[Charchar2]

Wait, is mine 15 sentences? :3
I counted " "What could that be?" he asked aloud to the silent ocean around him " as one sentence, does that work? c:

[.sweetypie.]

Beautiful! I may try

[Soph6297]

Wait, is mine 15 sentences? :3
I counted " "What could that be?" he asked aloud to the silent ocean around him " as one sentence, does that work? c:

Yep, yours are 15 sentences (:

[Eiloh]

Username: Specklez
Name: Palti - Means escape.
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Story:Blood rushed through my ears; I could feel my heart thudding. Net tangled in my tail. Net tangled in my legs. In my mind I screamed but outside I focused. How could I get in and not get out. There must be an exit. I felt myself getting more and more anxious as I felt the net tightening it's grip around me like a black hole to a space ship. Alas, I see a hole. A small hole for me to fit through. I squirmed, breaking free of nets that bound my tail and legs. I pushed energy through my tail, and it pushed me towards the hole in the net as a result. I madly thrashed my hooves. I squeezed my eyes shut. I felt a push of warm water, as I collided with a soft current. I was free.

[Mysty Fox]

Username: Mysty Fox
Name:
Gender: Male
Age: 5
Story:
It was a stormy night when I came to a near end, the seas were turbulent and wild. I had been out, looking around when a rather large bull shark decided it wanted to take a nibble on my tail and I did not favor the idea. We fought and after a while I could see that it was crazed with hunger and I wasn't going to win without seriously injuring it, so I bolted, and to my absolute horror, right into a fisherman's net.

The heavy ropes tangled around me, dragging me down as it sank, and I thrashed, unable to free myself. I could feel the sudden desperation, the sick feeling of fear pulsing through me. These nets were death-traps, and I'd gift-wrapped myself in one! I fought for what seemed like hours, doing nothing more than ensnaring myself more when I, at last, admitted defeat. I, to be honest, was scared, and I sent out a few cries for help, but when I heard nothing, my heart sank. As I began to give up hope, I saw them.

A flash of black and white amongest the flashes of silver blue, dolphins and their Guardian! They came closer, but were careful to stay away from the net, when she approached. She was quiet, her brillant blue eyes thoughtful as she gently began to untangle me, and when at last I felt the heavy net slid from my body I was over-joyed! I surged upward, looping estaticly around the pod before I stopped in front of the female. She watched me, and I carefully bowed my head to her, nuzzling her muzzle. When I looked up she smiled, tossed her mane and I played in the stormy seas, with 'Freedom'.

Saoirse, my GOS, whose name means "Freedom"

[ChemicalElement]

how do you adout this pet??

[Soph6297]

By filling out the form from the 1st page. C:

-Closed now. Judging-

[Eiloh]

Username: Specklez
Name: Palti - Means escape.
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Story:Blood rushed through my ears; I could feel my heart thudding. Net tangled in my tail. Net tangled in my legs. In my mind I screamed but outside I focused. How could I get in and not get out. There must be an exit. I felt myself getting more and more anxious as I felt the net tightening it's grip around me like a black hole to a space ship. Alas, I see a hole. A small hole for me to fit through. I squirmed, breaking free of nets that bound my tail and legs. I pushed energy through my tail, and it pushed me towards the hole in the net as a result. I madly thrashed my hooves. I squeezed my eyes shut. I felt a push of warm water, as I collided with a soft current. I was free.

Sorry my story is so short, I thought it said on the front page maximum 15 sentences D:

[Charchar2]

Username: Specklez
Name: Palti - Means escape.
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Story:Blood rushed through my ears; I could feel my heart thudding. Net tangled in my tail. Net tangled in my legs. In my mind I screamed but outside I focused. How could I get in and not get out. There must be an exit. I felt myself getting more and more anxious as I felt the net tightening it's grip around me like a black hole to a space ship. Alas, I see a hole. A small hole for me to fit through. I squirmed, breaking free of nets that bound my tail and legs. I pushed energy through my tail, and it pushed me towards the hole in the net as a result. I madly thrashed my hooves. I squeezed my eyes shut. I felt a push of warm water, as I collided with a soft current. I was free.

Sorry my story is so short, I thought it said on the front page maximum 15 sentences D:

It's does xD


Good luck everyone! ;u;
And congrats to whoever wins this gorgeous boy ^^

[Eiloh]

Username: Specklez
Name: Palti - Means escape.
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Story:Blood rushed through my ears; I could feel my heart thudding. Net tangled in my tail. Net tangled in my legs. In my mind I screamed but outside I focused. How could I get in and not get out. There must be an exit. I felt myself getting more and more anxious as I felt the net tightening it's grip around me like a black hole to a space ship. Alas, I see a hole. A small hole for me to fit through. I squirmed, breaking free of nets that bound my tail and legs. I pushed energy through my tail, and it pushed me towards the hole in the net as a result. I madly thrashed my hooves. I squeezed my eyes shut. I felt a push of warm water, as I collided with a soft current. I was free.

Sorry my story is so short, I thought it said on the front page maximum 15 sentences D:

It's does xD

Oh xD
I saw people's forms with such long stories and I thought darn
But never mind xD

Good luck everyone! ;u;
And congrats to whoever wins this gorgeous boy ^^