Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Guest » Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:14 am

I'm not the owner of the actual species, it's not up to me. If she isn't adopted, I may keep it myself.
The form says 100 to 400 words, no more, no less as the history. You only put 39 words down. That's not even half of the minimum.
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Arrows » Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:23 am

OK and I am very very very sorry. Sometimes I accitdentally misread things. Everybody makes mistakes. So please, give me another chance if you can. It's ok if not I just really like her colors and her. :) :thumbup: :thumbdown:
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Metallic Dragon » Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:00 am

Give it a few more days before giving her up as unadoptable. Normally if no one really applies or we don't get a good enough application, I change the requirements for adoption to see if we can generate more interest with something easier such as a naming contest or something similar.

Anywho, Skywish. Do you truly love and want this tsuia? If so, I expect to see real effort put into an application. With Haunted's permission, I'm willing to give you a second chance, but you're going to have to work for #20. Show us that you're serious about adopting her and that you'll take good care of her if you win. If you haven't read over the Tsuii main page, do so. There is a lot of important information there that will help when it comes to knowing the nature of Tsuii. Then, if you're still interested in #20, return here and fill out the application in full. Remember, you don't have to do it all in one sitting, there is an 'edit' button on your posts, you can put WIP on your unfinished application and return to it later if needed.

To others who may be interested in #20, there is still time to apply. Please, fill out an application. Every Tsuia needs love, don't leave her alone :\
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Guest » Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:39 am

Yes, okay. Thanks for clearing that up. :)
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Arrows » Sat Jul 21, 2012 3:08 pm

Thank ou so so so so mUch. Haunted, I am on vacation now so it may be a few days. But I promise to give an excellent form. I really love this one. Thank you very much! :D ;) :)
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Arrows » Sun Jul 22, 2012 12:49 pm

Username: skywish02
Name: Heart of Song
Gender: Female
Personality: VERY curious, leaderlike, occasionally shy, fierce when needs to be, very VERY loyal, loving, heartfelt, clever, quick-witted, gentle
Short history(100-400 words min/max):
Heart of Song padded through the forest. She was very alert, very quick. She knew, that, behind every tree, there could be danger just lying in wait. Heart of Song had learned that the hard way. When she was young, she had watched her family be dragged away by poachers before her very eyes. Memories of it floated about. Her father, Nightmoon, and older brother, Raven, had fought, but had soon been brought down. Heart of Song's slightly younger sister, Sunsong, had tried to run, but her small legs didn't get her that far. Sunsong was soon caged. Heart of Song's mother, Autumnheart, was shot, killed, and dragged away soon after. Yelps and cries of terror faded away into the trees. Why did Heart of Song stay safe? As soon as her father's warning yelp hit the air, she slid under a crevice tucked away in a rockface. Heart of Song grew quickly. She very soon learned that almost no where was safe from hunters and poachers. But Heart of Song always had a hiding spot the no one could find her. So as she walked silently and carefully through the forest, she almost yelped in suprise when she saw humans right in front of her face. A young one gently crawled toward her. They saw her! The young human held out his hand. He said soft, comforting words. Heart of Song hesitated. But something very strong pulled her toward the human. She sniffed the human's hairless, pale hand. The boy gently petted her on the head. Heart of Song knew she could trust this boy and the others. They had no intentions to hurt or kill her or her kind. She could feel it. Heart of Song sent a cry through the forest, to trust those who did not carry weapons or felt evil. Soon enough, Heart of Song figured out these hairless humans lived in a nearby village. They divised a plan. A plan to destroy the poachers. Heart of Song played a big role in this plan, as well as some other Tsuias. A larger, leaderlike man villager shouted. That was their signal. Heart of Song weaved quickly through the trees. She pinpointed her prey. The poachers. They had figured out there were four groups of poachers. Heart of Song was seeking out the group of poachers up in the north. Several other Tsuias were seeking out the west, south, and east groups. The hunters were becoming the hunted. There! Heart of Song had spotted them! She knew exactly what to do. Lead them far off dirt and gravel trails, where villagers wait to capture them. Heart of Song gave a cry to get their attention. They took the bait and gave chase. Straight into waiting villagers. Heart of Song sped past the capture point and the poachers followed. Bam! Villagers from all sides trapped them. With swift movements, the poachers became the hunted and were captured. It didn't take long until the three other groups were captured, too. Heart of Song was happy. She felt at peace. From that day, on she wove through the trees easily.
..........................5 years after............................
Heart of Song wove happily through the trees. After all these years, the population of the Tsuias has sky-rocketed up. Heart of Song currently has a mate name Icerock and three kits named Oak, Starling, and Breeze. Heart of Song lives deep in the forest near a small river.
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ok it is all finished. I don't know if this is too much or not. I really really hope you like it. And just know this: I really love Heart of Song. I think she is very beautiful. In my hands she will be loved forever. I hope this short history/story is enough, if not too much. And I would write 1,000 words to get her. Please, Haunted. I really love her. :) :thumbup:
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Breezeyheart » Sun Jul 22, 2012 12:56 pm

