Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Valesfer » Sun Sep 15, 2013 4:53 pm

droping out :<
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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Cerestes » Sun Sep 15, 2013 9:12 pm

Ha ha, I tried to get creative, and then I ran out of room on my template XD
What a gorgeous Makky <33
I suck at backgrounds and such, but I like to form my characters over time as I get to know them X3
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Dart's Introduction
"Go on, I dare you," the young makoatl jibed at his friend, Dart. Dart smirked, biding for time before taking on his friends' dare. The group of makoatls floated just below the ocean's surface. They had seen land from a distance, but none of the youngsters had ever dared to venture on shore. Dart's parents had warned him that it was a while new world up there, but as far as he knew, they had spent their whole lives in the sea.

Dart finally answered, nonchalantly, "Yeah, alright," though he was actually nervous and shaking inside. He and his friends emerged from the water, just a group of horned wolf heads bobbing along the surf. He started paddling towards the very distant shore. He grew more nervous as his feet touched sand and his body was lifted from the water that so felt like home. He stood still, letting the waves lap at his feet, before he took his first step. His body felt so heavy.

Dart liked the feeling of the sun-warmed sand on his paws, and wiggled his toes to savor the effect. He took in a great breath of air, tasting the salt as he expelled. Laughing aloud, he took off running down the beach. He called out to his friends, "Are you coming, or are you too chicken?" He laughed again as they muttered to each other, calling back insults.

Tiring himself out, he druf his weary body back into the waves only as the sun began to set. He told the other makoatls about the warm sun, and the dry sand and salt air. The other Makoatls looked up to him more now, amazed at how brave he had acted, and that he had come back alive and in one piece.

Dart could not sleep that night; he lay awake in his abandoned clam shell, daydreaming about the beach. He knew at that moment that he would go back, and soon. The next day, he did not even wait for his friends. He made the long journey on his own, from their home in the reef to the land and beach. Though he dared not venture more than a couple yards from the ocean, he stayed on land the whole day.

Things went the same for weeks after that. A couple times, he even managed to talk a friend or two into coming with him, though they did not see what he found so special about the land and soon returned to the water. Dart slowly began to feel restless when in the sea, though he retuned every night.

One day, while lying in the sand and napping on the beach, Dart was awoken by the sound of approaching female voices. He looked up, surprised to see a wolf and another similar to him walking down the shoreline, coming toward him. He stood, at the ready in case these newcomers were hostile. The green one, with the shark tail, spoke first. "Why hello there!" She said in a friendly voice.

Her companion giggled, "Look Eve, we leave for a couple weeks and someone takes our secret spot!"

"Oh, I am sorry," Dart said. "I am... new to these parts."

"It's ok, Etsy is only messing with you," Eve smiled. "And who might you be... newcomer?"

Dart explained who he was and where he had come from. "Oh, we have seen your kind only from a distance!" Eve exclaimed. "Not many Makoatl come to land in this area, but my mother has told me stories about you. Say, we are having a bonfire later; would you like to join us?"

Dart looked up at the rapidly darkening sky, torn in two directions. Though he did not know what a bonfire was, he said sure, interested in his new friends. They hung around and talked a little while longer, and then Eve said, "Come on! Everyone should be arriving by now."

The three wolves walked side by side down the beach. In the distance, Dart could see a flickering orange light and long shadows elongated, dancing in the sand. A sound grew louder as they approached and intrigued him. "What is that?" he asked, turning to Etsy.

"That is music," Etsy explained. "I am assuming you do not have that down there," she motioned toward the rolling waves. Dart was in love immediately. He loved the way the music made him feel - all energetic and hyper.

Eve chimed in, "That is Slipknot they are playing right now. They'll play more!" The two girls introduced Dart to the various people and then started to mingle themselves.

Before Dart knew it, the sun was coming up over the horizon, and the other animals were starting to leave at intervals. He curled into a warm and furry pile with Eve and Etsy, and the three slept deeply, right there on the beach. At noon, they parted ways, with promises of seeing each other again.

