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Just a quick one. x3
I assume this was generally the pose you were going for? It might be helpful to check out these references for a better idea of what it would look like:
http://image.shutterstock.com/display_p ... 517958.jpg
http://www.greenscreenanimals.com/large ... 4Q8648.JPG

Also, you may want to post things you want redlined in the beginners oekaki... Redliners seem to lurk around more there than here. C: