I changed around some details I did not like. It is only my second work in Oekaki, and even though it is coloured in, I do not think it is all that bad. the tail, eye, nose, I did myself, the mane I just redid, and the left foreleg I blended myself. Any constructive criticism is welcome.
He is beautiful, but when I posted my editable, I specifically said NOT to change the lines in any way. Even if they are small changes, it still goes against my rules. However, this is your first offense and I will let it slide. Only because I like the coloring.