Dart could not stay away from land after that, but he always found himself returning to the ocean - to his home and his family. Sometimes he felt restless in one place, and would disappear to the other for a time before being pulled back again. His parents would warn him again and again that the land was as dangerous as the ocean, and that he should be careful, as he was out of his element. But he knew he would be ok.
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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby clu » Mon Sep 16, 2013 12:30 am

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Name: Mikey Mads (( Pronounced Mickey Mads))
Gender: Male
Sexuality : Pansexual
Nicknames: Mikey Mouse, Mads, may may

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Appearance: Mads has very dark tones on his fur with accents of his favourite food Cherry Jello OvO. He has rather Unique O markings then a regular Mako design having that said that he has a long strip on his hair and body that have O shapes with white to accent the dark body and hair. his eyes are lighter tones of his hair with red invert rather then a white outter layer. His mouth inside is pink with dark pink gums and insides. His paw pads are the same as his eye colour making his pads almost glow in the dark see when light shines on it. Adding things to his attire he loves his little Hourglass neckless that he plays with to watch the time go by and also to use to time his jobs and creative activities. He has a fedora also that blocks his eyes from the hot sun from time to time when its super sunny when he sunbathes. He has a large collection of little things that he finds from humans such as his mini USS Enterprise he adores to play with and make noises with which annoys Davy all the time.
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Clothing: His Clothing is for Anthro reasons he walks around in sorta normal clothing with a graphic tee with star trek on it and his hannibal hoodie eat the rude, He doesnt like to wear jeans because they are way to uncomfortable so he walks around most of the time in track or sweat pants and with camo shoes and his Hourglass neckless and fedora. He sports a nice sketch book and guitar which he plays when he feels inspired.
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Personality : Mads is very Happy Go lucky springy little fellow. He adores to be around his friend Davy Jones who Despises him deeply. This saddens Mads most of the time but he maintains his happy cheerful attitude once given jello. On occasion he can become agressive and assertive but never towards Davy because davy could kick his little toosh. Mads can also suck the juices out fruits making them his favourite foods to eat and the make up of most of his diet. He is very creative in nature and enjoys a good tune or a little doodle in the sand from time to time making him very popular with the other critters of the island.He can be very violent on time to time because of his anger issues he developed at a young age. He is very blunt with his speech and that can sometimes come out as a bad thing with him because he fears of loosing friends or being truly alone. He is very generous though with his acts he would hand over food if another didnt have food and also does random acts of giving to those who have less then him.
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History: Mads grew up in the warm parts of the world close to madagascar watching the lemurs play.His parents helped him grow till they randomly disappeared in his life one night leaving him alone in the dark. He was left alone to fend for himself by that point. Throughout his time in the den he learnt to hunt,drink, and selvage by himself and grew up rather quickly with maturity.He was very fasinated with the real world outside of his little den near the water, this curiosity drove him to explore and seek out new life. This brought his love for Jello and Butterflies. He adored the taste of Jello especially cherry Jello which he found to be his ultimate pleasure every lunch and evening.Mads learnt new species every day and different ways of life and living throughout his ventures of the little island by his den.He learnt how to make music and art and loves to do both in his spare time giving him something to calm him when hes scared in the night.He only found out about Jello when a group of settlers ventured on the tiny island and brought the food with them.He was so mesmerized by the jiggling and movement of the food he stole some off the ship and took it back to his den trying it and instantly falling in love with it. From then on out through his child hood to adult hood he obtained and collected Shells and butterflies for more study for his little brain. Only recently did he stumble upon meeting another Mako Davy Jones who at first didnt want anything to do with him but could not leave him behind in the cold nights. Their adventures began travelling the seas and venturing new places never touched by other mako's.
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Hobbies: Bird watching, shell collecting, Watching the ocean, Butterfly catching and watching, Jello eating, sleeping, sunbathing, swimming, making bubbles, digging, pouncing.
Likes
Cherry Jello
Bubbles
Music
Art
Butterflies
Shells
Davy
Bearded Vultures
warm waters
noming.
Dislikes
Shells getting stuck in paws
Sleeping in the dark
Loud Noises
Being woken up from a nap
No food
Davy when hes angry
rainy days on the ship
No Jello O^O
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Why the name Mikey Mads? : Well as you know im a huge Hannibal fan but not only that I love the name of the actor for Hannibal Mads Mikkelsen. so I took that name and made it something fitting for this lovely mako because I needed something adorable to fit a adorable personality for this amazing Mako~. thus Mikey Mads was born OvO and fitting name for the loving Cherry Jello eatting mako.
Friends: Davy Jones, Lumen
Family: Non - family vanished after he was a pup.
Nationality: German
-- Both parents were German based Mako's and originated from Germany over time but most of the family resided in the rivers of Europe--
Theme Song: Daniel Powter - Cazy all my life
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By me/By me/by me/by Discovery/By me/ Hourglass/hat/USS enterprise- By me/by sadbloom

