[noisecollective]

#1-YOU ARE HERE
others wip

Shadowstar lays down after a long day of leader duties, allowing himself to fall asleep.
There is pitch black. He sees treepath, one of the tom warriors of his clan. Treepath began to repeat what he had said earlier that day. "If you cant handle being leader, maybe we should all bow down to our new leader streamstar!" Streampelt was the she-cat deputy.Suddenly, stormclaw appeared. Stormclaw was another one of the tom warriors of his clan, duskclan. "More like streamkit!" He mocked. They both had red eyes. Streampelt appeared. She was crying blood, and she had red eyes too.
Shadowstar's eyes flew open and he rushed out of the leader's den and began calling for their medicine cat. "Tallfoot!!"(to be continued)

what do you guys think?

[noisecollective]

should I continue?

[FoxThefreak]

HOLLY CAT YES!!!

[noisecollective]

Thanks! Ill be posting the link soon ^^

[noisecollective]

Posted #2!!!