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by Vluwu » Fri Dec 29, 2017 6:53 pm
I hope everything is smoother on this babe! I kept the same concept, yet There were a few things I wanted to change.
I hope you like! <3
Any comments/critiques on how I can improve my designs are super appreciated,
even if it's harsh, I take all to note! Thank you so much for your time!
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Egg Lay Day: 11/4/2017
Hatch Day: 11/4/2017 (date for comp)
Mature Day: 11/4/2017 (date for comp)
Mutations wrote: Unicorn horn - no
Lion Mane - no
Chanced Trait(s) :
Minor Mane - Yes
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by Mint Chip » Sun Dec 31, 2017 8:20 am
ahh man I love the refinery on this design. I love that rather than changing the original design you went with refining it. It looks so good like really just adorable dude! I think the mane's lines are a lil messy but that's really my only critique is to be a little more precise in the future but otherwise? And there is another minor thing but a lot of artists have forgotten this but minor manes can only effect two places at once; for example effecting the head crest & tail tuft, or the tail tuft & chest fluff. Also I think you might have forgotten it didn't roll for the lion mane on this go around but that's an easy mistake to make especially having previously edited the lines for it. c: But regardless;; absolutely adorable and fantastic revamp on this one, definitely one of my favs!! <3
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