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Ryder Glassiel's Form c:

Postby Tricksters » Mon Sep 16, 2013 12:47 am

You CAN NOT NOT NOT USE ANY OF THE FOLLOWING WORDS;

Blood / bloody, red, russet, scarlet, crimson, evil, devil, demon / demonic, or unlucky.
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Username:

Hello everyone! I am Tricksters, but feel free to call me Tricky, Blingo, or Alternia c: I love to trade, roleplay, and gift on this wonderful site, and offline i am a gamer and i enjoy drawing, biking, and obviously gaming. I am here today because i saw this cutie and he caught my eye, so i thought i will try out for her c:

Makotal Name:

I think that the name Ryder fits her, do not ask me why though because i may not be able to answer your question fully c: But what i do know is that it fit's the personality that i am going to create for her c:

Age:

I was thinking that she was about 16 or seventeen, so i am going to go with the young age of 15 to settle the age commotion in my head c: If this is to young, please tell me, i will gladly raise her age, or if needed lower it also.

Personality:

Ryder is a sweet Makoatal, but if you get on her nerves, her bad side shows. She always get's teased for her boy like appearance, but she decides to ignore them, trying to be strong. She is adventurous, funny, and courageous. When aggravated she will be snotty and rude, though she tries to control herself, making it all worse.

Hobbies:

Ryder likes to listen to music and draw, usually sitting upon Lesera Hill. She enjoy's playing with her two cats Thomas and Matilda, sometimes even talking to them when she has absolutely nothing else to do. She occasionally games with her few male friends when they let her. What else does she enjoy doing? Ryder enjoys walking along the beach near her house and collecting shells and hermit crabs, keeping them in a tank with food and water.

Favorite Music:

Here are Ryder's favorite songs c: they all include links, name of song and name of group which sings it c:

(( if any songs are inappropriate please do tell me c: ))

Nalina - Block B - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-k04rQIZk50
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Inner ninja - Classified - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... znJvdhwx5U
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Fantastic baby - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... 34QmDvSRAA -Big bang
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Warrior - B.A.P - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... TFm3EapmM0

Appearance:

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Ryder is a Makoatal (( Isn't that obvious? c: )) with very unique qualities. She has black eyes, one pupil is bright and cherry colored and the other is a lighter, pastel color. Her ears have a snip out of them, near the top. She has a burgundy colored nose which other makoatal's use it as an excuse to call her Rudolph. She has black stripes running down her back, intertwining in front of her tail. She has black grey and white spots scattered around on her coat, bringing a little 'pzazz' to her. Her tail starts out the color of her eyes and gradually gets darker while heading down to the tip of her tail. She has a black fin on her back that has barely visible spots on it in various places. She has a natural Burgundy 'mane' with black spots and stripes in it, which are also natural. Her paws have white mittens on them and her toes have burgundy/cherry splotches on them, giving people other opinions about it. Ryder usually wears t-shirts and jean shorts/khaki shorts during the summer, along with beach sandal's and occasional pencil/ice cream earnings. In spring she wears skirt's that are lightly colored, and tops and shoes that match. Occasionally she will wear a sun hat during spring.


This form is a huge w.i.p, i am still working out all the quirks, i am drawing art and creating story's c:
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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Peanutcat » Mon Sep 16, 2013 12:59 am

You CAN NOT NOT NOT USE ANY OF THE FOLLOWING WORDS;

Blood / bloody, red, russet, scarlet, crimson, evil, devil, demon / demonic, or unlucky.

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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Downn » Mon Sep 16, 2013 2:47 am

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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Bebop » Mon Sep 16, 2013 2:57 am

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Hmmm? What’s that, you want something from me? What do you want though? ....It’s not like I have much to offer……All I really have to share with you is a word......

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Vincent. I can’t remember where that is from, or even what it means, all I know it that that is the word that describes me.

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Who? Who am I? I’m Vincent, I though I already told you that………Oh, you want a better answer than that? That’s a little ungrateful……….Well fine then.

