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CyrCryKun wrote:Username: PhantomETC, a nonowner who's hoping to make this lovely lady her first.
Name: Ashoka meaning "without sorrow."
Gender: Female, as mentioned prior to this section.
300 words on how they went blind/how they "see": "Don't stay out too late, Ashoka! And be back before dark!"
"Yes, Mama!" cried out young Ashoka, a Ceiral of about ten years old. She giggled and darted off into the woods, as she normally did on Saturday afternoons. The little girl worried not about the dangers of life. She hardly worried about anything.
Which, subsequently, would lead to her downfall.
It started out as a normal hike in the woods. Ashoka explored many new areas, climbed large trees, and chased squirrels around to see if she could catch them. All was well and merry. The girl didn't give a single care as to what lethal villain could be lurking around every corner.
Suddenly, a a blur of red, white, and black darted past her legs. A fox.
Ashoka gave a squeal of delight and clambered after it, giggling and shrieking excitedly. To her, foxes were nothing more than puppies. Wriggling, fluffy puppies.
The fox raced up a hill; Ashoka scampered close behind it, nearly within an arm's length of its tail. Ashoka screeched gleefully, reaching out to grab it just as they reached the top of the hill.
She wasn't expecting the fox to take a sharp left turn seconds before she fell. And she certainly did not expect the hill to drop down such a steep drop into blunt, hard rocks.
Ashoka let out a frightened scream as she fell, before landing on her back and hitting her head against the cold floor. Everything suddenly went black.
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Ashoka's mother sent out a search party to find Ashoka well after dusk. When it seemed all hope was lost, a soft crying was heard from a cave.
Ashoka had crawled inside it bout an hour earlier. The shock from the fall knocked her corneas out of place. She was blind.
300 words exactly.
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