Re: Shionnix #67

Postby fruitsandothers » Thu Jul 04, 2013 11:14 pm

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Re: Shionnix #67

Postby blueh » Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:19 am


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His chosen gender would be a male.

Personality: [describe in 5 words or ONE sentence]
[. Adventurous .] [. Carefree .] [. Energetic .] [. Unpredictable .] [.Stubborn .]

Story of how it received it's scar and the damaged plume:
Grey feathers fluffed up to protect from the cold. A small bird-like creature lifted its head in the air, hoping that he would be able to recognize this place soon. The creature was lost. Completely and utterly lost.

A small involuntary whimper escaped Ryker’s lips and he trudged onward in this unknown territory. He didn’t even know how he got here—one moment he was exploring the deserts by his home, and then next moment he was walking across hard sand that he had never seen before.

“I need to get home!” Ryker muttered to himself. He was getting more annoyed by the minute as he cross this dessert, it was nothing like the desert that he grew up around. The sand here was hard and cold, and the plant pricked his feathers every time he moved. He hated this.

He looked up at the tree that he was passing and frowned, he’d passed that tree before, he was sure of it. A growl ripped the back of his throat, “I’m just going in circles!” Before he took off in another direction as fast as he could.
A flash caught his eyes and he skidded to a stop. His ears flicked in the direction of the object, not completely sure what it was. Cautiously, the Shionnix slowly approached the object with his ears and head down and his muscles tense, ready to run at any moment. He approached as slowly as he could, careful not to scare to object, if it was even alive.

Making sure he knew it wouldn’t attack him; Ryker poked the object with his foot. It didn’t move and Ryker let out a breath he didn’t know he was holding. The object was long and skinny, covered in something that looked like rust. It was coiled into a circle and had several spikes on it.

What is it? Ryker though for a moment, recounting all his previous adventures. He had seen this thing before; he knew he had. Ah, it’s barbwire. I think.

His family had also warned him about it. They said it was dangerous and could hurt him. But how could something not alive hurt him? It didn’t look hurtful, just dead and unmoving. It kind of looked like a necklace.

The Shionnix blinked before a large grin appeared on his face. He used his nose to flip the barbwire on its other side, careful of the spikes. He thrust his nose in the center of the circle and flipped it once again, this time on his neck. Ryker grinned proudly and looked at his new accessory. It was dirty, but he could clean it later, it was also heavy. Really, really heavy.

His smile slowly formed into a confused frown. How was something so small so heavy? It was also starting to prick his feathers on the back of his neck, making his uncomfortable.

All right, he though to himself as he tried to get the wire off his neck, bad idea. This thing needs to go now.
He plopped on the ground, flinging sand and feathers up in the air. He used both of his feet and wings to try and push the thing off his neck. It didn’t work—it only made it tighter.

The barbwire caught his wing in its iron grip and Ryker started to panic. He thrashed around wildly, cutting himself every time he made a wrong move. One of the barbs slashed his neck and he gave a grunt of pain, but he ignored it.
When he finally -Finally! - Got it off, it had been around an hour. He was covered in cuts, sand and burs from the dessert plants. He didn’t even have the energy to look for his home anymore. Silently, he collapsed onto the sand having not more energy to stand and fell asleep on the hard ground.


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Re: Shionnix #67

Postby Lady Tuesday » Fri Sep 06, 2013 10:46 am

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Re: Shionnix #67

Postby SplashofOrangeJuice » Sun Sep 15, 2013 4:28 am

Oi, I've almost forgotten about this one! ><

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Re: Shionnix #67

Postby blueh » Tue Sep 24, 2013 4:25 am

bump? c:

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Re: Shionnix #67

Postby SplashofOrangeJuice » Wed Sep 25, 2013 1:42 pm

We have a winner!!

Congratulations to hiken ;; !!!

Something about your form really stuck with me, and your story was unique. I could read his personality through your writing, and I really loved that about the form. <3

Take good care of Ryker!
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