Comics and series

About this forum
by Nick @ Mon Aug 19, 2013 9:46 pm [Reply]

In this forum, you can find some great comics to read which have been created by Chicken Smoothie members! This is the forum for cover pages, the pages of the comics go into the subforum "pages".

We're going to be adding some new features for the comics forum, which will include automatic "previous" and "next" links for your comics, so that they're easier to follow along with :).

  • Gallery display:

Ask Chase and Kaden
by Tom Ridgewell @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 8:28 pm [Reply]

The blue one is Kaden, red one is chase, Go ahead and ask away! Their answers might surprise you!

Sybil + Lux Log Cover
by Astrasphere @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 5:34 pm [Reply]

Welcome! This is just going to be a series of drawings featuring my characters Sybil and Lux! They could be comics, full pieces, or sketches. Some of the comics may be out of order but I will number them. If you're interested, enjoy!

Sybil (orange) is a prince who's known his guard Lux (blue) since he was born, this will be their story and general daily happenings. Feel free to ask them questions, as well!

Splatter!
by wilddog990 @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 2:32 pm [Reply]

Worlds biggest bubble blown only to be popped in the last second!

comic 2 (wolfangs story)
by wolfang14 @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 2:15 pm [Reply]

Here it is

Ask Lonely
by Juniper Dreemurr @ Mon Jun 20, 2016 5:57 am [Reply]

This guy does have a name. He just doesn't let me say it.
How are you even here?
Some art of this guy:
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Alright. Ask him things. Trust me, he wouldn't mind the company.

y i n ☯ y a n g @ Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:27 am

* A male bunny with a fringe grins* You said, and i quote " DO NOT MENTION MY NAME' correct? Well.....
MY NAME
NO REGRETS

A Giftchu appeared! @ Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:29 am

Where are you from?

Juniper Dreemurr @ Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:47 am

CheeseTrap wrote:* A male bunny with a fringe grins* You said, and i quote " DO NOT MENTION MY NAME' correct? Well.....
MY NAME
NO REGRETS

A Giftchu appeared! wrote:Where are you from?


Replied.

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I don't believe that this has been done before. At least, I don't see any in recent..

Bonk Bonk!!
A scientist that goes by the name Funfun
has created a brand new life form,
shaped by the actions taken on it.
She named it Bonk Bonk, for the first noise
it made.

How will YOU shape Bonk Bonk?



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Bonk Bonk sits there idly. What will you do?
A>Try to feed it. We should figure out what it eats.
B>Touch it! It'll like us then!
C>AHMAHGAWD WHAT IS THAT?! CUT IT IN HALF I DON'T LIKE IT!!
D>Ignore it. What buisness do I have with it?

timberkat @ Wed Jan 11, 2017 11:50 am

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dragomaniac @ Thu Jan 12, 2017 11:18 am

timberkat wrote:A

Answered on Season 1!
Everyone else, please enter letters on the latest page!
(the first person of the season puts their letter/answer here, then it's answered on a color-in of the current season.)

seedcakes @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 12:08 pm

oo! this looks fun! where do i start?

In the valley forest, there existed a pack consisting of twenty or so wolves. All was well, and times were plentiful, until one night, during a new moon, an elder received a prophecy telling him that darkness would become the pack's downfall. The pack was put into chaos as everyone became suspicious about what the foreboding prophecy meant. Two pups were born days later to a lower ranking wolf. One pup, Ira, was pure white, but the other, Fero, was born nearly black. The pack took the pup's fur as a sign that he would grow to be the pack's greatest enemy. Days after they were born, Ira and Fero were banished from the pack forever, along with their parents, doomed to live in exile.

