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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby The Most Sincere » Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:52 pm

Are my stories too long, Tater? I apologize- I just have so much inspiration with him, you know?
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Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?



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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby foreign-potato » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:24 pm

No, yours are fine Gravity. :D I actually like reading, some times it's just tedious reading so many entries. xD
But your's is a good length! c:
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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby The Most Sincere » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:33 pm

Okay, good to hear! Thanks!

I love Armageddon <3

I hope that I get him XD But he'll go to a good home, regardless.
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Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?



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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby foreign-potato » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:35 pm

Your form is really good so far. :D
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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby The Most Sincere » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:37 pm

Aw, thanks! I'm gonna spice it up though (Do people still use that term?). Anyway, yeah. Drawings, spacers... Anything imparticular that you'd like for me to add?
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Deep in the woods,
In a world of our making.
Lost in each other,
No sense of forsaking.
A simple feel like any other,
Without any room to pretend as another.
But losing our footing on a wire of briers,
Binding and prying in loosening desires,
That not even the strength of
the strongest of motions,
Could calm this tide
Of rising commotions.
Drowning in sinners and falsified thoughts,
With feelings of malice, detachment and loss.
Swimming in circles around the drain,
Sucking the life from every vein.
Draining the soul and leaving it lost...
How much falling till you're finally caught?
And get back to the place your eyes have sought?



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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby foreign-potato » Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:57 am

No, just have fun. :] Yours is already very nice. xD
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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby Shortii » Sat Nov 10, 2012 6:29 am

Well good luck to the one that wins. Just let me know when he/she breeds. I WANT a puppy!
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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby Mackiot » Sat Nov 10, 2012 10:01 am

Same
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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby Shortii » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:26 am

Hm. Can anyone message me who gets it? And when it's able to breed?
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Re: Pommie #40! <3

Postby ruse » Sun Nov 11, 2012 8:08 am

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Phoenix wrote:My name is Phoenix.

Phoenix wrote:I'm male. At least I'm pretty sure..

Phoenix wrote:If I could describe myself, I would say I'm strong-willed, confident,
and ready for anything!

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Phoenix was an average Pomeranian. Until he was adopted. He was adopted by a little 5 year old named Hannah and her rich family. He was confused at first, but quickly grew into the wealth. It was soon becoming fall, thus causing Hannah to go back to school. Phoenix became friends with Ally, Hannah's other dog. Hannah and her father brought Phoenix, who was named Dallas at the time, to a salon where he got his mohawk and realized what he really looked on the outside. Hannah's parents were bickering one night, causing Hannah to snuggle with Phoenix. The day after, she and her father left the large estate with Hannah's coldhearted mother in charge. She gave Phoenix and his bed to the pound willingly, where Phoenix quickly escaped with ease. He now scours the streets for the little girl he lost, Hannah.

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He's comin' for you~


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