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Username: Lukina
Name: Thalia
Gender: Female
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Oh, Devine goddess, how your light shines bright.
Your heavenly features grace each morning beckoning it forth.
Your feathered wings always out stretched in comfort to another.
Oh, Devine goddess how your light shines bright,
To those in need that need saving from the darkness that holds them.
Bid: My bid
Story:
Thalia was born like all CK's, her life not to glamorous or even great for that matter. As a young one she was always treated differently, for she the way she acted and saw life different from those around her. She saw something else that the others didn't see in the living things around them, she could feel their life force and could almost her their wants and needs. Why she was born different she couldn't be sure of, but she hoped that she had a special meaning that hadn't been shown to her yet. Perhaps a Devine purpose that had a special meaning for her and those around her.

One day great tragedy befell her and her fellow CK's, a great fire swept through the lands destroying all in its path. Many perished in the great disaster but many survived due to Thalia's quick thinking and bravery, she managed to save many that were inches from death, most of them young CK's. She had just barely made it out with her own life and lead the others to safety, that day she thought she would have earned even a little something from the others, sadly she was mistaken. Even though she ended up being alone she was happy to have saved the others, and decided that day she would spend the rest of her life helping those in need. Thalia left the land she once called home and set off to help those she found that needs it, she came across many that needed help and were even close to following that white light. On she continued to travel alone in this world where she was accepted by no one and loved by no one but her created.

One day she saved someone that finally accepted her, he was kind, handsome, and quite charming, she couldn't help but fall head over heels in love with him. She stayed with him as he healed and they talked, learning just about everything about one another, and once healed joined her on her travels. The two of them formed a close bond where they were just about joined at the hip, they never wanted to the the others side for fear of losing the other. One day Thalia announced that she was pregnant to her mate, the two were overjoyed and did what they could to prepare for the new little ones.

Finally the day came for her little ones to brought into he world, when they were born she called her mate into the den they had made. A smile came to his face as he saw them, he came to her side and nuzzled her affectionately before sitting. "They are beautiful Thalia, must as you are." he told her warmly. "They are beautiful." she whispered as she laid her head upon him watching the babies nurse. Several weeks passed and the babies grew bigger and bigger, it was time for them to see the world they lived in. She watched as they played with each other and her mate, it was a wonderful sight to behold.

When they reached eight weeks a new creature came into their part of the forest, humans, these humans were out for fur. With much fighting any running the humans managed to capture the little family except for Thalia. With fear and tears within her eyes she fought to get her family back, she lost half the battle in the end. She managed to save her family but not herself, she had sacrificed her life for theirs, which made her happy they were safe. In those last moments she saw her family flee to safety, it brought a warm smile to her weary muzzle before the passed.

Many moons passed before she was brought back by her creator, now she was a bit different, she was adorn with wings and a couple of ribbons. She looked like a goddess and she felt a bit like one to, she walked over to a pond to look upon herself hardly recognizing who she was now. That's when her creator spoke to her, telling her she was now a goddess among the CK's and she had earned her life to be renewed by her actions in her other life. She was told that she would now live and eternal life and be able to watch over all other CK's.

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Username:
Burninflames, but you can call me burn if you want!



Name:
Well I wanted something that really spoke to me, a name I didn't have to think twice about. I finally found that name Angeni, which means Angel in our language but also meaning Spirit. She is the Spirit Angel, something that I thought captured all of her. She is both angel in spirit and body!



Gender:
She is an elegant female!



Likes:
* Nathan, he is her mate!
* Nature, the world. She has always had that bond with it. Where she hates being separated. She just wants to be with it all the time. She needs to feel the dirt under her paws the water washing up around her, the wind breathing into her, everything!
* Bird Songs, the seem to calm her bring her closer to her self.
* Cookies! She knows they come from humans but she loves the rich, sweetness of them.



Dislikes:
* Blood, she thinks of it as something that should just stay where it belongs. Inside you!
* War, and destruction, it never goes with her and she wants it away. For she could never even hurt a fly so why should any one else?
* Cold, hard places, she loves when everything is soft, smooth always going right. She dislikes when there is a troubling time. She knows she can get through it an always will, but wishes she didn't even have to.
* Humans, they are destructive and deserve nothing of what they have been given.



