[foxxbreath]

Res uvu

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//Mark
oh dang kc I almost don't want to enter if you are but this design is to cute to completely pass up on

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Is there a small chance this can be extended for a day, I didn't have time last night to do my forum </3

[NARANDA]

I would also like a small extension if possible please!

[PurpleKakashi]

Extending till January 19th!

[PurpleKakashi]

-closed-

[WolfTheHuman]

Good luck everyone!

[SchnaDin]

yay, good luck! ^-^

[PurpleKakashi]

And here is the final judgements, remember this is all just feed back I'm leaving. I do not mean for it to come off as, mean, rude, ect.. This is to help you grow and get better at making forms <3

Username: Spiritstar3
Name: Dean
Gender: Male
Personality: This handsome young male has protective gear, because he does much hunting (ha, ha, like the Hunter from Supernatural hunts Demons and such) of dangerous things, because he is smart. Yet, he sometimes needs to be saved and so he has a Guardian called Castiel. He is set in his ways, but will accept the help of Cas. It would appear this boy has a special place in his heart for Cas. He is also a softy, though won't show that side much.

I feel like I'm missing a reference to Supernatural -I don't watch it though. So I don't really get it ^^' there is personality but it feels a little cluttered, I wish you'd gone deeper with Castiel as well as we don't know anything about this companion.

Username: loki.
Name: Zora
Gender: Female
Personality:
Positive - Courageous, intelligent, independent, loyal
Negative - Abrupt, devious, fiery, strong-willed

I've seen you around a few times, I really like the form set up however it is very simple and easy to read and you made the personality super easy to read.

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- Ｈ Ｏ Ｔ Ｓ Ｕ Ｍ Ａ
---SHORT TEMPERED | IMPULSIVE | DISTRUSTFUL
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username:
SchnaDin

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gender:
male

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Hotsuma is very short tempered, impulsive,
distrustful to others and keeps his distance to
other unknown Rukami until he gets to know them
better and build up trust.
In some situations he also can be very agressive
but those moments are rare.
Hotsuma is the bearer of God's voice.
His father called God was the leader of a great pack
and his first born son should replace him as the alpha.
In this pack, the leader's voice is loud, strong,
selfconfident and powerful.
God's voice was passed on to Hotsuma and so he gets
called 'God's voice' from the other members.
Hotsuma declined being the alpha after his father
because he doesn't want to have such responsibility
and wasn't used to so much attention.
As a little kit he was always in the forrest playing
hide and seek or tag with others or the animals.
Since this day where he declined his duty as the next
leader his father abandoned him and only because of
his mother they still have little contact with him.

But since the day she died due to a bad disease
he hasn't had any contact anymore.
Hotsuma's personality is shadowed by his past.
While protecting another young Kami, he ended up
attacking a few of the younger Rukami,
which then isolated him from everyone else.
Afterwards, he attempted to leave the pack without
anybody's knowledge and fell in a deep depression
because of his isolation.
The young Kami he rescued tried to stop him with all
he's got and suffered some deep injuries from Hotsuma.
He finally managed to stop and persuade him to stay.
But since then Hotsuma blames himself for the young
Kami's scars and is scared of hurting someone again.
He does not open up to others easily,
with exception to the young Kami whom he trusts a lot.
Hotsuma trusts him with his life and is very protective
towards him.
The only one who seems to understand Hotsuma's
short-tempered personality seems to be him.

........................Hotsuma made those selfmade protectives because of some scars he wants to cover with them.
...................And also needs them for fighting, when he protects his dearest friend of enemies or danger

A song, which could be played,
when Hotsuma and the young Kami are together

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Very nice set up. I like the story/history you gave me, but it feels really cluttered :< I also think hearing positive or even neutral traits would have really set this over the edge. (in a good way)

Username: TheToyMaker

Name: Ana, meaning 'grace'.

Gender: Female

Personality: Ana is the sweetest kami you'd ever meet. She is kind and generous, along with incredibly beautiful and insanely graceful. She seems like a friendly spirit to other kamis, floating around and giving gifts. She's an amazing dancer, but never dances in front of anyone, for the fear of being judged. She feels at home in her forest cove, and loves to play around the birds and trees.

Backstory: There's a solid reason for why Ana's name was chosen. From the moment she was born, she'd always been graceful, kind, generous, and mannerful. She'd always mind her own business and never attempt to anger anyone, unlike a few others of her kind. Her parents always thought she was just quiet, but eventually they realized something- she was mute. They tried to hide Ana's unfortunate choice, but eventually everyone found out. Ana was horribly bullied and tortured, but still, she never spoke a word or made a single sound. Her parents tried to protect her, but eventually all three of them agreed to pretend that Ana had run away. That night, with a small pack in one hand and the chilly wind in another, Ana set out to forget her scars and begin a new life.

