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Sparrow -Chapter 8, Book 1-

Postby Rodii » Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:16 am

Sparrow
Chapter 7 --- Chapter 9


Chapter 8 --- In the Dungeon I Cry


Sparrow was just in pure rage. She walked around without the slightest idea where to go, when the saw the cave! :D There was a tail peeking out of it. Did her family come back? She ran to it, then jumped in the cave.
"Mom! Calli! Kayla! Welcome ho--AHHHH!!!!" Sparrow felt the ground beneath her sink, and she felt into this dungeon.
"Help! Mom! Someone! Help me please!" She noticed there was another area to this dungeon. She peered around the corner, and a giant wolf lunged at her. He clawed the tips of her ears off. Sparrow growled, jumping on the wolf's back.
"What are you doing in my cave?! I can kill you easily. ANSWER ME NOW." He pinned Sparrow down.
Sparrow looked at him with huge eyes, then pointed up with her muzzle. "I-I fell fr-from up there. I thought-I thought th-that I saw my mother, b-but I didn't," she stuttered like crazy. The wolf released her. She shook like a leaf. She noticed her paws were all bloody. And, her tail! It was merely a nub on her rear. She looked at the ground, and saw rats and blood.
"Ahhh! Get me out of her!" She jumped as if she was about to fly, but she was forget a few steps. "I forgot how to fly!"

(Sorry for the short chapter, but I wanted suspense!)

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Re: Sparrow -Chapter 8, Book 1-

Postby champeo » Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:36 am

Nice story so far, I like the art too.
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Re: Sparrow -Chapter 8, Book 1-

Postby Rodii » Mon Aug 16, 2010 9:09 am

Thanks Champy! :D This is my favorite BG so far, and i think chapter 3 art is my favorite, but the cover page is overall my favorite x3
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Re: Sparrow -Chapter 8, Book 1-

Postby hi_wraith » Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:33 pm

I love this book!
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Re: Sparrow -Chapter 8, Book 1-

Postby Rodii » Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:42 am

Sorry I'm behind on the new chapters! I'll probably be finishing up the text for chapter 9 for sure, and maybe do just the art for chapters 10 and 11. Then we're almost done! :D Thank you to the people below for the wonderful comments and letting me know I've done a good job! :D

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