[.: SongBird :.]

Username;; .: SongBird :.

Mako name;; Jett (often called 'Raven')

Mako Gender;; Male

Why do they have a mean look on their face;;

The mean look is always plastered on his face, even if he's happy, but being happy is rare. His parents didn't like his attitude and looks, so she locked him in the shadows. 6 Months later, Jett's parents gave birth to a bright young girl, who had a rich future ahead of her. Of course, the young girl asked if she had any brothers or sisters. Not getting an answer, she explored the house a little more than she could. She went down to the cellar and found his red eyes. Jett released his anger and became a murderer. He was named after these birds that observe, as if lurking and waiting for their next victim : The Raven. He grew up un-social, sad and was always forgotten.

[koegami]

''Lesson Zero'' short story by me starring my other mako Cian

Sultan moved down the hallways of his college campus, looking into room
after room, in search of the one who thought that they could ever get away
with picking on him and cracking jokes about his usual coincidence with the
mineral Obsidian. his hunt was cut short when he rounded the corner of the
hallway and met face to face with Cian, another college student that seemed
to always be in the right place at the wrong time. this time he seemed to be
upset over something, but sultan didn't know what. the only thing he knew
was that he bumped into him when he was walking down his hallway.

''watch it kid'' Sultan hissed as Cian backed up and clutched his books with
both hands.

Sultan saw this move as an act of defiance and knocked the books out of his
hands. Cian gasped and backed up, reaching down to pick up his books. he
wasn't making eye contact with him, Sultan again thought this was an act of
defiance and used his booted foot to shove cian over. so he was sprawled out
on the floor, Sultan's boot on his chest. Cian looked at him for a grave moment
before breaking eye contact and looking down the hall. sultan there were tears
in the other student's eyes, something sultan took as an act of weakness and
inferiority. sultan again smirked and stood up to his full height.

''next time, i suggest you watch where your going'' he hissed as he walked past
him. and down the hall again. it was late, after class hours and he was ready
for some down time, forgetting about his hunt, he walked out of campus and
towards the local pub a few blocks away from where he was. running into that
baby wasn't going to be a problem now. Sultan felt sated for now, until he felt
the need to resume his ''paused'' hunt, his supposed target was safe for now.


O U T E R . C R I T E R I A

. Entrant Username xxx my username is general koi, hello.

. Connection to him xxx when i first saw him, i was highly attracted to his pallet, and the glassy sheen of his fur and mane, how his horns were curved and how he resembled the stone obsidian. he reminds me little of the black obsidian with no crystals and the snowflake obsidian with white crystals inside. but not only were both of them apart of the connection but some history as well. the Aztecs used obsidian shards to slice open human sacrifices in order to appease the gods that they worshipped. here, I'm worshipping him as a god, and for this, I'm working to gain his trust and not for the sole purpose of him becoming mine, but so then i can worship him more. as like the Aztecs do with their own gods.

. How many owned xxx currently, i own only one makoatl, and one that i am very greatful to have in my possession. his name is [url=xx]c[/url]ian. and for my second makoatl, i would love to make this one.

. How many tried for xxx i have tried for many at a time, but i cannot recall the exact amount i have tried for or have wanted to try for but couldn't.

. Reaction if i won xxx to be honest, i would be extremely greatful to own this boy and call him mine, but i would be just as happy for him to go to a greater owner than i as well.

. Words to Contest Host xxx i want to say thank you. for making him, for letting us adopt him, and just for the chance to let out imagination shine. and sorry about the length, i really did let loose and try to impress you. not with length, but with character. so sorry in advanced.


B A S I C S

. Full Name xxx this boy's name is Sultan Connors
. Nickname(s) xxx most just call him ''the hound''
. Species Sex xxx Sultan is of a male sex
. Character species xxx Sultan is a makoatl

. Species sexuality xxx Sultan is a homoromatic asexual. he has a preferance toward males, but is in wish or need to have a relationship at this time, or possibly ever.

