by .Vetinater. » Sun Nov 11, 2012 8:40 am
Serenaded By Angels wrote:Is it okay if I fix a few Misspellings in mmy form? I ended up haing to do it off of my phone instead of my computer and the spellings are really bugging me...but I don't know if its okay to go back and edit once we have completed a form.
And sorry about the semi long short story...but I had to...
You may edit your form as much as you'd like until the ending date. c;
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by .Vetinater. » Tue Nov 20, 2012 9:08 am
{{lies wrote: Siarre, pronounced Siarr-ee.
Siarre is a quiet, reserved pup. She likes to sit back from her friends and watch them rant and rave about the cutest boy pup on the block, or which of their beds is more comfortabe, or listen to them complain about their food. And when they ask for her oppinion, Siarre wags her tail and sticks her nose into the air with pride, and exclaims that she loves everything she has. She can be a bit stuck-up and reppetitive at times, but this pup only means the best. She has a big heart and a light, bouncy soul, and a playful attitude that comes out when she plays with her ball.
link to picture of a cute bow::
The little she-pup sat in a little group of friends in the back yard, listening to them all babble carelessly about their weeks. “Did you see the super cute new boy down the street?” Cassidy chirped, her wolf sable-colored pelt almost hidden with a cute blue shirt and a jean skirt, as well as little black booties. Her dark eyes glittered as she shifted and howled, causing uproarous laughter to erupt from most of the group. A small teacup brindle pup rolled her eyes, flopping onto her side and heaving a loud sigh in response, “But what about Timmy? Haven't you seen his clean coat? Like.. O-M-G!” She howled back, her legs going stiff with her loud sound as she amused the group- obviously Cassidy's 'follower'.
And Siarre listened to this, until all of the pup's unique faces turned to her. “Well? What do you think? Who's cuter?” They all howled and yipped, crowding around the small pup and pawing at her shoulders eagerly. And all she replied with, was a slight wag of her tail, and her nose rising into the air, before she yipped back with a playful air,
“I like them all.”
Congratulations, you've won this pommie! I'll be sending an important PM out as soon as I can get around to it! c:
I also wanted to say, I absolutely loved the little personality that you portrayed in your story. Your new little pommie is sure adorable~ <33
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by stunning.reality; » Tue Nov 20, 2012 1:06 pm
{ {I did? D: Yeey~! And thank you, I tried to stay close to her personality in the story. c:
now that you know--------------------------------------
-----------------------------------something's not right
look at it carefully in [----p a l e///l o g i c///l i g h t----]
don't be sorry---------------------------- if you can't recognize
ERRORS . . AND . . FAULTS
----------------------------------in such a perfect disguise!
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