[wind song]

Ehehe thank you :B
The lineart was the hard part :L

Now its just a matter of coloring, evreythings shaded x'D

But thank you!
I'd make 20 more but it'd be hard to keep track :>

[aurumlupus]

▪ Username:
Aurumlupus
▪ Whelkon Name:
Ielenia
▪ History (200 words max): 
Ielenia lived in a very caring and happy herd. She grew up in that herd, and nothing really bad ever happened. She learned how to care for herself and how to hide from any predators. Her father was one of the most important members in the herd, so he wasn't around as often as the family would have liked. Her mother was always there for her, the steady stone that Ielenia clung to in times of need. However, times wouldn't always be as good. 

 Then the humans came. Entranced by the Whelkon's horns and hides, humans came en mass to hunt the beautiful creatures. Faith saw many of her fellow whelkons shot down like common deer or elk. Forced into hiding and seclusion, Ielenia is one of the few surviving Whelkon left. In the confusion of fleeing, her parents were separated from her. Now Ielenia has to survive without them, even though she is still with part of her herd. She has recently taken a leading role, helping the herd stay alive and out of the reach of the hunters. 
▪ Personality (200 words max): 
Ielenia is a very warm and caring person, who always has a warm smile. Ielenia is very friendly and always tries to help others out. If she seems someone who is sad or on their own, she will always go over an try to brighten their day. She easily takes charge in a group, knowin that all people sometimes need is someone to follow in order to feel better  However all this is a mask, and one no one has seen beneath.

 Beneath this mask is a very scared and insecure whelkon. Ever since the death of many of her friends and family, Ielenia has been very tentative on making any form of bond with anyone, afraid that they will be gone and she will be hurt again. She distances herself from others unless they are in need. All Ielenia really wants is someone to be there for her, to comfort her when things go wrong, even if she doesn't want to trust someone enough to give them that chance. 
▪ Why you want this Whelkon (Few sentences):
I really like the colors of her, and being a very common had nothing to do with it. She really is the prettiest around, your original excluded of course ^_^, and I fell instantly in love with her when I saw her. I especially like the one lone grey stripe in her tail, it just adds a flair all her own I think

[shadowhawk6776]

▪ Username: shadowhawk6776
▪ Whelkon Name: Kabocha
▪ History (200 words max): WIP
▪ Personality (200 words max): Sweet, kind, and an all around lovable Whelkon, Kabocha is shy. Even though others love her, thinks she's beautiful, and is the most popular Whelkon, she doesn't think highly of herself, she thinks of herself as 'the average joe'. And despite that, somewhere in her heart she knows what she actually is, and when she's either really happy or very upset, she'll strut around with her nose in the air, looking down on others. It's a very strange sight to see.
▪ Why you want this Whelkon (Few sentences): I love her design, and I'd like to use her as a character in a book I'm writing.

Absolutely beautiful! Well done, I love her!

[wind song]

Wow,
Thank you for both beautifully written and very interesting forms <3

[aurumlupus]

No problem, the least any of us can do after you make such a beautiful creature, then making adoptables of it! I can't thank you enough!

[Frost Feather]

▪ Username: Frost Feather

▪ Whelkon Name: GoldenBell

▪ History: GoldenBell had lost her mother at a very young age, she still remembers the horrifying scene.
My mother warned ‘’GoldenBell go and hide in those holly bushes, I sense dager’’ I did as I was told but reluctantly, I didn’t want to leave mother. And there he was. Man. Creeping up on my mother.
‘’Mother!’’ I screamed, I struggled wildly, out of the holly bushes, thorns cut my nose, but I didn’t care, I wanted to help mother. I finally stumbld blindly out of the bushes, bleeding from the cuts. Silence met my arrival. She was gone. Just like that. Later on father found me lying there, I blinked, my sight blurry.
‘’What happened, where’s mom? I hardly heard him, all I wanted was to see mom again, her beautiful face, her gentle blue eyes.
Father repeated, this time louder. ‘’Gone’’ I whispered ‘’Man took her’’
I lived years of misery, but I was glad father was still there for me. Until finally one day...
I gasped as something stumbled, heavily out of the trees, I knew it was another Whelkon. ‘’help me.. please’’ she croaked. I hardly recognised her with all the blood and dirt on her fur. But then..that same gentle blue gaze looked at me. It was my mother.