. Actual Species Age xxx Sultan is about 5 years of age as a makoatl
. Species Human/oid Age xxx Sultan would be 28 as a human/humanoid
. Character's Birthday xxx his birthday is unknown, but some say its on Black Friday.


INTERNAL . FEELINGS

. Character's overview personality xxx Sultan Is basically a shell inside a husk. he has a very hard time ever letting anyone else see his true emotions, or expressions. he isn't as soft on the inside like most people would expect with someone like him coming from the background he did. he is more of a tough guy who looks for trouble whenever, however, and where ever he wants. and he doesn't care whoever he chooses to be his lucky victim, he just ''attacks'' them for whatever reason, even for no reason. with his love for bar joints, he does have that demeanor of hes in charge he runs the show and no one tells him otherwise. his once aspect he tries to roll out and stamp into everybody's memory is that he should be feared. he's a bad boy and that's that. he does pick fights with people, either when hes downright wasted, or when hes completely sober, it's proven that he gets into at least 3 fights everyday and 2/3 of them are from bullies and target people, the other 1 is usually unexpected and they instigated the fight, and he finished it. he tends to show his ''dominance'' around the men at the bar, picking fights to them, challenging them to drink-offs and seeing who can win a game of pool. many other challenges included. hes not a pretty boy, but atleast he has somewhat of a heart.

Why do they have a mean look on their face? xxx to be honest, its from his ''history'' all of the blood shed and being looked at as a weapon of sacrifice that the Aztecs used for their own sacrifices, hes had enough. with college teaching that subject over and over again, and people picking on him and making jokes about him, his patience and humor is shot. most of the bullies that do attempt to pick on him or crack jokes about him end up dead on the college campus steps the next day, and Sultan is no where to be found. and others who attempt to crack jokes, for example when he walks by a group of people and one screams ''aah! please, don't sacrifice me to the gods!'' and begin to laugh, usually do end up dead on the college campus steps the next day as well. but as much as this seems bad, he actually hates the thought of death upon another person. but its when he looses control of himself is when it happens. he'd much rather be hanging out at a bar and drinking beers than killing people who think that they can get away with picking on him.

T H E . C A R E E R

. What career xxx Sultan has no career, but he does work over at the local pub a few blocks from his college campus. he could end up becoming a hired mercenary, or a free lancer. but he will never be under the complete control and mercy of someone. its them being controlled and st the mercy of him.

. When did he choose xxx he hasn't exactly chosen this career, but he does know that if he chose this it would be when he realizes that this is the path he wants to go down. as for that he still doesn't known an exact date.

. What made him choose xxx what may make him choose this is maybe because of the fact that he has been bulled and this killing is a sign of release for him, and small things like bullying can trigger this in him. he wouldn't exactly want to be defined as some sort of ax murder, but he could be defined as some justice seeker with a bad past and scars to prove it.

. Childhood memories xxx the only child hood memories that influence this is the major fact that he was never trusted as a child, everyone thought pf him as weird or scary or even not makoatl. although that didn't trigger the killings, it did influence it, and then when enough influences ''filled the jar'' so to speak, did he begin to do this. and all his child life did he do this, and he kept it bottled up inside of him for year after year after year.


T H E . B A G

. What is in the bag xxx inside his bag, contains a few items. one is his notebook. containing a list of every student he targeted, killed, watches, encounters, and injured. making note of every time he met them. each time, was called a lesson, and he always started from zero. its a journal of everyone he met that day abd he kept careful logs about it. once he has killed that person, if they bullied, picked on or teased/ joked with, he rewrites each log with their name and makes a file of it. almost like a criminal file in a court house, pictures, info everything.

. What is the bag made of xxx the bag is made of fine black leather and valuable silver.its very hard to find another just like it.

. How big is it xxx the bag is like a normal over the shoulder bag, adjustable to fit his needs.