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Fero Character Sheet
Ira Character Sheet

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CCrow @ Tue Sep 06, 2016 12:59 pm

OOOhh this already looks wicked awesome! I don't even know what it's about and I'm already excited xD

ᴅ ᴇ s ᴛ ɪ ᴇ ʟ @ Tue Sep 06, 2016 1:03 pm

Ah I'm so excited for this :000

draumr @ Tue Sep 06, 2016 1:13 pm

i love your style! and this looks really interesting. c:

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Mimikyu's song!
by Pᴀɪɢᴇ @ Sun Jan 01, 2017 7:01 am Attachment(s) [Reply]

English lyrics by Will-O-Wisps

Hey, hey – Listen to this song-
Or you could even sing along!-

Pikachu is not I, Mimikyu is me!-
But because of how I look, I’m quite lonely-HyperPikaGirl
Oh no, and Mr. Sun, he just scares me a bit-Me
I think I prefer the dark, yes, I happily admit!-

I just wanted to be friends with you-
And that’s why I like to copy Pikachu-
My costume looks so realistic-
I made it on my own, I’m quite artistic!-Me

You wanna take it off? No, that’s the worst!-
If you saw what’s underneath you’d get cursed!-
Pikachu is not I, Mimikyu is me!-
My name is Mimikyu, and I’m not that spooky!-

With my big, big claw I’ll protect you in a scary fight-HyperPikaGirl
And I can use my thunderbolt to lighten up the scary night-Me
I’m a Pokemon that you can put your trust into-
So please, let me be friends with you?-HyperPikaGirl

Pikachu is not I, Mimikyu is me!-
At day I’ll brave the rays and fight, at night I’m cuddly-alive.
Pikachu is not I, Mimikyu is me!-
With you standing by my side I won’t be lonely-
Pikachu is not I, Mimikyu is me!-
My name is Mimikyu, don’t call me spooky!-alive.
Pikachu is not I, Mimikyu is me!-
If you let me be your friend, I’ll be the best, you’ll see!-alive.

Rules
1. Have three parts max
2.You have until May or if were all finished earlier.
3.Have fun
4.If you have the same lines make them different.

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I want a part!
Username:
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alive. @ Sun Jan 01, 2017 7:06 am

    hi! i've never done one of these and i thought it'd be great to join in!

    I want a part!
    Username: alive.
    Favourite pokemon: fennekin (is this the pokemon we're supposed to use for it?)
    Part(s): "At day I’ll brave the rays and fight, at night I’m cuddly-"
    "My name is Mimikyu, don’t call me spooky!-"
    "If you let me be your friend, I’ll be the best, you’ll see!-"
    Have you read the rules?: yes
    Any Questions yes,
    -how do we do this, like, just draw pictures with the lyrics? (sorry, like I said, i'm new at these)
    -do we have a certain colour pallette we're supposed to use?

    My part links: ((do we put the links to the pictures here when we're done??))
    thanks :P

Pᴀɪɢᴇ @ Sun Jan 01, 2017 7:10 am

If you can't figure out how to get the name instead if the url look here

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Pᴀɪɢᴇ @ Sun Jan 01, 2017 7:13 am

alive. wrote:
    hi! i've never done one of these and i thought it'd be great to join in!

    I want a part!
    Username: alive.
    Favourite pokemon: fennekin (is this the pokemon we're supposed to use for it?)
    Part(s): "At day I’ll brave the rays and fight, at night I’m cuddly-"
    "My name is Mimikyu, don’t call me spooky!-"
    "If you let me be your friend, I’ll be the best, you’ll see!-"
    Have you read the rules?: yes
    Any Questions yes,
    -how do we do this, like, just draw pictures with the lyrics? (sorry, like I said, i'm new at these)
    -do we have a certain colour pallette we're supposed to use?

    My part links: ((do we put the links to the pictures here when we're done??))
    thanks :P


The pokemon we will be using most is mimikyu but fennekin can be used as well and we draw pictures with the lyrics. And no colours are up to you

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Ask Doxx
by LOCW_Bluestarwarrior @ Mon Nov 28, 2016 8:20 am [Reply]

I miss doing these, so here is one with my OC Doxx!

I'm mainly doing this to improve my human sketches, and also to see if I want to promote Doxx to a persona or not! I thought this might be fun to do while I'm trying to make up my mind!