Who am I? I am the color of a night covered by clouds. I have paws stained with my memory, and I wear eyes carved from the depths of my heart. That is who I am.

That’s not who I am? Yes….yes you are right about that. A man is the sum of his memories, and a man without memories is effectively no one. So sorry, but all I have to answer you with is my physical body. Other than that I have nothing.

I am nobody.

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Nobody….You don’t understand? What is there to understand? It’s not a hard concept to wrap you head around. Nobody is the embodiment of nothing. Nothing is the absence of existence. Therefore, nobody is the absence of a being.

What? I lack being? Weren't you listening to me before? A man is naught but the sum of his memories, and I have no memories in my mind to sum.

Can I remember anything? Anything at all? No. No, I can’t remember anything. Nothing at all. That’s sad? Why would you say something like that? This isn’t a fate that I was forced into. This is my choice; I choose to forsake my memories, my sum of existence. If I were to look inside myself, I would find the answers to the questions in my mind. My mind is like a deep pool, it contains many things but not all of them are visible from the surface. But never mind that, it’s far better for us to swim up here in the sunlight than to delve down into the darkness.

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Why? Why don’t I dive down into the darkness and hunt for answers?

…..Whatever I have suppressed within me is suppressed for a reason. Have you seen my paws? A body is not the sum of a man, but a body does share in a man’s experiences. My paws are stained with my lost memories, my past experiences. They are all they have left from the being that used to exist within me. Look. Look at them. Do those look like memories that you want to remember? No……you just don’t get it. I've already told you that a man is made of his memories. What kind of a man would have stained paws like these, would have spilled memories like these? Would that be the kind of man that you would want sharing your mind with you? Would that be the kind of man that you would want to be? If I reclaimed my lost memories, I would also be reclaiming that man.

But a man is the sum of his memories, and as long as those memories don’t exist the man won’t either. And that man dosen’t want to exist anyways, he left me these little reminders so that I wouldn't be tempted to turn back.

Besides all of that, questions are my raison d'être, my reason for living. As long as I have questions without answers, I will have an excuse for my breaths in this world. So many dread the questions that will never be answered…..So many think that lack of knowledge is the worst thing in the world to bear. And they are fools. So long as the question remains unanswered, the gateway to infinity will remain open. The city can still be made of shining stone, as opposed to the ruins of ash that the answer might bring with it. Knowledge dosen’t seek to satisfy, it seeks to succeed the question that came before it, and to wipe out all of the possibilities that could have claimed its place. Far better that there is no answer, so that the question and all of its possibilities may still continue to breath and inspire the mind to wonder. I told you before that I am nobody, an extension of nothing. So many hate the idea of nothing; so many are scared by the concept of nonexistence. Nonexistence does not necessarily just have to mean the lack of existence, rather it can also mean that there is no answer to the question, that all of the doors will always remain open. So many fear death because they don’t know what will happen to them once they are behind their closed eyes, but in reality the lack of knowledge is what makes death so beautiful. The lack of an answer means that death is unlimited, that it can be anything, anything at all. I do not fear death, but if I knew the answer to death then I might. But I apologize, I am getting beyond myself. Questions are my reason for living because they will always cause me to wonder and search, because they will always serve as a beacon of hope. However I never search inside myself for the answers, because inside myself is the only place where I will find them. I only search for answers within this empty book of a world, where I am sure to never find them. It is a small beacon of hope to be sure, but even the smallest light shines in the dark, and it is very dark indeed when you live in a world that is not even real.

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Are you living in the real world? Have you ever asked yourself that question? Maybe you should, because there might come a day when you are no longer know where you are living or how you got there.

I am not living in the real world. This is not the real world. This is a fake world and you are a dream. You are not real, you are a fake, you don’t exist. These things I know for certain.

This is not my world.
It can’t be my world.
I’m not welcome anywhere.
I don’t belong anywhere.
Surely this can’t be my world?
Surely this can’t be the real world?

What kind of a world would exist, where someone cannot belong anywhere? Everyone belongs somewhere………..don’t they? No. Stop. Don’t answer that question. As long as that question remains unanswered, I can go on believing what I want to believe. If that question were to be answered, then that answer might be that I don’t belong anywhere……………And I couldn’t take that. That answer would smite out all of my questions in a single fell swoop, would slaughter my fragile raison d'être….

