redline by moonland

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Postby moonland » Mon Jan 09, 2012 8:31 am

sorry if i am pointing too many bad things >_<
1- the other eye isn't usually seen when the wolf is in that position
2- the snout is rounded and doesn't point up
3- your fur is good c: , but the neck and the chest don't show up that much, they are a bit shorter than what you drew
4- the front paw (in the back) isn't that far away from the other one, and it shows the elbow. also, the shoulder is more pronounced and round in the front legs
5- your paws are good, but the back of the front paw isn't that squared, more round ^^
6- wolves have a more pronounced joint there
7- wolf ears are more round in the point, they are more like a triangle, but with round tips ^^
8- the neck is wider and flufy there ^^
9- the shoulder blade doesn't stand out that much, since the neck fur covers most of it
10- you should make your wolves a bit longer ^^
11- your back legs are pretty good! notice that the back leg's knee is at the same hight of the front leg's elbow ^^ you should do the same with the other back leg ;)
12- a wolf's hip is usually a bit tilted and the tail is a bit longer

i'm so sorry if you think i'm talking badly about how you draw, i'm just trying to help >n<
i drew some views of the front paws and a realistic eye too if it helps c:
i now conclude that wolves are very round, even if the fur covers that ^^ sorry if all the text is confusing ^^''

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Re: redline

Postby Kittehkat<3 » Mon Jan 09, 2012 8:42 am

wow xD you made it look good though ^^
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Re: redline

Postby moonland » Mon Jan 09, 2012 8:49 am

thanks ^^

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