[.starfish]

Her Name:
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Res

[RedFur1322]

Her Name: Carmine

Her Past (max. 700 words):
The wind kissed Carmine's face as she stood out in a field littered with flowers as far as the eye can see. She loved the feel of the wind tugging at her mane and smiled a wide grin the almost reached her ears. Her paws lifted into the air and she ran, feeling as if she could fly over every field in the world, energy coursing through her. "I will never stop smiling! Never!" She cried as she glided over the colorful flowers.

She hadn't noticed that she ran so far into a green forest filled with moss and stumps. The sunlight filtered through the trees, shining on everything in a refreshing scene. She watched in awe as butterflies flew overhead, spread butterfly dust over the ground as they slowly flapped their way through life. Carmine wanted to go through life slowly and gracefully too. She wanted to cherish every little thing that happens.

Carmine went deeper into the forest until she came across a cool cave. It glowed with magic and mystery, and Carmine could not resist to go in it. She kept walking forward, occasionally casting a sidelong glance and studying her surroundings before heading forward again. At last, she came onto a crystal, it's blue shine seeping through the cave.

"Welcome...to the cave of beginnings." A voice cried out, low and eerie. "Not many make it here. You must have talent to endure..." The voice sneered hatefully. Carmine jumped back, suddenly aware that the crystal was talking to her. "What do you want with me?" Carmine protested bravely. The crystal glowed again. "I know you want something... You have proved you can handle it if you got it. State your wish." The crystal boomed. Carmine gulped and stepped forward. "I want to go through life slowly, like a butterfly. I want to be able to cherish everything that happens around me, so that I never miss anything."

The crystal laughed a deep, hearty laugh. "Are you sure...? There has always been... A consequence." Carmine didn't hear those last words. She was positive this is what she wanted. "This is what I want." She said, he voice no longer shaking with fear, but with excitement and power. "Grant it to me now."

The crystal shook and glowed, growing brighter by the second. Carmine took a step back, wary of this new change. Suddenly, the crystal beamed, and a bright light was heading straight for Carmine. She screamed, but her legs were frozen in place. The light engulfed her vision, and she had no were to run. All she saw was white.

"You have freed me, dear Carmine. I will haunt you forever..."

Suddenly, she was back in her own world, laying on that very field that she played in before. She got up and looked around warily. Nothing had changed. She felt no different, and the only thing that felt strange was that everything seemed shorter.
She walked back home, no longer jolly and carefree, but burdened and confused. She didn't know what went wrong. Suddenly, she slipped in a puddle, and was looking face down. She gasped. She had grown! Not just a little, but a lot. She was a teen now! She rushed back home, eager to tell her mom and dad.

When she returned home, her parents weren't there. "Miss Carmine..." A voice said from behind her. She turned around to see a young pseudo at her door. "I am afraid your parent are gone. They died in the same Accident while you were away..." Carmine gasped and ran out the door, back to the puddle.

She watched as the wish came into full affect. "You never wanted to stop smiling..." A voice said in her head as her design changed into a perpetual smile. Suddenly, she felt slow... Like she had a limit on everything. A burden that slows her down mentally, slowing her every step. Stop, stop!" She cried at the voice.

Ever since then, she has walked in a slow fashion due to the wish, and is always looking for the spirit who cursed her, so that she can ask him to fix all the wrongs, her pain overwhelming her soul.
(700 words)

[rochester.]

Her Name:
Her Past (max. 700 words):

[Aizui]

Name Shri meaning "diffusing light" in Sanskrit

Rising of Satanic Fear — Shri’s Past

Sudden destruction reeked the deserted floor of once known vegetation. Shades of evergreens once lavished in the terrain; creating a safe haven. Bright bulbs of pearl petals bloomed seasons before, creating a bed of comfort, but no longer. Whispers of crackles dance along the stars intertwined with warmth. Fire burnt ashes dig at the darkness trying to grasp for one more taste of life, as the sizzling sunset flares into the night air.

Crisp charcoal hued residue burst into the atmosphere, as hot footed claws dug against the Earth. Each step furthered with distance, while leaving soiled prints behind. Murmurs of low tones bounced amongst the charred area, as eyes shade of blood scanned. Fangs from the beast revealed allowing the fur to part in an upward direction. Evil-struck eyes narrowed and darted towards the lands before her. A small docile like reptilian ventured from a cracked rooted bed. Its light color vivid against the blackness. Its face was struck from horror as the trauma occurred. Barely alive the venturing lizard attempted to figure a way of survival.

Clouds of smoke filtered disappearing from sight, exposing the lizard’s danger. Colored of burnt violet, and crimson tints patterned along each scale; from face to tail. Its serious expression flooded from the eery illumination presented. Decorative horns stained the being’s head while venom fur arose from its spine. Horror struck the creature small in stature frankly darted up on dead woodlands and under crushed stones. The brightness of its fur dulled with the nicking of ash. The cover; naturally given to the young, was proved ineffective for the glowing red pupils peered within and swiftly located the other.

