[Vintage{}Love]

Long lost in the distance


Trying to improve my art skills :') Please leave critique!

[Vintage{}Love]

boop

[Xiety]

I love the sky honestly.
maybe try adding more grass effects on the hills?
and the light passing through the hills would be cool too c:

[Jammer847813]

Here's my critique; It looks pretty flat, and there doesn't seem to be a lot of depth within the hills. Coming from me though it looks really good, especially since it was drawn on the Oekaki!

[Shadowflight13]

This is neat!! :0 I think it looks really good, but since you asked for critiques, here goes:

-I agree with some others that the hills look a little flat. Adding texture could help this. You could also try to think about how the sunlight would be hitting the hills, and add some more highlights/shadows to each one to make them pop out from each other.
-The foreground looks a little empty. You could add some close up grass or something right at the front, as if the "camera" is sitting on one hill, looking down and out at the others. This would also add more depth to the drawing!
-Adding some sun rays or a "glow" effect to the horizon would make it look a little brighter and give it more contrast!
-The clouds seem a little wispy to me at the moment, so I might make them a little thicker and make the sunlight look like it's reflecting off the bottoms/sides of them.
-If you wanted, you could add a couple faint stars at the top of the sky since it looks like it's dark enough for them to start appearing, but this is probably more of a personal preference thing. x3

Hope these helped! I really do like the piece as it is though. <3

[Vintage{}Love]

I love the sky honestly.
maybe try adding more grass effects on the hills?
and the light passing through the hills would be cool too c:

ohh good idea! Ill give it a shot