Art:
Art made by .:Orange Leaf:. tankies so much =^.^=




Bid:
Keep an eye out for I will be adding. :)



Story:
(I know it's very long, I just kept getting ideas after ideas and I just couldn't stop. I hope you read it all because I put a lot of hard work in it for her, but I understand if you think it's to long I could maybe cut some...)

Angeni was born in the normal of all families. They never had to struggle or hind from anything, but that was what she thought . They never let her outside of there home, worried of what the others might say of her wings. Angeni had a better idea though, ever night she would wonder out of a crack and talk to her friends. But her friends weren't other CK's, they were trees. Yes she could talk to the trees and animals of the outside world. Her parents never knew that of course but Angeni thought it was okay. She didn't know she was breaking a rule, or that talking to animals and trees wasn't normal. (if it is sorry it didn't say) She loved to hear their love of the forest, and their stories of when they were young. Also learn the ways of other animals of the forests. She loved to help little birds try to fly. She just loved to learn and help. She felt she had a connection with everything and everyone.

Angeni was going through the crack one night and saw a bright light when she was talking to her friend Black. He told her not to go, that it wasn't safe, but she went any way. She wanted to see others of her kind, wanted to know what they did and if there was more like her. Still very young only about 3 she could still hide in small places silently. She tucked in her wings and watched. She first spotted her parents and smiled. They soon noticed her sitting in a pile of bushes and they jaws dropped. Angeni started to get out of her hiding spot, but then she stopped cold. Her parents were shaking there head at her, motioning to the den. She frowned and took an other step. Her parents growled, but it was to late someone saw her. "Hey little one come here, don't be shy," someone said. But her parents protested, "No no no she needs to go to bed its late." The CK chuckled slightly, "Night just came what are you talking about?" Her parents froze, Angeni was walking out if the bush. Then everyone froze, they could see her wings. "What is wrong with her," the CK said backing away slightly. "What are you talk about," her parents said casually walking over to her. "Thous fluffy things on her back. What are they exactly," he said taking a curious step forward, but stepped back timid.

Angeni sat by a river singing calmly to the fish swimming by. She suddenly heard a snap of a branch behind her and she twisted her head quickly. Then there was a small, deep growl. Angeni smiled and sat back down, swiping her paw in the dirt. Then the creature jumped out and growled loudly in her face. She just giggled and pushed at his nose. "Why do you never get scared of me?" Nathan asked, sitting next to her. She giggled then looked over at him, "I'm a Chikyu Kitsunes we aren't scared of anything." Nathan just nodded his head and looked at the water, where the fish were swarming by Angeni's paws. "Why do all the animals love you Angeni?" he asked looking up at her face. "I don't know..they saw I'm their leader or something I don't know," she answered whistling to the fish. Nathan just laughed at her. "They do!" she protested back to his laughter. "Mhmm because fish totally speak," he continued on a few more chuckles of laughter. Angeni looked down at him and punched him, so he flopped in the water. She smiled and turned around padding back to their den.

Angeni got back to the den and huffed she heard Nathan running after her, his fur wet. She walked over to her little pile of leaves and an old tattered baby blanket. She had found wondering the woods a long time ago, she thought she should leave it but it sorta pulled her in. It was a beautiful black blanket with blue hints every now and then. She always loved to rap it around her neck when it got cold at night. Nathan padded into the den, shaking his fur dry. She layed down and yawned, it was starting to get light out. Nathan layed down next to her, he was getting use to going to bed with her. His little bed was next to hers it have a bunch of leaves and random fluff here and there. "Why do you never want to see the sunset? I've seen it before it gorgeous," he said to her drowsiness in his voice. "I don't know never a cured to me. I'm sure it's the most gorgeous thing in the world," she said looking over at him. "Not as pretty as you though," he said looking at her. She flinched at that and looked over to him but he was already asleep. She huffed and thought about it. Was she pretty? She soon shook the thought off and fell asleep.