As long as that question remains unanswered, there is the possibility that I have to belong somewhere, and that therefore this world is not real if I cannot belong here. And that if this world is fake, that maybe someday I can find the world that is not fake, and finally belong somewhere. The possibility that maybe someday I can find where I belong. As long as the questions remain unanswered, that possibility will still exist.

So why don’t I just go back to the real world then, if I am not happy with this one? That's a foolish question.

I don’t know how to. I don’t know what the turning point was, where the portal lay along the path……..I don’t know how things changed to be this way. I can’t remember…….

……..Maybe I could go back to my own world if I could remember how………but no, I don’t dare remember………I already told you that answers don’t seek to satisfy, but to instead conquer all that might have been. If I were to remember, then I would be sacrificing all of the possibilities. And I would be welcoming the man who stained his paws with his spilt memories……That man stained his paws for a reason; so he could leave me with these little reminders so that I wouldn’t be tempted to turn back. These stained paws of mine are a warning you see, of what lies behind the questions if they were to be answered.

I can never answer these questions you see, because as long as they are questions they can be anything, but as once they become answers they will revert forevermore back into the rotting corpses that they surely are. And I would not have any reason for living when surrounded by rotting corpses. I would not be nobody, as I am now, but instead somebody; a somebody locked into the worse fate imaginable, a maggot strewn existence.

I cannot be anyone because I cannot remember. I cannot remember, and therefore I cannot find the real world. I cannot find the real world, and due to this I cannot be anyone. It is a strange circle to be sure……..

………But as long as that circle does not have an answer, does not have an end, it can go on forever……and as long as it goes on forever, I can still envision a world where I belong. A world where I have a reason for living….

Go back to your boring life now. Don’t look too closely through the window…don’t pull too roughly at the seams…..don’t question the forces of the world too seriously…..because then you might find answers.

You might not like what you find.

And it would be a shame……..

………if others had to share my fate.

Goodbye.


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Caution: songs may contain profanity.
All songs have lyrics in the video for your convinience.


1. Rain - Spokey Dokey
2. I don't wanna die - Hollywood Undead
3. Mess of Me - Switchfoot
4. Is It Real? - Yoko Kanno
5. Monster - Skillet
6. Firefly - Breaking Benjamin
7. Blue- Yoko Kanno & The Seatbelts

(If you don't have time to listen to them all, then at least listen to #4.)



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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Krist Fullmetal » Mon Sep 16, 2013 3:42 am

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The Truth May Hurt, But Lies Are Worse

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Name:
Truth

Gender:
Male

Why The Name Truth:
Simple, The Truth Hurts.

Sexuality:
Straight.

Likes:
Collecting Shells
Sunbathing
Howling (Truth Has A Very Pretty Voice)
Jumping Onto His Friends
Sticks
Digging
Walking




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Dislikes:
When He Gets Shells Stuck In His Paw
Biting
Splinters
Rocks
Being Quiet
Cars
Laziness
Lakes


Birthday And Zodiac Details:
Oct. 21
Libra, The Scales. I Chose 21 Because Not A lot Of People Are Fond Of It And I Chose October Because Its Halloween Month. It Just So Happens That Libra Is The Zodiac For That Date, Truths Have To Balance Out Lies!







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Backstory:
When Truth Was Younger Him And His Family Went To A Lake Surrounded By Decaying Trees. When They Reached The Lake A Branch Fell Off Of A Tree And Destroyed His Fathers Life. Not A Second Later His Mother Fell Into The Lake. Since They Are Makos, She Was Fine. She Climbed Out Of The Lake And Shook All The Water Off Of Her. Then She Saw That Her Mate Was Gone And Grabbed Truth And Made A Run For It. Sticks Hit Her Face, And She Lost Her Footing Every Now And Again. As Soon As They Where Out His Mother's Heart Gave Out And She Fell. Truth Knew What Had Happened. But He Did Not Want To Accept The...Truth. It Hurt So Much. He Let Out A Sorrowful Howl. As Soon As He Stopped Howling the Stars Rearranged Them Selves. When He Looked Up They Said, "Thought The Truth May Be Painful, Its Better Then Accepting A Lie" A Shiver Went Down His Body And He Felt Different. He Shrugged it Off And Started Towards Home. He Passed A Puddle And His Eyes Widened.His Appearance Had Changed. He Had Long Saber Like Fangs, Black Eye-Whites, And Red Pupils. Also A Sick Had Cut A Slit In His Ear. He Now Accepts Every Truth.

