Redline by lolpeaceoutlol

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Redline

Postby lolpeaceoutlol » Mon Mar 03, 2014 9:11 am

Here's my advice.

1) The face needs more of a slope. Mine isn't good cause' I didn't even complete it but that's because it's a rough sketch.
2) the nose is far too big, and does not connect with the mouth
3) The eyes are too animeish study up.
4) The eats don't go so far down the head.
5) Cheek is good, all just depends on style though..
6) Neck is a little short.
7) Paws... just study and practice.
8) this paw is weirdly angled.
9) Wolves typically don't just stand like this, and the foot leg is to squished.
10) Too fluffy and too long.
And I forgot about the belly, make that longer :)

You have a really good style, just practice, practice practice!
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