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I wanna improve my anatomy. redline please? by the folly of man

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I wanna improve my anatomy. redline please?

Postby the folly of man » Fri May 25, 2018 5:29 pm

note: I'm not looking to change my style! I simply want to improve my anatomy!
I don't want critique on my style. I want redline on my anatomy!

also note that this isn't my best work, it's a quick sketch. I'd just appreciate a few tips
with anatomy ;-;

by the way, it's a cat! just in case anyone is confused c:

any and all help is appreciated!
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Re: I wanna improve my anatomy. redline please?

Postby Chiikapuu » Fri May 25, 2018 5:34 pm

In my opinion you could add more fluff, and the tail could be a bit fluffier and the eyes more cat like but ofc its your style and yeah : D
Example: https://www.google.fi/search?q=Cat+anat ... HCNdAeQzPM:
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Re: I wanna improve my anatomy. redline please?

Postby the folly of man » Fri May 25, 2018 5:41 pm

Chiikapuu wrote:In my opinion you could add more fluff, and the tail could be a bit fluffier and the eyes more cat like but ofc its your style and yeah : D
Example: https://www.google.fi/search?q=Cat+anat ... HCNdAeQzPM:
Annbellboo wrote:The paws look great in that style, and the head looks fine to me. Though the legs are a bit off personally they need more of a leg define and the back/behind should have more of a curve up. Also try to find cat pictures or refs on pintrest and such they help a lot.


thanks for the suggestions! c:

a lot of the time they don't really look fluffy enough in my style, haha,
I tend to change the 'floof level' depending on the character.

I'll definitely try both of these, though!
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hi im folly!!! i'm an artist and aspiring game dev :3
i talk a little weirdly and might have trouble with
responding to things. X_x mostly active in oekaki!
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