by peter quill » Sun Dec 23, 2012 7:49 pm
Username:
} Kankri Vantas
Name:
Marble
Gender:
Female
Story:
Christmas was one of my favorite holidays. I had lived here all my life in this orphanage, since I was just a baby. I never really knew the candy canes, or the stockings, and I didn't even know much about snow. All I knew was about the star, Santa Claus, and Lights.
On Christmas morning, I woke up with a bright smile, nudging the girls beside me. My brown locks swayed with the slight breeze coming from the nearby window, and I jumped off the bed. Each orphan had 1 present to look forward to. I didn't mind at all, that one present was all I could ask for. They tried so hard, and I was grateful for it. All I could be is grateful and hope. Hope one day I could be adopted.
They gave us breakfast, and my good friend joined me; we finished up and headed to the small white tree, near the entrance to the orphanage. Sitting down in lines, we waited anxiously for the presents. One by one, each orphan stood up, took their present, said thanks, and sat back down. I was called last, surprisingly. When we collected our presents, we could go to any section in the orphanage to open them.
"Sammie!"
I went up and took my present.
"You have to open it here, dear."
I nodded, sitting down, and I slowly opened.
I couldn't believe my eyes. It was what I always longed for.
{This story isn't real. Cx}
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by broodingtulip » Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:31 pm
Username: ginger.
Name: Pez
Gender:Female
Story:
Beep beep beep.
I heard my alarm clock go off, awakening me from my sleep. I stretched my arms and yawned, grinning from ear to ear. I would have raced downstairs like I normally do, but I couldn't sleep last night, and was quite lazy. I slowly got out of bed, my sore muscles groaning in protest. I made my way down the hall and down the stairs - my ducky slippers squeaking as I did so. I smelt the most delicious smell of cinnamon rolls coming from the kitchen, but unfortunately I didn't see the door in my way. The door whacked me, and I stumbled back. I shrugged it off and continues walking.
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Once I was int he kitchen, my mum and dad smiled at me, a plate of 2 cinnammon rolls already on the table. I sat down and ate slowly, enjoying the taste of the yummy food.
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"Presents!" I yelled loudly, running to the Christmas tree. I may be fourteen, but I am childish. I saw loads of presents, but only one caught my eye. "Uh-uh-uh pumpkin, that one is for last." my dad said to me, smiling lazily. I sighed heavily and opened my presents. Grandma sent me a box of fresh, homeade cookies, along with a knitted scarf and socks. Uncle Cade sent me a book titled '50 ways to Annoy your Parents', on this one I laughed while my parents turned to eachother with a frightened look in their eyes. I got other presents too, but I don't want to bore you. When I came face-to-bow with my last present, a blue box with a darker shade of blue bow, I literally ripped it open. What I saw inside made me gasp, covering my mout with my hands as tears of happiness rolled down my face.
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by Agent Shark » Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:11 am
Username: Snowstar1
Name: Huckleberry (Hiccup for short)
Gender:Female
Story:
I grunted softly as something woke me from my peaceful sleep, as I started to snuggle back under the blanket my eyes flew open as I suddenly remembered what day it was. Christmas! I Leaped out of bed and ran into my parents room. "Mom, Dad! Wake up NOW." I Said quite loudly, quickly waking them up. The smiled and soon came out to find me siting on the floor near the tree as patiently as I could. There was one present intrigued me quite a bit, it was a bit larger then the others and it was blue. I Looked at My Presents as my parents settled down on the floor to hand the gifts out. I Got some books I wanted but I was more interested in the box. Finally I slid down to the floor as I was handed the box. I Took a breath and started to open it as there was plenty of things I want that could fit in this box...what would it be?
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by the.kitsune.prince » Mon Dec 24, 2012 3:36 am
Username: Tabby Bae
Name: Finn
Gender:Female
Story:
My eyes glinted. The small box sat in front of me, making almost silent shuffles and grunts. I had a small feeling that it would be a puppy, but wouldn't it have barked or yapped by then? I let my fingers twirl the ribbon. The curls tickled my unusually slim fingers, this made me smile at the same time. I loved this day... the day after christmas, boxing day. This day was the day my family always exchanged these decorated boxes, a unusual gift in everyone... and mine was living up to this strange tradition. It was a extremely small box, in my eyes, which was shaded blue with a darker silk ribbon.
"It's your turn, sweetie," A voice, my mum, told me. I looked up at her and my other family members, they smiled at me. The present was from all of them, just like usual - the tag on the ribbon told me this. I undid the silk bow gently, not wanting to damage it as I wanted to wear it in my hair later. Then I stroked the lid, It had a strange emblem on it. A berry? I didn't know which type but it looked nice, and felt nice due to in being embossed. I lifted the lid. The sight caused a whisp of breath escaped me in my shocked surprise... the present from my family, so strange and small... so beautiful...
(Im unsure on the amount of sentances used, I hope it's okay though)
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by ~Vanilla~ » Mon Dec 24, 2012 3:56 am
Username: ~Vanilla~
Name: Octavia
Gender:Female
Story:"Bleh" I grunted, and rubbed my eyes.It was cold and crisp in my room.I sat up, thinking what today was.Oh my gosh!!! It was Christmas!!! I hurled my self off the bed and landed on my head.The blanket was wrapped around me and i yanked it off.I bounded down the soft squishy stairs and woke up my mom and dad "EEEEE!!! Wake up!!! It's Christmas!!".They sleepily walked down the stairs and we sat at the edge of the glowing tree."Why did i have to be the oldest, so i have to open my present last?" i thought.After 5 minutes of pure torture of just watching them open presents, my parents nudged my on the shoulder, "It's your turn".They grinned at me ever so slighty and pushed me over to this blue present with a perfect bow.I leaned over it, i smelt it for some reason, and untangled the bow.I very slowly opened the top of the lid box and i almost fainted, such a beautiful little present....such a beautiful little present.
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