its a bit messy no offence even though i am not running the contest i tihk you should make the lines smoother as iun her dislikes are sloppinees/messiness how ever you want to put it
Dont worry and dont say your a bad artist art comes in all sorts of differetn looks! Your artistic ability will increase as you get older!!! Dont bring yourself down! Its quite good actually if you tihnk about it! If you use layers keep in this order form top to bottem! Line art-very top Colouring-Middle Background- on the very bottem always!!