Mama look! I AM an alpha!(Adult Character for sale) by i-m-snek

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Mama look! I AM an alpha!(Adult Character for sale)

Postby i-m-snek » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:07 am

Lines belong to TheWolfGirl90
This is my RP character/2nd fursona as a pup and her mother. (HER MOTHER (Natsuki) IS UP FOR ADOPTION/SALE PLEASE PM ME FOR DETAILS)
Storyline: (This is before she gets her ears pierced and necklace) In the northern mountain range, a small pack of wolves lived peacefully. A new pup had been born from the alpha male and female. These alphas did not fight to be leaders, but were chosen by ancestors to lead their pack. The leaders were born with an oddly shaped mark(Which explains the star on the mothers paw), but the pup born to the current leaders was not. The mother of this pup was quite disappointed, but the father, Kushi, couldn't be more proud. This was a beautiful female pup, so he named her Yuriko. Her mother, Natsuki, never seemed to warm up to her. She seemed bitter, and would growl and bear her teeth at poor little Yuriko for not being an alpha. But one day, Yuriko came running up to her mother early in the morning after getting a drink of water. "Mama! Mama! Look look, I AM an alpha!" Yuriko happily bit her mothers ear as Natsuki got a good look at the new mark on her childs forehead. "Humph. You weren't BORN an alpha." She then rolled over and went back to sleep, leaving poor little Yuriko to sulk off. Once again, her mother had refused to show affection and love to her own daughter.
End of flashback.
Whew! Hard thinking of characters parents! :) But I think she is pretty good. For an after story, go here: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=155224

Poor Yuriko was never loved by her mother. This is a flashback she has after she meets her mate. She decides if she has pups with Tobi, then she will treat them all well. :) As you can see, Yuriko got most her looks from her father. Her mother is bitter because she wanted to always give birth to alphas. Seeing as Yuriko wasn't actually BORN with that mark, she refused to accept her. But her father still loves her :)

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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby i-m-snek » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:47 am

Bump. Any comments? Storyline plotholes to fix? Critiques?
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby Crazycookiemonster » Fri Jun 10, 2011 11:50 am

i think it is very good and would love to read more, but i have one question how did she randomly get the diamond on her forehead?
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby i-m-snek » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:20 pm

Crazycookiemonster wrote:i think it is very good and would love to read more, but i have one question how did she randomly get the diamond on her forehead?

The blue diamond shape on her forehead came after she was a month old, it is her mark from the ancestors to show that she is fit to be an alpha. It didn't come when she was born because her mother was alpha female, and was fit. But once her mother started to treat her badly, the ancestors decided it was time for a new alpha. Even if she was only a month old, she had a better personality then her mother. Now she wouldn't actually be alpha until a year old, but the mark signifies that she will be. It is somewhat like being touched by an angel, and it leaves a shining mark.
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby i-m-snek » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:32 pm

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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby ~Mystery~ » Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:41 pm

The pup in the coloring, is it the wolf in your signature and icon? just wondering, cause it looks like it. Also, i like the design ;D
poor Yuriko D=
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby Crazycookiemonster » Fri Jun 10, 2011 2:02 pm

ok that makes a lot of sense
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby i-m-snek » Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:20 am

Crazycookiemonster wrote:ok that makes a lot of sense

Yep. Thanks for commenting :D
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby i-m-snek » Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:51 am

Kirai wrote:The pup in the coloring, is it the wolf in your signature and icon? just wondering, cause it looks like it. Also, i like the design ;D
poor Yuriko D=

Yup it is ^^ thanks :D And the pup is Yuriko :3
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Re: Mama look! I AM an alpha!

Postby i-m-snek » Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:38 pm

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