So a bit of info on him... He's a Gravity Falls fancharacter and is a demon. He comes from a four dimensional world where demons can see and manipulate time. His shape is a tesseract, but he has taken on a physical humanoid form. He also has an extra set of alien teeth due to the donor of the DNA used to my his body being half alien. He enjoys cake, sweets, and hanging out with his girlfriend. At about 19 human age, he's pretty much a big cinnamon roll. He is cursed to have anyone he makes a deal with die in some way, though, and he's working on fixing that. His fire is bright white.

He's just getting used to being human, so feel free to ask how he's enjoying that! Or ask him about Gravity Falls things, he knows quite a few of the canon characters.
Ask anything really, I'm super excited to answer questions, and so is he! (Though he could be just sugar high again, who knows.)
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»--Wιɴdeтн @ Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:20 am

Hey! I've got a question for Doxx c:

Doxx, is there anything about taking a human form that bothers or annoys you?

LOCW_Bluestarwarrior @ Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:35 am

»--Wιɴdeтн wrote:Hey! I've got a question for Doxx c:

Doxx, is there anything about taking a human form that bothers or annoys you?

He answered!

weegeestar5 @ Mon Nov 28, 2016 11:47 am

hey, doxx, whats your girlfriend like?
and also, do you ever get confused about simple human things, or are you p used to it by now ?? o:

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Fancied doing an 'Ask us anything' series while also doing Cloudless Nights to keep me occupied, motivated and give me a chance to draw lots of cats! You can ask the characters as many questions as you'd like, and ask them literally anything. It's your own fault if you ask something that gets you banned. Some questions may be vague as to avoid spoilers for the main comic, or the fact that they aren't very talkative anyway. The characters can interact with your characters if you wish. Oh, and also don't use the art without my permission. Just because it's answering your question doesn't mean you own it!

Snowby and Tricksy aren't the only characters you can ask questions to; in fact, here's a list of them:
Shelly/Sam
Jacket/Fluffy
Brindle/Frisbee
Ribbon/Radish
Lunis/Silence
Swipe/Moose
Taige/Toxic
Snowby/Tricksy
Lostleg/Smoketail
Browntuft/Cliff
Lynx/Sun
Morris/Cosmo
Storm/Vulpin
Specify which character(s) you'd like to ask somewhere in your question

creativegrayskull @ Tue Dec 13, 2016 12:20 am

can you guys do a dare for me? if so here is my dare! build a kwaii snowman!

Spacejump zoroark @ Tue Dec 13, 2016 12:48 am

creativegrayskull wrote:can you guys do a dare for me? if so here is my dare! build a kwaii snowman!

I do believe it's answered!

Box. @ Tue Dec 13, 2016 1:02 am

Huehue
you start with a dare?
So shall I.

Everyone
if you could kiss anybody else in the room
who would it be and why?
you can pick as many or as little as you'd like for the kiss and for Spacey to choose for said dare

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Never Forget Me....
by CaptainHook @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 4:57 am [Reply]

Never Forget Me....

A black shepherd once lived happily with her owner & sister in the woods until one day. A pack of wolves attacked the shepherd when she was out for a walk alone. The wolves took her back to there camp. The wolves promised wanted her to join them as she was a strong dog. She did but she want's to go back & get her sister a white shepherd,Alice. Wish the black shepherd needs to find her way back to her sister,Alice.
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I hope you guys will enjoy this comic!

Brandy6 @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 5:07 am

Marking!!

comic one (wolfang story)
by wolfang14 @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 3:40 am [Reply]

Here is the first comic of the serise.

Ask Oliver!
by My Horse Rocks @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 1:24 am [Reply]

Will post a reference later.

You can post below with your questions c:

Dreams of fire
by Moonsong12 @ Tue Jan 17, 2017 12:47 am [Reply]

If I can remember to do this I'll work on the series later!