Angeni soon woke up it wasn't quite dusk but it was getting there. Nathan was gone probably out hunting, since she could never do it. He always had to bring it back dried so she wouldn't get blood on her fur. She tried to clean up they're den, but there wasn't much to clean up. It was pretty much just a tiny space big enough for them and a friend. If one of the little animals ever came in scar, Angeni would let it sleep next to her. She cleaned up Nathan's bed as much as she could, he never liked her over there. She cleaned up her place and tied the dirty old blanket around her neck the best she could. She sweeped out some dust and felt the sun reach out to her tail. She looked over the edge of home and saw the sun setting. She sighed a happy sigh then heard Nathan return. She swiveled his head and he was smiling with dried meat hanging from his jaw. She frowned, "Umm..I was just cleaning," she said trying to cover up what she was doing. He just set the meat down and joined her to watch the sun. "Its fine, haha I knew you were curious," he said sitting down next to her. "Well I guess it is pretty but," she said staring at the ground. She then heard the sun speak to her Run, run go find your family. For they need your help in troubling times. It almost sounded like it was yelling at her to move from her position. She just sighed and layed into the Nathan's chest. He moved his paw a little and they just sat there looking at the sun. Well Angeni was Nathan was looking at her. She then heard a yelling sound in her head Why do you stay? They need you! She jumped up, "I need to go they need me." Nathan stood up and said, "What are you talking about? Who needs you?" "The..the sun told me! My family needs me!" Nathan just huffed and sat down. She pushed him and bolted off. Angeni ran and ran. Her eyes got bleary, everything was dark, then she hit the ground.

She soon opened her eyes finding Nathan's worried eyes in her face. She tried to get up but he shook his head and lightly nuzzled her to lay back down. She groaned and said with a shaky voice, "What...um..what happened?" He kind of shrugged, but finally said, "You bolted away saying that your family needed you and that the sun told you. I thought you were messing with me and just giving me a hint, but then I felt it.... I got worried so I followed you, the best I could. I soon found you limp in the middle of the woods, just laying there. So I picked you up and brought you to the edge of your families territory," he looked away but soon returned his gaze to her. "You weren't getting up and you were really hot, I was worried and about to walk up to your kind. But then I wondered why they didn't have wings. Then that led me to a different thought. Why exactly did you run away?" he stared her intently in the eyes, worry on his face. She stuttered trying to find what to say. She finally found her footing and told him of her childhood. How she was isolated and quiet. About how she would secretly go out and talk to the trees and animals. On how she loved to hear their tails of the hard times and good.

Then she got to the night of when she left. She froze not able to go on with her story. Nathan noticed it and got up from his sitting position, his face in shock of the story. He moved and sat next to her. She shoved her face into the scruff of his neck, tears rolling fast out of her eyes. He brushed his paw slowly down her back, trying to calm her. She finally stopped and pulled her face away form his neck, "I'm...I'm sorry" He replied with a soft voice, "No I'm sorry I shouldn't have laughed at you." She smiled slightly and looked into his his blue eyes, "Oh that's fine. I probably would have laughed at you if you would have said that." She then quickly looked away, a little timid. "No you wouldn't have," he said pushing her face to look at his. "You are the most amazing, kindest, sweetest, most loving animal I have ever met. You couldn't possible be mean to a fly." She smiled up at him, feeling the heat of his body. They then heard a scream from behind them and she turned seeing one of her kind being run to the ground.

She was shocked, wanting to run out there now and kill the man. But Nathan held her back, he new she really couldn't kill the man. She looked over at him, the moment they had just shared gone, her face had worry and a new set of tears on it. I will do it, he mouthed to her motioning to the man. She frowned and shook her head, she was going to do what she felt right. She was about to walk out but then Nathan put his body in front of her. He smiled and licked her cheek, "I will be right there with you." She smiled then they both walked out into the field, a wolf, and a Chikyu Kitsunes.

