Re: Paeus Serpent #1-Open

Postby NARANDA » Wed Nov 16, 2016 11:40 am

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Paeus name;; Umiko (Japanese - "Child of the Sea")
What sort of pet do they have?;; Umiko has a yellow-billed kingfisher companion. Found injured, this lovely little bird can no longer fly or fend for herself, so Umiko took her in and takes care of her. Her name is Venilia and she is a quiet, shy and somewhat nervous bird who is scared of being touched or help by anyone except for Umiko. Umiko loves when the little bird sings for her, and knows that Venilia will only ever sing for her. Umiko is very protective of her little bird like a mother over her child, and always worries about Venilia. (95/100)
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Re: Paeus Serpent #1-Open

Postby Sixbane » Wed Nov 16, 2016 1:22 pm

Closed,winner will be up shortly~
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Re: Paeus Serpent #1-judging

Postby G1 Sunstreaker » Wed Nov 16, 2016 1:42 pm

aa good luckkkk <33
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Re: Paeus Serpent #1-judging

Postby Sixbane » Thu Nov 17, 2016 6:51 am

Sorry on delay! This one will be going to

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I appreciated that you incorporated the lore of the species itself- but mostly I liked the actual interaction between her and her pet. Having them disagree but be stuck together is an interesting character development, and the idea of them being a thorn in her side is a nice change of pace. Well done

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Re: Paeus Serpent #1-Winner up

Postby Mozzy. » Fri Nov 18, 2016 9:50 pm

Thank you so much, I'll keep at her history and let you know how the thorn is doing c;
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