M a j i x
by orcawhale @ Mon Jan 16, 2017 5:44 pm [Reply]

Starting a series

Ask Queen Sparrow (and subjects)!
by mimikyu. @ Sun Dec 18, 2016 9:04 am [Reply]

Hello.
Hi! Welcome to "Ask Queen Sparrow". Sparrow isn't a normal Skywing, so, please excuse how odd she looks.
I'm not odd, thank you. But I do have special traits that normal Skywings don't have.
Queen Sparrow is kind of grumpy, so if you get a rude response, don't think badly about it, it's just the way she is.
She'll try her best to be nice, promise.
Lie.
Yeah, yeah. I forgot to mention, you can also ask some of her tribe, or "subjects".
Such as Rubellite the Arena Champion, Magma the Animus, or Jasper, the Heir to the throne, or Aurulent, just a normal Skywing, hidden in the crowd of the tribe.
Leave Rubellite and Jasper alone! They need their rest.
Puh-lease, you don't let ME rest.

Rules!
1. Please don't rush me. Drawing dragons take me a while when it's not on paper.
2. Please ask a question or tell the tribe something, don't ask for the sake of having something drawn for you, because yes, these are free.
3. It's alright if you're rude to Sparrow or her subjects, just please be nice to everyone else on this thread.
4. If you make fanart, I will most certainly put it on display on here (if you'd like)!
5. Don't claim Sparrow, Rubellite, Magma or Jasper as your own. I understand if you use one of the names, just don't claim the actual characters as your own.
6. Please note that Wings of Fire is NOT a series I made. Tui. T. Sutherland made the series, and it's really good; you should go check it out.
7. Please don't spoil anything from the series. It's alright if you ask something referring to the series, like, "How did you feel about the prophecy being fulfilled?", but don't ask something that basically spoils it, like "How did you feel about _____ fulfilling the prophecy? When ______ killed _______, and when ______ did that," Please. It ruins it for others.


Questions to ask Queen Sparrow or her subjects:
- Do you have a pet?
- Do you have a favorite?
- Do you have any scars? How did you get it?
- Do you still live in the Sky Palace?
- Have you ever seen a scavenger?
- What does the fox say?
- Do you have any treasure?
- dat boi (or any memes)

Things to ask Aurulent
-How do you feel about Rainwings?

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That will be all. Don't forget, your tribe will be watched and examined closely by my subjects. Goodbye.

DepressedBean @ Sun Dec 18, 2016 4:11 pm

Hello.

I would like to know why you are so grumpy? Did something happen in your past or were you born grumpy? And do you ever have days that you're not grumpy or at least in a better mood?

mimikyu. @ Mon Dec 19, 2016 4:58 pm

DepressedBean wrote:Hello.

I would like to know why you are so grumpy? Did something happen in your past or were you born grumpy? And do you ever have days that you're not grumpy or at least in a better mood?

Answered!
I'm really super-duper-sorry that I couldn't color her in! Klutzy ol' me didn't realize what she was doing until it was too late.. :(

Captain Plucky @ Tue Dec 20, 2016 11:31 am

Your Highness, would you say you're popular and loved as the Skywing queen?

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◆ myth ◆ -- a comic
by weegeestar5 @ Mon Oct 03, 2016 12:48 am [Reply]

It seems like the world is in danger, as it tends to be often. But, surely there must be someone who can sav-- Oh, those guys? Well, we can only hope luck is on their side...

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i'll write a better intro later but yeah cx
a comic involving my and redkuchen's ocs in an au !!
good lord is planet earth in trouble


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weegeestar5 @ Mon Oct 03, 2016 12:49 am



weegeestar5 @ Mon Oct 03, 2016 12:50 am

reserved for banners, asks, links, etc.

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ASK MARCURIO
by Skoomacat @ Wed Jan 04, 2017 3:19 pm [Reply]

I was gonna make a personal ask the I was like "man this gallery doesn't give Marc that much love" and personally (no offense to Willow) Marc is my favorite oc so I had to make an ask for him

Skoomacat @ Thu Jan 05, 2017 11:08 am

bump 0w0

Bluejade1324 @ Thu Jan 05, 2017 1:38 pm

Okay So... Marcurio.
When was it discovered that you loved to set things on fire?