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Poem:
My Beautiful Mako,
Coat A Mix A Blackened Shades.
How I Wish You Were Real,
With Tail Of Shark.
We Would Spend Countless Hours
Running Up And Down The Beach.
Racing In The Water,
Just So You Can Defeat Me.
Even If you Lose,
You Always Accept the Truth.
But Alas,
Truth, My Friend You Are Only Pixels,
Forever To be Trapped On The Internet.



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Voice:
Truth Has A Higher Voice Like Vic Mignogna's, But When He Howls Its Usually Deep And Sorrowful.

Land Or Ocean?
Truth Prefers To Be In The Ocean Then On Land.

Favorite Food
Saltwater Taffy And Fries. An Odd Combo But He Loves Them.





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Playlist
I Will Not Bow- Breaking Benjamin
Hero- Skillet
Evanescence - Tourniquet
Fading- Decyfer Down
Me Against The World- Simple Plan
Animal I Have Become-Three Days Grace
Somewere I Belong- Linkin Park
We're All To Blame- Sum 14
Still Waiting- Sum 14





Story:
Told From Truths POV
Sabre Took Wish's Brother, Hunter's Life Right In Front Of My Eyes. He Spun Around And Looked Me Cold In The Eyes And A Smirk formed On His Face. "What Are You Going To Do, Truth? You Just Killed Your Only Friends Brother" Then He Let Out A Spine Chilling Laugh And Fled As Soon As Possible. I Went Up To Hunter And Started To Scream His Name. Then Wish And Her Family Entered There Underwater Cave. Just To Come In And See A Family Member Lifeless On The Floor, With Me On Top Of Him. I Quickly Noticed That I Was In the Wrong Place At the Wrong Time. I Swam Past the Family Just So Wish's Father Could Grab My Tail And Snap the Bone In Two.
I Yelped And He Let Go. Next Thing I Know I Make Contact With The Cold Cave Floor. "YOU! I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN NOT TO TRUST YOU!" Wish's Father Bellowed. I Found My Paws And Got Off the Floor. As Soon As I Looked Up, He Snarled. "I-I-I-I Did Not Kill Him! I Would Never Have Killed Him! He Was My Friend!" I Tried To Scream But My Voice Was Faint. "OH, OF COURSE YOU DID NOT KILL HIM YOU WERE JUST MAGILCALY ON TOP OF HIM WHEN HE PASSED!" He Snarled. I Decided No Matter How Hard I Argued He Would Not Believe Me. I Spun Around And Started Sprinting As Fast As I Could With A Broken Tail.
I Dog Paddled Up to the Top. I Never Knew That Swimming Without My Tail Could Be So Hard And Tiring. I Finally Broke The Surface Gasping For Air. I Doggie Paddled Under The Pier And Started To Walk As I Could Reach The Bottom. When I Was Completely Out Of The Water I Shook All The Access Water Off And Stretched Making Sure Not To Move My Tail. While Stretching, I Saw A Shiny Object And Limped Over To See What it Was. It Was A Silver-White Ring Looking Thing. It Was So Shiny And Beautiful.
While Adorning The Metallic Ring I Herd Someone Say "Your Hunters Friend, Right?" I Swirled My Head Around To See Who It Was And My Stomach Turned. It Was Wish. "Listen I-" I Started To Say, But She Interrupted And Said "I Know You Did Not Destroy My Brother...But Who Did? Oh And I Never Quite Learned Your Name." I Was Surprised At How Calm She Was While Speaking. She Started Laughing In In Between She Said "You Look Funny With Your Jaw Hanging Down Like That!" She Was Right My Jaw Did Fall And I Did Not Notice. "Well The Person Who Took Hunter's Life Away Was Sabre, And My Name Is Truth." "Truth Huh? That's A Weird Name." She Said Giggling. I Giggled Along With Her "Yeah I Guess It Is A Odd Name!" When Wish Finally Settled Down She Looked Down And Tilted Her Head,"Why Do You Have An Earing In Your Paw?" I Looked At Her And A Smile Plastered My Face "So That's What It Is! Do You Know What To Do With It!!? I Said Excitedly. She Looked At Me Like I Had Three Heads. Then Her Face Lit Up And She Jumped Into The Ocean Yelling "I Will Be Right Back! Stay There!!" I Was Officially Confused. What Dose She Need In The Water. While I Was Pondering My Own Question, She Came Back With A Sea Urchin Needle In Her Jaws. I Looked At the Needle And Said "What Are You Going To Do With That?" She Smiled And Said "Give Me The Earing And I Show You." I Reluctantly Handed Her The Metallic Ring. She Then Stuck The Needle In My Ear. "Hm? Your Ears Cut!" She Said Putting The Silver Loop In My Ear. "Yeah Its A Long Story" I Said. She Looked At Me And Said "I Got Time, But You Don't." I Looked At Her And Tilted My Head And She Giggled.
