Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby azemyc » Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:28 am

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Name: Znex
Biggest Failure in 5 words: "I can sit on that."
Explanation: optional (300 max)
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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby Katie_monkey » Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:29 am

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Name: Ggun
Biggest Failure in 5 words: No, I can teach them.
Explanation: Ggun is a very adept teacher, and is known for his ability to train some of the rougher or more easily distracted apprentices. There was one such Yearling that was causing trouble amongst the pack, disrespecting higher ranks, minor thefts, harassing other yearlings and pups. The other savants warned Ggun about the young miscreant, but they also secretly hoped that the youth would want to be a hunter, and that Ggun would be the one to teach him. Luckily for them, the yearling did choose to go into training as a hunter, and Ggun had grown proud of his reputation among the pack, and gladly took them in.
The yearling wasn't much of a hassle, not any more than some of the tougher apprentices he had taken before, so one evening, a short while before dusk, Ggun decided to take the yearling on a small hunting excursion to help him get some (literal) field training. They were both skilled with their power, and each of them hard workers, so they were able to catch many rabbits and other small animals with ease. Soon Ggun was preparing to take the bounty back, to share it with the pack, when he felt a sharp pain at the side of his head. When he woke up later, it was dawn, and he was bleeding from a scratch on the side of his head, and all the food was gone. He was weak, and it was a struggle, but he was able to get back to the pack, where he was able to get the proper treatment. The yearling was never seen again, and Ggun began being much more selective when picking his apprentices.
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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby yoon. » Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:32 am

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N A M E ;
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His name's origin comes from a forest
where the sunlight is dim and the sky
is covered vanishing souls.One step
into this forest and your captured in
a maze of unknown broken hearts.

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B I G G E S T F A I L U R E
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welcome my crumbled nightmare
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E X P L A N A T I O N ;
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The Xholis can be explained with a
very common metaphor."Sometimes
Sadness is an open book. You can
read it and hope for it to end...But
sometimes just sometimes. The last
pages does not exist" From the de-
sign sheme of the Xholis i would give
him traits of hopelessness, Because
the pattern could represent foggy
woods and woods could resemble
his crowded emotions

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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby yeena » Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:46 am

    Username: d-dave.
    Name: Salem
    Biggest Failure in 5 words: 'fear regret more than failure'
    Explanation: Salem played it dirty once to get to where he is now. He was a tiny thief in his younger years and had mastered the skill of taking others food and kills and acting like they were of his own. The missing food reported by the others were always dubbed as taken by some other wild animal that had been looking for a meal. Making it short and easy to understand, he cheated his use for his own rank and managed to keep his position because of his theft.

    Over the years he has grown into a true hunter and these are just simple vague (and regretted) memories to him now.
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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby Moorray » Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:53 am

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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby higgle » Fri Jul 03, 2015 8:54 am

Username: Crystal River
Name: Storm
Biggest Failure in 5 words: "Hunting at night is fun!"
Explanation: You can see where that is going....
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Postby pep » Fri Jul 03, 2015 9:44 am

        username pep
        name tonraq 'a tiny man; a spirit'
        biggest failure in five words "don't worry, i'll be safe!"
        explanation he couldn't hold on
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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby plaegii » Fri Jul 03, 2015 10:36 am

      Username: my lord;
      Name: Stalingrad
      Biggest Failure in 5 words: Perhaps lack of anger management.
      Explanation: 300 words exactly. c;

      Why was everyone sitting around? Debating. Arguing. Stalingrad had no patience for it. See; his pelt was cool and dark, but his temper was as hot as the amber color of the gems in his forehead. So he moved away, padding ahead with a brisk stride and determined set to his jaw. Fine- while everyone chattered, he'd get it over with.

      He came upon the poor animal, limping and blood dribbling from it's nose. He looked to the elk- so large, those horns sharpened and deadly. Did he really want to do it? Yes. Those... pups had done this to it. Scared it so badly, it had fallen and injured itself. Now they were back there, more concerned over the little trouble makers than the animal who lay here struggling. Insolent little brats.

      So maybe he wasn't very kid friendly... but still. Lips peeled back from sharp ivory teeth, stance growing wide in preparation and gems sparking as he readied himself. What he hadn't been expecting was the fawn. Little, mousy brown hide still spotted. It's hard head, nubs only just appearing above it's large ears, bashed into his shoulder and sent him staggering. He stumbled and fell, oblivious to the pale yellow eyes that watched him. His weight crashed, tongue poking between his wide open maw and a yipe tearing through his vocals. He lay there a moment, caught off guard and dazed with a vine curled around his throat and black haunches laying in the mud. Above him, he saw the lithe dark russet Xholi once again. This time her yellow eyes were full of laughter, and his lighter colored ears burned in shame. Moments later, summoned by his terrified yipe, the others came. This time with barks of laughter and the childish flailing of the smug fawn.
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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby the legend leg » Fri Jul 03, 2015 10:47 am

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    username: legend-
    name: Airablescent Aira
    biggest failure in five words:
    she forgot who she was.
    explanation: the people she
    began to hang out with, were not
    as all as she thought they were.

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    in depth explantion: Aira had some of the best friends a girl could have, but one day, she threw it all away to become more popular and liked. She knew she wasnt one to pop out in a crowd, but as a young xholi, she didnt care. Growing older into the teen years, she progressively got more emotional, cared about what she looked like, and cared about how other people saw her. Changing her interest, what she did as activities, and actions, her friends noticed and didnt like it, they knew it wasnt the true Airablescent. One day, the most liked kind in her area approached her, and asked Aira what she did to her gems. Did you clean or polish them or something? Of coarse, she said yes, but right then, is when her personality changed completely. She grew more and more away from her friends, and soon, they were never seeing each other for weeks. They all saw each other at the river bed, and glared at one another. They talked, and her friends told her what she was doing wrong and how she wasnt herself. Ever since that day, its her biggest life failure, but her biggest life lesson.


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Re: XHOLI 30 [must be 5 words exactly]

Postby angelshy » Fri Jul 03, 2015 11:38 am

Amazing design >w<
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