Haunted Day wrote:My first Tsuia design.
Please read here before filling out application.


Code: Select all
Username:
Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Short history(100-400 words min/max):


Will end on the 23rd of July.


I Want Her!,Here's My Form:
Username:
Breezeyheart.
Name:
Athena (Άνθεια): Greek name meaning "flower." In mythology, this is the name of a goddess of flowers, gardens, love, marshes, and swamps. She was worshiped on Crete.
Personality:
Sweet,
Kind,
Caring,
Will Listen To What You Have To Say,
Will Stand Up For Her Friends,
Soft hearted,
Loves All Animals,But Spiders And Roaches.
Loves Flowers And Gardens,
Her Favorite Thing To Do:Is To Sing.
Likes:Everything That's Sweet,Her Friends,Everything Do With Animals,Loves The Stars And The Moon In The Sky At Night.
Dislikes:Spiders,And Roaches.
Short history(100-400 words min/max):She lived alone in the forest,Till one day,She was walking outside her walking paths that she normally walked along,When as she walked along,She found a bird singing a lovely tune,She hummed the tune as she walked away from the bird,Wall she walked along she ran into a human girl with blond/brown hair with hazel eyes and tan skin,Who said Hi! my name is breezey childs but you can call me bri,She looked at bri and thought"Maybe this human girl is the one for me,To be with forever?"Then bri petted her on the head,And she purred,And felt something warm and fuzzy *Is this love? Yeah this is love and i feel this strange feeling,like i'm to be with her forever.* Yeah!This girl is the human i'm be with forever*.Bri gave her a music disk,And she went with bri to her new home,Listened to the music that is on that music disk,The end. (It's 166 Words.)
And Please Let Me Win And Have Her,Thanks From Bri :D
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Guest » Mon Jul 23, 2012 8:14 pm

Congratulations, Breezeyheart, you've won her. :)
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Arrows » Tue Jul 24, 2012 1:06 am

oh congrats... :| Take good care of her...
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Re: Tsuia #20

Postby Breezeyheart » Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:04 pm

Princess Cadence wrote:Congratulations, Breezeyheart, you've won her. :)


Thank You So Much!! :D I Love Her!! :D Mint green Is Such A Beautiful Color!! :D It's My Second Favorite Color!! :D Her And Nina Will Be Best Friends Forever!! Thanks From Bri :D
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Bri or Breezey for short if preferred.
♋ - Year of The Tiger🐅 - She/Her Pronouns.
I have Autism and ADHD aka AuDHD, bipolar disorder, OCD and mild social anxiety. Please use tone tags when talking to me if possible.
- Fursona: Starbug the angel snowshoe siamese cat. (He was made in memory of my cat seen to right) I love many different aesthetics; video games, TV series, movies, books, collecting, writing, singing & doing all sorts of art!
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