At a disadvantage the pearl furred scale-like animal dove into a chamber of dead bark. Its harsh surface cracking with each paw was placed. In terror its clear eyes closed, its breathing rapidly increased. For a split second no sound broke the barrier, not even the whistle of breath from the doomed youth. Then abruptly horns broke into the bark exposing the area inside the hollowed cavern. Slithering its neck inside the crimson fighter lashed its jaw. Confidence dug at the being as it scraped its paws shredding every piece of protection given.

Minutes became moments as the greater reptile had its teeth digging into the neck of the small. Just as the figure lost its breath a beam of light flared into the sky. Blinding the poison and melting fear into its soul. Blood dripped on the ripped shreds as scarring took over its mouth. With unbearable pain a low growl advanced and her prey became free.

White petals fluttered down from the teeth onto the ash, ever so peacefully. Shockwaves coursed through leveling every bit of emotion into bewilderment. Haunted by the flesh on her face, the figure staunchly wonders silently. The withering tail sways with aggravation, as it stumbles onward. Unbounded and unsatisfied with the illusory snow, the satanic grin still remains. This demon waits for her angel.

Word Count — 498 words

[Aizui]

Was a winner chosen?

[Pachoopi]

Not yet, although I'm nearly done with judging! Sorry, I've been stuck between a couple of forms. nvn;

[koi97]

Well, good luck then ^^

[Pachoopi]

The winner of this Pseudodragon is... RedFur1322! Congrats, I really liked your past for her; very, very unique and interesting to read!

There will be no runners-up this time around, although a close second goes to Aizui! Your form was very well-written, excellent use of imagery to illustrate the plot.

Her Name: Carmine

Her Past (max. 700 words):
The wind kissed Carmine's face as she stood out in a field littered with flowers as far as the eye can see. She loved the feel of the wind tugging at her mane and smiled a wide grin the almost reached her ears. Her paws lifted into the air and she ran, feeling as if she could fly over every field in the world, energy coursing through her. "I will never stop smiling! Never!" She cried as she glided over the colorful flowers.

She hadn't noticed that she ran so far into a green forest filled with moss and stumps. The sunlight filtered through the trees, shining on everything in a refreshing scene. She watched in awe as butterflies flew overhead, spread butterfly dust over the ground as they slowly flapped their way through life. Carmine wanted to go through life slowly and gracefully too. She wanted to cherish every little thing that happens.

Carmine went deeper into the forest until she came across a cool cave. It glowed with magic and mystery, and Carmine could not resist to go in it. She kept walking forward, occasionally casting a sidelong glance and studying her surroundings before heading forward again. At last, she came onto a crystal, it's blue shine seeping through the cave.

"Welcome...to the cave of beginnings." A voice cried out, low and eerie. "Not many make it here. You must have talent to endure..." The voice sneered hatefully. Carmine jumped back, suddenly aware that the crystal was talking to her. "What do you want with me?" Carmine protested bravely. The crystal glowed again. "I know you want something... You have proved you can handle it if you got it. State your wish." The crystal boomed. Carmine gulped and stepped forward. "I want to go through life slowly, like a butterfly. I want to be able to cherish everything that happens around me, so that I never miss anything."

The crystal laughed a deep, hearty laugh. "Are you sure...? There has always been... A consequence." Carmine didn't hear those last words. She was positive this is what she wanted. "This is what I want." She said, he voice no longer shaking with fear, but with excitement and power. "Grant it to me now."

The crystal shook and glowed, growing brighter by the second. Carmine took a step back, wary of this new change. Suddenly, the crystal beamed, and a bright light was heading straight for Carmine. She screamed, but her legs were frozen in place. The light engulfed her vision, and she had no were to run. All she saw was white.

"You have freed me, dear Carmine. I will haunt you forever..."

Suddenly, she was back in her own world, laying on that very field that she played in before. She got up and looked around warily. Nothing had changed. She felt no different, and the only thing that felt strange was that everything seemed shorter.
She walked back home, no longer jolly and carefree, but burdened and confused. She didn't know what went wrong. Suddenly, she slipped in a puddle, and was looking face down. She gasped. She had grown! Not just a little, but a lot. She was a teen now! She rushed back home, eager to tell her mom and dad.

When she returned home, her parents weren't there. "Miss Carmine..." A voice said from behind her. She turned around to see a young pseudo at her door. "I am afraid your parent are gone. They died in the same Accident while you were away..." Carmine gasped and ran out the door, back to the puddle.

She watched as the wish came into full affect. "You never wanted to stop smiling..." A voice said in her head as her design changed into a perpetual smile. Suddenly, she felt slow... Like she had a limit on everything. A burden that slows her down mentally, slowing her every step. Stop, stop!" She cried at the voice.

Ever since then, she has walked in a slow fashion due to the wish, and is always looking for the spirit who cursed her, so that she can ask him to fix all the wrongs, her pain overwhelming her soul.
(700 words)

[Evils]

I now own this beautiful babe and was wondering if I could be added? c: