[Vluwu]

This one proved more difficult than I thought after looking at them again. I hope this outcome looks a little better!

When I first started out they looked more tan, like the mother x'D

Any comments/critiques on how I can improve my designs are super appreciated, even if it's harsh, I take all to note.
Thank you so much for your time!

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gender; -
owner; -
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Lay Day: -
Hatch Day: -
Mature Day: 12/28/2017 (date for comp)

Mother

Father

Ginger

Arius

Mother | Father

Lion mane - yes
Drapes - no
Chanced Traits - no

[Mint Chip]

Oh my goodness. Strudel had just been looking through the competition batches and noticed this one redone, so I simply had to go look at it. This babe looks so great, the markings improved, the overall look just feels and looks so fluid! Absolutely love how this re-vamp turned out. Absolutely stunning, wonderful! Love the detailing on the mane you added in as well! It gives this viscet a unique look but yet you still know the parents! Fantastic job dude, I just am so excited to see you taking the initiative on all of this and putting forth 110% effort into all of this. It really shows and I'm honestly really proud of you. <3

[Vluwu]

Oh my goodness. Strudel had just been looking through the competition batches and noticed this one redone, so I simply had to go look at it. This babe looks so great, the markings improved, the overall look just feels and looks so fluid! Absolutely love how this re-vamp turned out. Absolutely stunning, wonderful! Love the detailing on the mane you added in as well! It gives this viscet a unique look but yet you still know the parents! Fantastic job dude, I just am so excited to see you taking the initiative on all of this and putting forth 110% effort into all of this. It really shows and I'm honestly really proud of you. <3

!! Oh my goodness, wow!
thank you so much. Knowing that you can see improvement means a heck ton to me,
And I'm super glad that they look good! thank you so much, Mint! It really does mean so much to me! ;w; <3