[mercury.]

edits
[s] shine,
[c] tail, hair

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[raven [烏]]

i love the colours on this one! the hair is also very nice, especially the style,,i like the use of highlights on the hair too!! it accentuates the smoothness, i feel

[Birdy]

Ooh, I really love the palette on this one! Nice and autumn-y!

Maybe some pops of blue would look nice to contrast the oranges and browns? Also, a longer tail might help to balance out the "weight" of the longer hair, if that makes sense? Otherwise, I really adore the way you've highlighted everything this time, it's really nice!

[f1owercrown]

AHH such a beauty,,
I agree with The Pirate's comments! I would imagine a slightly longer (but not too long), probably furry tail. And maybe the eyes would look prettier if they were light blue, just to have a color popping out while it still matches the other colors of the main palette? :0c
Anyway, I really love the natural colors of this entry and how you draw with such a soft style!

[mercury.]

thank u!!

yeah tje tiny tail was intentional bc i really like discordant edits (n also ive done big stump tails so i wanted to try something new)

i think i will change the eye colour. im not happy w it. tbh the intention of this design was to do something that is really appealing to most users, sorta to see how much i could subdue my own style haha
a blue eye would make sense for tht reason.

its wild to me when i look st this design i just think of so many kals who look the same. but thats what i was going for i guess. its fair 2 say this was a product of frustration w my own design skills

sorry for the giant dissertation lolol im just feeling self critical

[liightning]

gosh this looks super stunning and just all-around perfect as with your other entries!
everything's just so smooth and relaxing and aesthetic and the colors blend together so well! I feel like I rarely see anything monochrome such as this work, but you did it !! blue or brown eye, it'll still be gorgeous in every way.
I can't find any criticism (nor will I ever be able to) and just wonderful wonderful job as always! <3