[Spiritstar3]

Oh my God, you people all do so much better then me...
Might ahve to drop out)

[The One & Only Vapor]

dropping out very very sadly; i can't compete with any of this haha. <3

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

Yeah, I'm rather busy at the moment stuck on my phone as well as my laptop is out if order, so this will be extended till dec. 20

[The One & Only Vapor]

oh, thank you so much! <33

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

sorry guys, i'll end this in 3 hours

[Spiritstar3]

Dropping out, sorry

(I want one! But I have wb and keep forgetting and such, so I cant win one...}

[eleutheromaniac.]

Good luck to all! Yay! I'm so exited to see who winds this wonderous beauty!

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

What you see is not necessary the only thing there is is.
The coldness of ones eyes that is spotted can hide the flame inside.
A warmth only seen by those who don't see with their eyes only.

There's so much more than there's to see

Owner: Glispa
Name: Stuck in the depths of the void
Nickname: Voi
Gender: Stallion

[A stallion as black as the void itself was stood tall amongst the lower ranked of his herd, his mane shimmering in the colours of a late sunset and his hooves neatly placed alongside one another. He was known under the name of Stuck in the depths of the void, cause of the sole reason he was like a black hole threatening to pull in anyone who attempted to get to close to him, dragging them into the darkness and pain his soul held. He was a stallion known for his temper but yet charming ways, walking his way amongst the herd in silence as long as no one attempted to bother him. But barely no one dared to stand up against him so thus he was mostly left without the glances and voices of those around him being directed anywhere in his direction. He had fought his way into the herd, spilling crimson from those who opposed him. Which in turn had gotten him a place amongst the others, a place amongst the lower ranked, but a place nonetheless.

The signal was given and the herd moved on with their hooves silently clip-clopping against the solid stone ground beneath them, sening silent echoes in all directions. The deep crimson coloured eyes of the stallion stayed steady focused on the path before him whilst his ears kept flickering around to make up for the loss in eyesight. Voi trudged on along side the herd until he moment his sight was drowned in pure light, shocking him to the point of stopping. The nervous snorting of some of the equines around him could be heard echoing into the newly opened clearing before them. But it was not only the bright light shining through the collapsed roof of the cave that filled their vision with the brightness they where now experiencing. The ground and everything around them in the clearing was cowered in a layer of a soft white type of dust.

Some of the younger individuals of the herd took the steps needed to place their hooves or push their muzzles down into the soft whiteness covering the ground. Just to quickly pull back in fear when one of them blew air down into it, making white flakes fly in all directions. The leader of the herd was quick to interfere and called out for the herd to continue on. One after another they moved on, but Voi remained frozen in place. Once most of the herd had continued on into the next tunnel he stepped forward towards the white field before him. When all four of his hooves where deep down into the soft yet cold substance he stopped, to then tilt his head slightly forward in an attempt to make out something else than just whiteness. But when that failed he leaned down and gently pushed his muzzle down into the cold.

With every breath Voi let out sent the white flakes closest to him fluttering of a few inches to then lie down to rest on the ground once again. He slowly lifted his head to then stand staring down into the void of white just barely catching on to the sounds around him. Then it was like everything snapped and his legs collapsed from underneath him and he fell down into the cold, just to then throw himself down in his side and start rubbing his head around in the white dust. The movement of his body threw white flakes in all directions and all over himself.
he braced himself and then threw his legs up into the air, using the momentum they had gained to roll over to the other side. Loud snorts could be heard from him as he rolled around in the white dust like some foal.

After having gotten practically soaked in the white dust he quickly pulled his legs down underneath him and pushed himself up on all four again. He kicked out with one of his legs down into the whiteness to send another storm of flakes flying and he was just about to continue playing around when he spotted a blunt shape of colour to the side of his vision. He quickly gathered himself to then calmly walk off into the direction the rest of the herd had gone, silently ignoring the stares that was given from the remaining members of the herd in the clearing. He didn't even bother to shake off the patches of white flakes clinging to his mane as he walked on following the blunt post of colour that was the herd he belonged in. The previous coldness in his eyes completely gone.

Mostly done here, might still edit some stuff later

Congrats! I really liked your story as it gave me a more solid look on his personality and lifestyle. Take care of him!



@Pete rip <3 ; Your form was well laid out and would have likely won, but in the story you had things happen that can't which is why I couldn't let you have this adopt.

@~Ibuki Mioda~ ; Your drawing was beautiful but overall your form was very bare-boned and with a little more to your story you'd have been able to win as well.

[eleutheromaniac.]

What was the main thing that ruined the story?

[ｃｒｕｍｐｌｅｄ ｗｉｎｇｓ]

What was the main thing that ruined the story?

It keeps getting colder, but it doesn't bother me much. I never really liked the heat. All of my friends are all warm cozy colors, and so I knew there was something more to my coloring. As the night falls I walk alone to my favorite waterfall. I go here every winter. This winter its different. Its glowing, crazy glowing. The rock wall that used to be behind it is completely disappeared. The water from the fall is completley coming from no where. Its just... There. It seems to be drawing me in, calling my name. I hesitate to take a step in, but I do anyways. Its freezing, but I keep walking. I can't control it, I just want to walk in. Then my tail begins to shake. What once was purple on my mane and tail became and icy blue, almost as glowing as the water. It was amazing. It wasn't painful, so of coarse, I was happy. I jumped in the glowing water, sending it everywhere just as I had with Snow. I massage my back under the waterfall and dive into the depths of the water.

It gets later, and I lay on the bank. I struggle to stay awake, but my heavy lids can't stay open anymore. When I open my eyes, Snow is gone, the water is normal, and the sun beats on my back. There was not even a trace of Snow anywhere. But I notice three red berries and two leaves. Holly. It was a goodby gift. I scurry to look at my tail, but it hasn't changed. It still glowed with the beautiful colors of the new winter.