesoldierboys** » Tue Sep 01, 2020 6:53 am

I'll take great care of them, I promise ♥
I'm still afraid of his number of offspring....
Name changes to Robin; Gender stays the same c:

My gallery · by **~Trompy** » Tue Sep 01, 2020 11:31 am

I'll try to remember to update that here for you soon Ten! And I have one of his bebahs if you need record of it <3 : Forum/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=3644671