Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby Me?Sarcastic? » Thu Jan 19, 2017 10:01 am

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Owner: me?sarcastic?
Show Name: A Little Sprinkle of Cinnamon
Barn Name: Canelle (French for Cinnamon)
Gender: mare
Age: 5 years
Halter color: As is
Pearl/jewel color (halter): As is
Story/Description/etc: It was a crisp winter's eve. The sun was just falling behind the trees as Canelle made her usual final lap around the pasture. It was her routine to walk the perimeter just before being stalled. Snow fell lightly onto her back and melted into her coat, yet it was too pretty to miss. Just as the last bits of sunshine disappeared behind the trees, Canelle made it back to the gate, expecting to see her owner ready to lead her inside. It may have been pretty, but much, much too cold. Instead, she found her owner standing there with a blanket. This alarmed Canelle. She knew that meant staying outside. She'd seen other owners to it to their horses, but she herself had never stayed outside since her human had no other horses, just one stall for Canelle. She walked up to her human and whinnied. The human opened the gate and moved inside the pasture.

"Sorry, Canelle, but you'll be outside tonight. The new Stallion gets the stable tonight. Now, here you go." Her owner said, putting the blanket on Canelle with ease. She then patted Canelle's nose and turned, walking out of the pasture and closing it once more. Canelle whinnied shrilly once more, but no one came to her. Soon the light snow turned into a heavy blizzard.
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She spent the rest of the night shivering in the shed. Things only got worse from there.

Canelle met the horse who had stolen her stall the next morning. He was a handsome palomino with what looked like snowflake markings. His name was Gold on the Horizon, or simply "Horizon" to most. He was everything she hated: arrogant, cold, unfriendly and rude. Yet, it seemed that the human absolutely loved him. Canelle did have to admit that we was impressively good at Dressage, but every time she tried to compliment him on it and be nice, he'd simply snort and say, "I know." She never even really talked to him as he would always just walk off. Thus, the two of them stayed out of each other's ways. Their owner fairly alternated nights on which each horse would stay in the stall, but seemed more interested Horizon now. Canelle grew to hate the sight of his shiny Palomino coat. However, after a few months, her human seemed to balance out her interest in both horses to even. She also built and new stall so both Friesians could be indoors when needed. Even with all this, though, Canelle always avoided and hated the attention-hogging stallion. (Eventually they'll probably really meet for the first time and she'll find his sweet, gentle side, but for now, she really despises him.)
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Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby Djangolovertje » Sat Jan 21, 2017 9:48 am

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Show Name: DHE Northern Kriss
Barn Name: Kriss
Gender: mare
Age: 3 y/o
Halter color: Keep
Pearl/jewel color (halter): Keep
Story/Description/etc: Once, Kriss was a young, joyful filly, full of life without any pain. Her coat as white as the most beautiful swans that swum in the lake near the meadow where she was grown up. The only difference between the swans and Kriss, was that Kriss had some little tiny spots on her coat. Her mum always said those fleabitten spots would Kriss make a happy and content mare, with all the luck a mare could have and with all the kindness and beauty a mare could have. She grown up for six months together with her mother, and on a random day, she was gone. Kriss felt alone and she thought she could find some new friends. A couple of weeks later, a few new foals arrived, and she befriended most of them. Only one filly didn't want to become friends with Kriss; A black Arabian filly called Navaeh. Navaeh believed she was the most beautiful filly in the meadows. To bully Kriss away, at twilight, Navaeh used some red currants from the bushes and covered Kriss' shoulder in red. When Kriss woke up, her whole shoulder was covered in the paint from the currants, and she didn't want to show herself again. She could not get the red stains away from her shoulders. By the time, she grown up lonely with this 'bloody shoulder,' and she have never forgiven Navaeh for screwing up her beautiful coat, without seeing the beauty that has come with this currant stains.
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Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby CCrow » Sun Jan 29, 2017 5:05 am

Oooh jeez tough decisions ><

The winner is..... Keen!! I thought your form looked lovely and your portrayal of an enemy was not what I was expecting, though it was a pleasant surprise mind you. Very creative ^^ Your writing style was also a joy to read. Congrats!

Djangolovertje, you will be getting a flea-bitten RU :)

me?sarcastic? and Jesdar16 you guys will be getting 2.000 points! Forgive me, I'm afraid that I have to limit myself to 2.000 points otherwise you guys would be rich if I really had my way xD

I am willing to give you guys critiques/suggestions on what I thought you can improve on, just msg me ^^

Sorry for the late judging!
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Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby Keen » Sun Jan 29, 2017 5:08 am

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Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby Me?Sarcastic? » Sun Jan 29, 2017 8:43 am

That works for me! Thank you so much Crow and congrats to the other winners!
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Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby Djangolovertje » Thu Feb 02, 2017 10:18 am

That's sweet Crow! And congrats Keen :3
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Re: #778 - Khimaira Friesians

Postby Keen » Sat Feb 04, 2017 4:18 am

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