Raven & Dan Part 1 by KathrynKat

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Raven & Dan Part 1

Postby KathrynKat » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:27 pm

VERY LONG STORY PLEASE tell me if i mis spelled or made some typoe's i tend to do it ALLOT. but please only tell me very kindly this took me about 2 hours to think up and type. or almost 2 IDK.

Raven Female on the right (Charcoal/Smoke)
Dan Male on the Left (Brown)
Raven & Dan

Workers:
Andrew ( Drummer)
Hayden (Guitar Player)
Ally (2nd Female Singer)
Cori (2nd singer male)(doesn't Actually always sing on stage just when needed a 2nd singer)
Kelli (Dresser/Make-up worker)(also good friend)
Jake (Assistant [Opens the doors ahead of her and carries packaging])
Zachary (Best Friend & Assistant)
Henry (Driver)

Wakes and gets ready for her Next Concert.
Once she got ready to leave her place she went to the Limo it had just arrived. As she walks over her Worker Jake Opens the down for her. She leaps into the car and waits for the door to be shut and looks out the window. She looks over at the front seat seeing Henry at the Drivers Seat as Usual. Henry Looked back at Raven and asked " You Ready to hit the Road" She lets out a friendly Smile and Knodded her head and said "Yes let's Hit the Road Hen". Henry Smiled back then turned to start driving.

They Arrive at the Concert building. There was a crowd waiting to greet her as she came out. Jake opened the door for her and helped her out the door. She gave him a friendly smile. Zackary came to greet Raven right when she Stepped out of the Limo and lead her through the crowd. She Stopped a Few times to give artigraphs to some fans. They Finally Reach Back Stage, Fans kept trying to go in after her but, Jake gently Shoved the Fans out the Door and Locked it.
Kelli Was already set to do Ravens Make-over. Kelli had a brush and started to make gentle curls. She then grabbed the cloths Raven had told her she had wanted to where the other day.

Raven was dressed and ready to get on stage but still had and hour and tell the Concert. She decided to go take a breather and stepped out side out back she first peeked out incase Fans where out in the back. It was all clear. She stepped out and looked out at the SunShining on the ground.
Raven was Only about a little over a year old, and already a pretty good singer for her age. She took a Deep Breath and then slowly let it out. She tried to think what she should do as she was waiting for that hour. Raven decided to go take a small walk and ran toward the side of the building to make sure there wasn't anybody there. She started to walk around a bit and started to hum a song. She was then walking very slowly she slowly started singing outlud. She was singing the song "Lucky"
She hummed the Males Lines and Sung outloud The Females line "Boy, I hear you, in my dreams, I feel you Wishper, across the sea, I keep you with me, in my heart, When life gets hard.

(A Voice joins in as she sings the part that spose to be for Both singers witch she was singing alone)

I'm Lucky I'm in love with my best friend, Lucky to be where i have been, Lucky to be Comin' home again
Both hmming "ooh ooooooh"

Raven Stops noticing a voice has joined her and and see's a Brown Young Wolf that looked about her age. She blushed just a tiny bit and smiled. She continued to sing with him not letting it stop even though she didn't know him
They Don't Know how long it takes Waitin' for a love like this, everytime we say goodbye, I wish we had one more kiss, I'll wait for you, I promise you, I will.....
I'm Lucky I'm in love with my best friend, Lucky to be where i have been, Lucky to be comin' home again Lucky we are in love in every way, Lucky to Stay where we have stayed. Lucky to be Coming home someday.

And so i'm sailing through the sea, To an island, we'll meet. you'll hear the music fill the air I'll put a flower in your hair.
through the breezes, through the tree's, Move so pretty you're all i see. As the world keeps spinnin' Round, You hold me, right here, right now.
I'm Lucky I'm in love with my best friend, Lucky to be where i hae been, Lucky to be commin', Home Again. Lucky we're in love in every way. Lucky to have stayed where we have stayed. Lucky to be coming home someday.
Both Humming "oooooh ooooooh ooooh



Brown Wolf Smiles at Raven sweetly. Hi I'm Dan what's your name.
She looked at him surprisingly thinking oh he doesn't know who i am so he wasn't stocking me he just joined feeling glad she was meeting someone that isn't just a fan and after her over her richnesses and poppularity (not the most popular but sorta)
She looked him in the eye's and Said Nice to.... Too meet you Dan My Name is Raven.