Captain Plucky @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 2:50 pm

Are you aware that you are married to a Khajiit named Selina?

hi ! im danger! i will answer questions and even do dares.. i might be shy or not willing to do some but i will get yours done as fast as possible. i said oh and i forgot i will show you guys what me eyes and mouth looks like if you ask me too! just let me know i said

creativegrayskull @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:33 am

:arrow: :arrow:

wip
by simile @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:12 am [Reply]

Coming soon.. boi.

simile @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:12 am

res

simile @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:13 am

res

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      Characters - link



      Cover - You are here

      Page 1 - link


wip, but feel free to mark!!

hazilnut @ Sat Jan 14, 2017 6:57 pm

*Slams down a mark*

I'm going to be watching this! owo

seedcakes @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 6:06 am

page 1 is up!

Coco Bunny @ Sun Jan 15, 2017 6:35 am

Mark!

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Wait..For..Me
by ❤️FoxLover @ Sat Jan 14, 2017 7:02 am [Reply]

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    A Story About Two Lovers Who Love Each Other.. WELL NAW
    One Wants To Tear A Hole Through Time And Space And One Wants To Have World Peace


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2FrostyPaws @ Sat Jan 14, 2017 6:10 pm

Interesting... *w*
DO GOOD WITH THE WORLD

❤️FoxLover @ Sat Jan 14, 2017 7:44 pm

2FrostyPaws wrote:Interesting... *w*
DO GOOD WITH THE WORLD

Thnks

NOTE: THIS IS INSPIRED BY EUCALYPTUS SPLASH.

Soul Demons - Who Can You TRUST?

https://www.youtube.com/user/bebopchevauxana
(Original Idea)

viewtopic.php?f=32&t=3327395&p=105712792#p105712792 (View The Charecters!)

Charecters

Cats
Bird - Pale gray she cat with striking blue eyes and one white spot over an eye and another spot on her tail-tip. Due to the shot, she now has fire powers.
Stream - Brownish tomcat with black legs and green eyes. He also has tabby stripes that are black. He has the power of water. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVysIKl ... KY&index=2 - Voice
Kara - Gray she cat with blue eyes, and black legs and ears. She has tabby stripes on her tail that are thick and white. She also has thick white stripes over her head. The shot has not been given to her. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HTf5NNv ... Y&index=16 - Voice
Lightning "Mercury" - Orange tom with green eyes. He has golden tabby stripes, and a white-tipped tail. The shot has not been given to him. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nGqyB1 ... rMnO650BZK - Voice
Clover - B & W (Black and White) she cat with green eyes. Her ears and tail are both black. The shot has not been given to her. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ig0okJI ... MnO650BZKY - Voice
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Demons

Flare - Plain black tomcat with cold red eyes. He was power hungry, and that affected the shot. Due to this, he is now a demon. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RCg7Dj4 ... MnO650BZKY - Voice
Bloom - Beautiful grey she cat with darker grey stripes. She has green eyes. Don't be fooled by her beauty. She can attack at any moment. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ba6KZtT1q3Q- Voice
Arrow - Mate of Bloom, ginger tom with a scar running from his ear to his mouth to his belly to his tail. The scar is arrow shaped at the end. He looks very scary, due to his red eyes and scarred appearance. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UovWmw9 ... l9KF8OlUQk - Voice
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Humans

"Shot Female" - A female human who gives the cats shots.
"Shot Male" - A male human who gives the cats shots.

"Caregiver" - A female human who loves the cats to death.
"Sorcerer" - A male human who hates the cats, and he searches for wild cats (not like tigers) to give them shots and turn them possibly into demons.

"Ominous" - A human who is almost everywhere. They see "Ominous" very often.