. When did he get it xxx he bought it at the starting of college, just to carry around his books and murder supplies.

. What condition is it in xxx the condition is great, there are some blood stained patches, but its nothing major like ripped holes or anything like that.

. How much stuff can it hold xxx it can hold many various items from paperclips to his locked box of muder items that weighs about 2.7 pounds.


these are my words in a time of anger: ''rest in pieces'' - written here Sultan

[Clara Erassari]

Possible reserve~ <3

[craig?]

Username;; Spottedpuppi
Mako name;; Roid(Roy-dah)
Mako Gender;; Male
Why do they have a mean look on their face;;
Cause he ran out of reasons to have a mean look on his face obviously

[Icescape]

Username;; Icescape
Mako Name;; Itztli Taygeta Aukanai'i
Mako Name Meaning;; Itztli - obsidian (knife), Taygeta - star name in Taurus, Aukanai'i - strong warrior
Mako Gender;; Male
Why do they have a mean look on their face;; Itztli doesn't like company of any sort. He was bullied when he was small which caused him to dislike anyone who came near him. Most bullied him because they were afraid of him which caused Itztli to make faces to keep them away which caused even more fear. Itztli never liked his family either. They were mean to him. They didn't act like parents, shown when they would hit him for misbehaving. The only family members he actually talks to is his younger sister Maia and rarely his younger cousin Toanui.
Known Family Members;; Unnamed mother and father, Maia - younger sister, Toanui (Toa) - younger cousin
Favorite Hobby;; Itztli's favorite thing to do is practice with a sword. He doesn't hurt anyone with it. Practicing different things with a sword just makes him feel safer so he can defend himself.
Other Hobbies;; Studying the stars; carving different things from stone, minerals,and sometimes but rarely wood; jumping to improve how high he can jump like jumping up to touch a branch, meditation
Quotes;; "Strength does not come from winning. Your struggles develop your strengths. When you go through hardships and decide not to surrender, that is strength." - Arnold Schwarzenegger
"We fear violence less than our own feelings. Personal, private, solitary pain is more terrifying than what anyone else can inflict." - Jim Morrison

[dr pepper.]

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[delani]

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username;; Alei
mako name;; Onyx
name meaning;; onyx is a stone, usually recognized as a very dark, almost black, smooth gem. the simple meaning is "dark stone."
mako gender;; male
why do they have a mean look on their face;; onyx can't find his own happiness, and never has. he goes about his life, but has a very pessimistic view on it. the glass is always half-empty in his eyes. he hates even the thought of being happy, perhaps an outcome of never having experienced it before. instead, he continues through his life in a slow, irritated manner, huffing about and giving crippling glares to those who try to show him any happiness. onyx prefers the isolation, as even being in the presence of others gets him so exasperated he boils inside. instead, he lives on his own in a deserted part of the sea. he fumes at anyone who comes across his abode, so be wary to approach his dwelling. he prefers his gloomy moods and scowl to any company, and is not known to speak often, and only then to snap at some lost traveler.
known relationships;; he is not known to associate himself with any other makoatls, apart from one, Aisling. their single conversation was limited in words, encompassing only about half a dozen mumbled nonsense, but it was obvious that she understood some, if not but a tiny bit, of onyx's dark soul. since, he has only seen her in passing, but the two always exchange a small nod of respect. no feelings between the two other than an odd since of acquaintanceship, but it is all he has.
hobbies;; onyx collects lost items. more specifically, lost momentos. he scavenges around the bottom of the sea, digging in shipwrecks and in the sand to find pieces of others. dolls, journals, broken toys- things that have all caused sadness by being lost.

[The One & Only Vapor]

dyign

possible reserve

[Sixbane]

Since I accidentally fell asleep and am late/there also are a lot of unfinished forms; ( i meant to give a one hour warning);I'll extend this one until 8 PM tomorrow(The 6th) EST.

[Sixbane]

This one is now closed for judging