Nice to meet you too Raven... Looks at her in the eye's Beautiful Name. Matches you well. He smiles sweetly. So where are you from never seen you around here before.
She Stood there motionless.
Ughhh-eghh Yeah I'm Not from around here
That's all I'll Say for now.
HE looked at her and Knodded. So are you going to be busy at all or no? Do you want to maybe hang out for a little bit or what
Sure that be great i'm free for about a little over half an hour we can hang out for a little bit.
YOu have got the Most amazing Voice! Did or are you in music classes?
Did and now egh well Follow me....
They both walked back to the Back Stage standing out side the door
He looked at her in the eye's questioned. Then asked what are you doing are you sure you should go in there? Wait huh... WAIT are...? Are you the Raven I been hearing about a young singer.
She looked at him in the eye's and opened the door and paused. she then knodded her head and smiled the walked in.
He hurried and opened the door and followed her in. No wonder your such a great singer. starts to blush not knowing and thinking it was cool to meet a star but that wasn't what he cared about.
She lead him to a private area and start to chat with Dan.

Raven and Dan have talked for about 20 minutes. Then Zachary Came over to them and greeted Dan and Told Raven it was time to go on stage in just a 30 minutes.

She Looked over at Zachary and smiled okay then.
She suddenly got very excided and looked over at Dan and asked if he would like to take place in singing a song with her on stage and take Cori's place since he wasn't there today...
She hurried and asked have you ever been on stage before
He looked at her with Disbelief... Looked at her you mean... before he could give a full answer he got excided and said I WOULD LOVE to go on stage with you. It's a Dream of mine.
Good She then drags him to the dressing room to get a little groom up.
"Kelli I got you company"
Kelly looked over at Dan and smiled hello there...
Dan smiled at Kelli and said hello my Name is Dan nice to meet you.
Kelli looks over at Raven. So what is it you want done with Dan here.
Raven: Oh just get a a fast good grooming done he's going on stage with me to sing in Cori's Place.
Kelli leaped over Dan and infront of Raven "are you Crazy did you ask Hayen and Andrew first.
Raven: Nope but i going to besides i'm head of the band so i should beable to just say hey Dan is singing with us on stage.
Kelli: yeah i guess so but go tell them that now well i get him ready.

Raven walked away to go talk to Andrew and Hayden.
They agreed and thought it was okay as long as he keeps up as well as Codi does and maybe even better than them with singing. She told them way better and they were jsut singing about half an hour ago together she told them the whole story.

15 minutes passed she went to go peek at Dan just before She could touch the curtains to peek at Dan and Kelli, Dan poked his head out. Dan's and Raven's Noses bumped and they both blushed and smiled
Raven Chuckled softly.
Dan thought to himself Dream Girl and also Dream coming true to go one stage. He wagged his tail due to the thought. He looked at Raven in the eye's and then smiled again. He then softly licked her on the cheek and smiled again
Raven Blushed then stepped forward and Nuzzled Him on the Neck.

(5 minutes later)
Jake: Raven Dan Let's go Chop Chop we got to get us set on stage... Jake paused Wait we have 10 if late by couple minutes it won't hurt. But Dan Why don't we have you, Raven, Hayen and Andrew practice a song before going on stage.
Jake Called Andrew and Hayden on over to practice a song. Andrew Went to the computer and brought up a song they planned to do on Stage and had Raven and Dan Sing together. They sung "Set Fire to the third bar".

Jake, Andrew, and Hayden Clapped when Raven and Dan had finished.

Hayden: Looks liek your a wonderful singer and have great bravority on singing you showed no Fright in singing to us. Well LET HIT THE STAGE.

Andrew grabbed 2 Microphones and handed them over to Raven and Dan.

They all headed off to Stage....

2 hours pass by they reason so long is because they took breaks after each 3-4 songs.
They sung a total of 12 songs. Dan sung about 7.

Raven: That was pretty good for a first timer on stage.

Thank you, It was so much fun i didn't think i would get to sing that many the time flew for 2 hours.
So do you need to get to your family soon or no.
Dan looked away then at Raven and down at the ground. I...I Left my Pack and have none now. I'm old enough to live on my own and live my own life.
Oh sorry about that, How would you like to join our band and live with me maybe?
Dan looked up in a rush tail wagging and ears pricked I'd love that.

The band was packing as the 2 talked. It was almost time to leave. Dan decided to go find his friends first before leaving.
They went crazy when he told them the story and after seeing him on stage. Raven went to meet his friends.
Raven Leaned on Dan softly as Dan talked to his friends and sat down they asked her loads of questions.

Raven: well it's time we go Dan.

Raven and Dan hurried to the Limo.
SWEET i never rode in a Limo before...


TO be Continuedthis will be continued on a New Color page I GTG to bed

I might use this as the next Color in for the next part of the story Part 2 Forum/viewtopic.php?t=851454
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