The Story Of Her Bark Armor And Piercings:
After running away, Ana spent weeks trying to find a place where noone would find her. Eventually, she came across the perfect place- a huge forest bustling with birds and butterflies. It was the best home she'd ever had, and Ana loved it. Anyway, when Ana started living there, she made her home in a massive tree. Birds there weren't scared of her, and happily chipped around her all day. She was so happy, completely at peace. The horrible pain she had felt when she was bullied was much less than what she felt when she came home to see that her tree was no longer standing, but lay parallel to the ground, never to stand tall again. The tree had died of old age, but that didn't comfort Ana. Eventually, she realized she had to move on, and in honor of her tree, made bark armor from it to put on her forearms. She didn't use this for armor; instead she stood still with her arms stretched out, pretending to be a tree and letting the birds land on her just like they would the tree. Suddenly, a miracle happened. A little green sprout popped up out of the ground, right where the old tree had stood. Ana took this as a sign, and began to help the little tree grow. And grow it did, at an alarmingly fast rate. Ana began to wear smoothened bone piercings to count the years, and now she resides in the new tree as happily as before.

Some fun facts:
~Ana is not mute by choice or even completely mute. Her voice box was messed up from birth, but she can make one sound- a bird chirp.

~She thinks she can relate to a tree. Graceful, beautiful, kind, and tore down because they are unable to protest.

~ She is very musical. Often she'll just find a few sticks and tap them against a rock, creating a beat that she and the birds will chirp to.

I got kinda carried away... Oh well. I really want her though! :3

WIP

As simple as this is, I love it. Her personality is adorable and her story is very building. I don't know if you did it on purpose but the butterflies in her home tie into her back markings really well, as they're butterfly wings.

Username: WolfTheHuman
Name:Beetee
Gender: Gender
Personality:
The Inventor
Ever since he was a boy he was facinated in improving things, he was always cought fiddleling with tree branches and string. He loved the trees and natual ways of making things. And often used bark in his inventions. (Hence the armour) he focuses on weapons and combat. However he is not much of a fighter himself. He would often develop Armor for other Rukimis or new imagige weapons. He does not talk much though. He mind is constantly on his work and doesn't we pay attension on much else.
Best inventions:
-A spear that has the ability to catch the sunlight making it burst out in flames
-A sharp Flint sword and a stone so if you slash it against the sword many Sparks shall come out
-Bone armour that defends the most important body parts.
-A pack made of leather, very easy to squish down to pocket size. It can hold swords and shields very well.
-A highly strong shield made of elk bone and stone. It has a nice strap the can comfortable go around the shoulder.
Worst/Failed Inventions
every success starts with a failure
-armour that contained red dyed water, hoping to convince the enemy they are in pain but it was too unconvincing
-Armour that catches the sunlight, like the spear but it just burns you a lot
-a small wooden machine like thing useing cogs, a dagger attached to it. It was meant to stab the enemy in the foot but took much to long to get everything ready and you would be dead by the time it's ready.
Poem
Ones potential is so huge, and so vast,
Yet, why is it, that so many fail, and usually come last?,
So few truly succeed, that when they do, others are jealous and totally aghast,
Let’s all believe in success, and I promise that failure will be part of the past.

The things you think, and the things you believe,
If they are true, then those are the things that you will achieve,
But if your thoughts are false, or they are used to deceive,
You’ll be stabbed in the back, and that is a promise that you had better believe.

Get rid of depression, worry and fear,
Because success is so often so very, very near,
Tell your subconscious , “success is mine”, and tell it to hear,
Remind it often, then success will be yours, that is a promise, my dear.

Just ask the “divine”, for whatever you desire,
For happiness or abundance, or anything else to which you aspire,
It’s now time to succeed, so go ahead, set your goals, and light that fire,
Do it with passion, and I promise you this, you’ll soar higher and higher.

The idea of him being an inventor is really cool, however as much as you added I feel like all you've told me is that he invents things. Not about him as a Rukami.

Username: sava94
Name: Kaia
Gender: Female
Personality: She headstrong yet likable. She is willing to fight when necessary but would prefer to fight with her words. To her, physical violence is necessary yet annoying. She thinks the world would be much easier if no one thought.

I like what you did here and I can see where you were going, but I feel like it needs more.

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Alright so our winner is TheToyMaker! Congrats <3 and thank you all for entering keep at them!

[SchnaDin]

i do not understand why a form which is still in progress after the closing date will be judged? I read somewhere that those forms can not be accepted but it looks like, that every 'artist' choose it by it's own, do they?