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Beaumont Collie Artist Entry 1 by paradise,

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Beaumont Collie Artist Entry 1

Postby paradise, » Sun Jul 24, 2022 8:10 am

    Please bear with me I am still learning genetics ^^;
    Definitely open to any feedback/suggestions!

    Phenotype: Black and Tan Blanket Merle Irish White
    Genotype: asat BB cchcch DD EE hh II kyky Mm sisi tt UU ll
Last edited by paradise, on Sun Jul 31, 2022 8:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Beaumont Collie Artist Entry 1

Postby Vinson » Mon Jul 25, 2022 12:36 pm

I love the texture! a couple small critiques/things to fiddle with -
they look a bit more like a point or blanket merle at the moment. diluted merle patches only show on black (eumelanin) pigment, and you’ve got merle markings ranging out further than a saddle would. here’s a saddle, blanket, and point merle for comparison!
also, coloring the little bit below the eyes with the color of the skin can help them stand out a bit more and make the face look a little more realistic! you’ve got the nose as eye shinies down though. coloring the pupils a darker color (usually black) will also help the eyes and face stand out more!
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Re: Beaumont Collie Artist Entry 1

Postby paradise, » Sun Jul 31, 2022 8:01 am

Thank you for the feedback! I’ll go ahead and edit the eyes and change the phenotype!
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    message here or on discord! @paradise,#0479
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Re: Beaumont Collie Artist Entry 1

Postby certified » Fri Aug 05, 2022 7:57 am

this is so pretty!!
    I do take fable customs, just dm me here or on discord ^v^

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