Fera your form was strong, and had lots of extra bits of information that went in depth for this lion. Despite some of the grammar (which i know English isn't your first language) your form was well put together and much enjoyed c: <3 congrats!
Much like Fera's form it was strong and for the personality and history you could easily catch a unique character. Your form however did not include as many extras which really would have added to your form. You did very well despite that, and do hope you plan on applying for another lion in the future <33
Your form had a good start, but unfortunately seemed a bit empty and lacking substance. You could have added much more detail to the personality that would have really boosted your form. Next time be sure to go in depth and not be afraid to really go overboard with info!
Fera wrote:Wait... just to get this right.
Is this my L.o.C. now...?
Kaitlynizer wrote:Ahh congratulations Fera!! <3 <3
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