[Inkeyu]

Lovely dun roan overo paint with normal striping and minor fading from the dun roan. :3
I hope this works okay.
Let me know if there's anything that needs to change.
Is that more accurate?

[eleutheromania]

specify stripping amount and type is missing. striping is usually one color and only and reverse which is lighter then the base or normal which is darker than the base. it only would fade for graying and roan if wanted.

[Inkeyu]

I changed it. Is that better, or am I still missing something?

[eleutheromania]

striping will only fade with graying and roan if wanted. not anything else

[Inkeyu]

So I need to change this part?: "and minor fading from the dun roan" If so, how? Or is it that I should have flecks in the coat or lighter coloration in spots?

[eleutheromania]

striping should just be one color. that’s all

[Inkeyu]

striping should just be one color. that’s all

Ahhh okay. Got it.

Edit: There we are. Should be all fixed up.