She growled fiercely from where they stood. She felt good about this, until there hopes dropped when more men came out of the shadows. There faces a little shocked at how she had wings, but they were over the rest. Nathan was still strong next to her, not being afraid to kill. The CK on the ground was shocked at their presence especial her, with her wings. She just smiled at him and told him to run. He did bolting for safety of the trees. She then stood ready to fight, her body tense, fangs bared. Nathan lunged forward at the closest man. The man fired randomly as he hit the ground his gun flying into the bushes at the impact. She was lost at the sight of blood flying but soon got a hold of her self. She flapped her wings, feeling the wind tell her where every bullet went. The wind helping in her favor as it veered close ones of the straight path to her. She was almost having fun until she looked down noticing Nathan wasn't doing as good as she was. He was jabbed with the head of a gun and fell back, he body limp on the ground. She felt anger rush through her body as she rushed down, knocking over the man. Then she felt him go limp under her small body. What had she done? She thought looking down at him, but then shifted her head over to Nathan he was now getting up and attacking more men. It looked like he had new life the crusted blood on him was now gone. They looked like they were going to win but then she felt a jab in her side. Blood started to rush out of her small form, her lights starting to flicker. Nathan looked over at her his face in shock. He rushed over to her a tear rolling down his face. The last 5 men rounding around them, but he didn't seem to care. He just layed down next to her, telling her he loved her. She felt his hot tear roll on her fear. She finally said with a small voice, "I love you too." Nathan smiled and she could feel that against her fur as she smiled too. They new they were going to die then they heard voices and rushing of feet. Angeni then blacked out a crystal tear rolling out of her eye.

Angeni soon opened her eyes, she didn't feel any pain or suffering. She thought she was where all the others of her kind go but she felt her heart beating and ground soon coming to her paws. She heard the loud cheering of people around her. She felt a smile come to her face as she started to see faces, none that she new of course except for that one she had seen before saying, "Thank you thank you." She felt all her paws on the ground then Nathans body against her as he hugged her. "I..I thought you wee gone. Then you heeled and there was a light." He pulled away and looked into her eyes, "I thought I lose my Angeni." She smiled and said her voice sounding like nectar, "I will always be next to you." She then looked over at the rest of her kind she felt bright and alive, but she couldn't figure out why they were cheering. "Why are they cheering?" she asked Nathan. He sort of laughed then said, "Your their god." She froze at that, "God? God? Okay I must have died and I'm hallucinating." He looked at her funny, "Now you didn't its real look at your self." She thought of that then wonder how she could there was nothing to look into. But then suddenly to white doves came flying by caring a crystal mirror. She did look like a god. Her fur was glowing more bright then ever, her wings a glorious pure white. He lights where glowing so fierce, and she wore he old little tattered blanket. The blanket wasn't tattered though it was almost a glowing black with beautiful blue hints every where. It sparkled in the sun with a little silver medal attached to it. Was she a god she thought. Then she heard the trees talk to her they said You are can't you see. Oh look how gorgeous she looks just like she was meant to.

Angeni was now the goddess of all Chikyu Kitsunes. She always watched over all of the forests and skies. She was loved and honored by all. She never let any human come near her kind, ever again, and found her true porous in life. She loved Nathan forever and ever, never to leave each other again. They had 4 adorable children one lucky girl inheriting the wings from mum and the spirit of her dad. There family now watched over everything and never again did her kind parish to fall.

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Edit: Dropping out as much as I would love to see this baby apart of my clan but I just dont have alot time right now as I am now helping to take care of the wmes on da

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I've noticed there are a lot of WIP forms, so I have decided to postpone the end date for another week

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thank you so much hopefully I can get my camera fixed so I can post the art I did of her ^^

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Alright, after hours of judging and lots of consideration.. I have chosen a winner..


The winner for this Chikyusune will be... Lukina!
Congratulations, your story and poem were perfect and the name fit really well with this Kitsune. c:


Now there won't be any runner up prizes, but I did like a lot of the entries and so the honorable mention goes to burninflames
Your form was also really good and it was a tough decision to make.


Thanks to everyone who has entered and good luck for future contests c: