[Discter]

I dunno if I like this or not... The face is okay and everything else but idk about the torso. Would love some constructive criticism! This was mostly a test on oekaki but also to see if I was comfortable coloring on these lines n all.

[guil]

I like your color choices!! I'm a sucker for gradients too, hehe~
I'd say it looks good, but if you don't feel your best on the torso, a little extra details can't hurt- as long as too much focus isn't drawn to that area of the body that it detracts from the rest- keep the eyecandy even all throughout the design.

But in general, cute vani!