Would you guys adopt these again with this improved lineart?
I'm just gonna repost the story here because I'm saving that and NOTHING ELSE, because that's the ONLY THING I like about the old thread.
Over Seven Million Years Ago, there was a planet called Schizorizon. Here lived 2 Dominating Species: The Stellastratus and the Apacumulus. The Apacumulus quickly took control, and began neglecting the Stellastratus. The Stellastratus knew that not the whole planet had been explored. So they explored the other half of the planet, and claimed the land.
The Apacumulus declared war. This war was called The First Celestial War. Both sides fought fiercely for two years, and the Stellastratus won. The Stellastratus are forgiving creatures, and let the Apacumulus keep their land. They were at an unsteady peace, with occasional battles here and there. Then in about February 2016, the Apacumulus wanted all of the land for themselves.
Growing their army, they declared war again. This was called the Second Celestial War. This war lasted much longer than the first, causing many more casualties on both sides. At the end of the war, only four Stellastratus survived: The Guardians. They were banished from Schizorizon, rejected from their home planet.
And so they searched across space, looking for a planet to live on. The Water Guardian, Lucimatus (Lucy for Short) found a strange swirl in Space in March 2016. It was called the Milky Way. She sensed a planet to live on, but first, she needed to get through 2 asteroid belts: The Kuiper Belt and the Asteroid Belt. She left the other Guardians to find this planet. After she got through the two belts which took her until mid April, she was exhausted, but this planet was only a few thousand miles away! But when she approached the planet, she was pulled towards it more... She fell much faster than she thought she would. The humans on earth saw her as a comet. When she landed, she knew she was almost dead, and howled for help. The humans found her, and began taking care of her. She howled every night at Midnight. The other Guardians heard her, even from far in space. They began trying to find her. And then they came to earth, Transformers-style. With their powers combined, they began creating more Stellastratus on Earth. They had found their new home.
Meanwhile, the Apacumulus found out that the Stellastratus had found Earth. Now, they wanted THAT planet too! So they came. But little did the Apacumulus know, they were NO MATCH for the humans. The three guardians (Lucy lost her speech during the fall) informed the humans, and the humans and Stellastratus won by a landslide, with just one Stellastratus fatality and no human fatalites. The battle only lasted 2 hours.