She Came Close To My Tail And Snapped The Bone Back In Place. I Yelped In Pain And Snapped "OW! What Was that For!" She Replied " I Was Setting The Bone Back In Place So It Heals Right, Truth." I Felt Like A Complete Idiot. Then She Said " This Sabre Guy, Would You Mind Eliminating Him For Hunter? I Know I Sounds Weird But I Want To Avenge My Brother But I Cant. You, On The Other Hand Have Large Fangs He Cant Be That Much Of A Problem." I Was Shocked By Her Request. It Was Out Of Character. I Let Out A Sigh And Said "Its Not Going To Be Easy. Sabre Is A Strong Fighter Not To Mention Mine And Hunters Friend. I Don't Know What Made Him Take Your Brothers Life. It Reminded Me Of The Day I Lost Mom And Dad..." Wish Gasped And Said "Your An Orphan!!" I Smiled A Little Bit And Said " Yep I'm An Orphan. And Yes I Can Try To Take Sabre Down It Might Be Hard With A Broken Tail But I Think I Will Manage." She Smiled And Nodded In Response.
I Decided To Go As Soon As Possible. I Said Bye To Wish Then Leaped Into The Water. I Could Move My Tail A Little More No That The Bone Was Set Into The Correct Place. In About An Hour Or Two I Was At Saber's Underwater Cave. I Walked Into The Cave Like It Was My Own. I Was Pretty Deep Inside The Cave When I Could Finally See Sabre. I'm Guessing He Heard Me Because He Spun Around And Said "Oh! What A Surprise Hi Truth!" I Scoffed And Walked Closer My Fur Bristling Up. "So You Came Here To Fight Did You? Ha! A Softie Like You Couldn't Beat Me If He Wanted To!" He Laughed. I Lunged At Him. He Spun Around And Slapped Me With His Tail. My Back Hit The Rock Wall Of The Cave. I Growled And Mockingly Said "Ha!! Is That All You Do? I've Fought Coral Stronger Then You!" He Snarled And Said "Your Going To Regret Saying That!" He Lunged At Me And I Bit His Right Flank. He Growled And Put His Jaws Into My Neck. Its Over I Thought. I've Lost. I Couldn't Avenge Hunter. I Wont See Wish Smile Knowing That Saber's Dead. But At Least I Would Be Able To See Mom And Dad Again. Yes, I Would Be Able To Snuggle With Mom And Play With Dad. I Would Play With Hunter Again. Wait, I Thought. I'm Here To Avenge Hunter And Make Mom And Dad Proud.
I Opened My Eyes And Dug My Large Teeth Into Saber Started Struggling To Breath. I Bit Harder And he Body When Limp. I Took My Teeth Out Of The Corpses Neck And Left Head Held High.
I Told Wish The Next Day That I Succeeded And She Was Bouncing Up And Down With Joy. Even Her Mother And Father Now Believed My Story. I'm Guessing That Wish Told Them My Name And They Then Knew I Was Telling The Thing That Matters Most, The Truth.

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I Can't Draw Digitally, Witch Puts Me At A Disadvantage But I Think Traditional Art Still Gives Me A Shot At This Lovely Mako! Oh Yeah All Art And Stories Are By Me ^^
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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Mon Sep 16, 2013 4:53 am

Good luck to everyone. ;u;

This guys a beauty.
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Re: Makoatl #21

Postby Wileyfangs » Mon Sep 16, 2013 5:15 am

Dropping out sorry! I love this babby but I don't think I'll be able to win him <33

Good luck to who does though!
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