Prolouge

Bird's paws touched the rocky ground as she searched for her kits. "Kara, Lightning? Clover?" I jumped up at the sound of my name. That's right, I'm Clover. I'm a black and white cat. I'm almost six months old. My eyes are green, and they have flecks of darker green in them. Of course, I'm a cat, not a monster. I shiver at the thought of monsters. Monsters remind me of demons, the cats who have turned evil. They're fighting against the humans. This isn't a test on us cats. They have done the tests many many years ago. This year it's the year 5678. What, you're reading this in 2017? That's like three thousand years ago! That's even longer than when we did the tests... I don't want to think about it. The tests were done on our great great great great great great... inhales some air grandparents in 3456. Sadly, only my grandpa survived. He fought in the war, which still has been going on. He died the first year of the war. Please enjoy the story.

Chapter One: The Shot

"Clover!" Bird called, her tail twitching from side to side. "Why are you dily-dayling? Hurry up, you're getting the shot today." Bird flicked her tail almost smugly. "Come on. We're proud of you." Bird left the room. Instant stories that my mom told me flooded through my head. "The shot, it seems unbearable. It gets you in the neck. I hurts like crazy..." she had lifted a paw, then fire flickered over her pads. She continued talking. "You loose no blood, it's fine." she had licked me on my shoulder. "When you become six months you will get the shot. Don't be afraid." She hadn't told me about the monsters. I know why. My eyes widened. I remembered now. Today was the day of the shot. I know my mother had told me, but I only understood this.

"Why are you dily-dalying? You're gonna get the hsot todya." I jolted up and out. I found my brother and sister. "Kara! Mercury! Hi!" I raced up to them, my paws scrambling over mud and garbage. The sky was clogged with smoke, as usual. The sun had exploded so many years ago. We have this new star called Siasta. It's like this 'sun' but it's a little smaller. I raised my head as I looked at the sky. The gray sky. My mom told me the sky had been blue at a time, but now it's so clogged that we can't see a speck of blue. "Whatcha doin' daydreamer?" Mercury looked at me, green eyes beady as usual. His golden fur seemed a little dark. "Stop calling me names! You.. you..." I couldn't think up a name for him. I mean, when you're trying to fight back, I've never done such a thing. "You bossy furball!" I yowled in his ear as Kara parted us. "STOP THIS INSTANT!" I jumped up at my older sister. "Just because you're three minutes older doesn't mean you treat us like we're not your equal!" I retorted and huffed. "You little..." she murmured, don't worry, she wasn't gonna curse. then smacked me with her tail. "Get out." Kara stuck her nose in the air and exited the room with sass. Sure. We have some... problems, but it doesn't mean we're not family. My mom is a great hunter. She picks up mice everywhere. It's so cool how mice have fled here now that they are endangered. "Daydreamer! Daydreamer!" Mercury -or the bossy furball- taunted. "I told you to STOP!!!" I raced out of the room, and found my mom. "Mom!" I smiled at her. Chaos was everywhere, my smile turned into a forced smile as she gathered my siblings. "Come on." she looked at them, blue eyes striking as ever.

"Mom!-" My voice was cut off as she put her thick tail onto my mouth. "Remember, you gotta be good for the humans." She smiled, then led me into a room. I could see shot female. Her brown eyes were dark, and so was her dark hair. Her white skin grabbed the shot. It seemed like a second before she came, and shot male held me down. Stay calm. If you stay calm, you won't turn into a demon. My green eyes closed. As I awoke, I tried to lift a paw. It was numb. Then, I felt a sensation in my paw. Suddenly, leaves of all kinds came from above my paw. "Ah!" I stepped back to look at the scattered leaves. I saw a puddle. I looked at it. Then, I saw something unbelievable. "Wings!!"

Chapter Two: The Side Effects

"Kara! Kar-" Kara lay on the floor. She was at least three times taller than me. On the floor, my mother's ears were scarred, along with her tail. Luckily, she had no sign of blood loss. I sighed in relief. "How did Kara get so... big?" I asked myself. The one-pretty grey she cat arose. Her steaming blue eyes opened. "A demon!"

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Protected from human interference by the "List Melian" , the last remaining link to the Third Age and the War of the Rings secretly exists amongst us right now. Come with us as we pierce the List Melian to enter Coeur de Loup!!!

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