▪ Personality: Golden Bell hates talking about her history, it makes her very emotional, but she’s very happy that her mother was back, it was unbelievable. Over all GoldenBell is a very calm, gentle Whelkon, she is very friendly and very easily touched by others’ injuries. She is very willing to help almost anyone. She is very loving and is looking for a whelkon of her kind, to spend the rest of her life with, but of course her future is laid out for her, so she does not need to worry about that now. She is very cheery and is good at cheering others up, she hates to see anyone upset. She believes in miracles. Like the one which brought her mother back to her. She tries to live life to its fullest. She dreams whatever she desires to dream. She goes wherever she wishes. She seeks whatever she desires. Because she knows that life is unique by how you shape it.

▪ Why you want this Whelkon (Few sentences): I feel this strange gravitational pull towards her. My heart melts when I look at her, she's so beautiful. If I never saw her, I wouldn't like her. If I didn't like her, I wouldn't love her. But I did, I do and I will. Typed up my words may be worthless and mean nothing, but if you heard me in real life you would understand how much I want her. Not even words could explain this. But at least I tried.

[wind song]

Wow, a truly beautiful and touching form :''3
I adore your style of writting.
These lines ''If I never saw her, I wouldn't like her. If I didn't like her, I wouldn't love her. But I did, I do and I will'' were very skillfully written c;

Thank you so much and once I get a few more forms I'l get down to judging ^-^

[Frost Feather]

Thank you Wind Song. I guess writing is my strong side, since I get good grades in school :3

[wind song]

Well it shows ^^-

[foreign-potato]

▪ Username: .Foreign.Potato.
▪ Whelkon Name: Time's Dust - Time for short. :3
▪ History (200 words max): Light dashed down onto the undergrowth, little specs of white drifting through each beam. The forest was even more glorious every time I gazed at it. The soft ferns danced across my hooves, and Mother’s fluffy tail was the only thing I could keep in sight as we waded through the thick brush. Father was out with the herd guarding with the rest, so Mother finally took me out to show me why animals regard our species so…nobly? I couldn’t understand it. All that the herd does is walk around, eat, and reproduce. Mom finally stopped. “What can you hear, Time?” I flicked my ears up and tried to listen. It all sounded the same, the forest noises. “No, listen very closely, almost instinctively.” I closed my eyes and concentrated, hard. A shrill cry, almost like it was right next to me, startled me out of my trance. “Good job.” Mother jumped through the forest and there was a bunny, which had been attacked by some animal, lying on the ground. Mom went next to the bunny and lay down. The next thing I knew was the bunny was perfectly fine and ran off. “Oh,” I was all I said.
▪ Personality (200 words max): Time is a little stubborn, especially with people her own age. She doesn’t like the be commanded around and enjoys doing things on her own accord. She is very respectful to older Whelkons, but if she is angered enough, she may do some actions she will regret later. This said, she is a little impulsive. Strong emotions play her, she can be overtaken and not realize the consequences or outcomes of actions. Time loves to learn, and she finds her species history and powers are very interesting. Her heritage intrigues her, and she feels very bound by the rules of it. In short, she is her own person, intelligent or wants to learn, loves her culture/species, old fashioned, loving but not mushy-more tough love, and unique.
▪ Why you want this Whelkon (Few sentences): The species is very cool. I love their big horns and the beads on them. Not to mention, out of all the adoptable up, she was the one that I thought was the prettiest. I love orange, its my favorite color, and I have a little soft spots for fawn colors. She has very pretty colors I love. I want her as a character. For art, writing, and to be mine.

I hope the story is okay. I never saw how the powers actually work on their thread, so I tried to make it vague. :3
And I may change the personality before you judge the forms. xD