[Vluwu]

I was given another chance to do this babe,
and holy heck I'm so much happier with how this time tuned out.

I'm not going to lie. I was very disappointed in myself with how I attempted this babe the first time.
the more I looked at it, the more I really dispised it. I decided to go a different route this time, and I'm super glad I had.

I also re-rolled, And I was excited, yet a little intimidated, that they rolled an 11.
I hope I got the firemane correct! And I hope this one looks better than the last~

Any comments/critiques on how I can improve my designs are super appreciated, even if it's harsh, I take all to note.
Thank you so much for your time!

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Lay Day: 12/23/2017
Hatch Day: 12/23/2017 for comp.
Mature Day: - 12/23/2017 for comp.

Mother

Father

Sonya

Judas

Mother | Father

fire mane - inherited

[Bettalong]

oH MY GOSH THIS IS REALLY STUNNING!!! :"0 <33

[Vluwu]

oH MY GOSH THIS IS REALLY STUNNING!!! :"0 <33

!!! oh my goodness, thank you so much betta! that means so much to me oh wow ;w; <3

[Yugi]

Oh my goodness gracious, Blu; this batch is absolutely amazing, and this is definitely quite a jump in improvement compared to the first batch entry that you did! ^u^

I also applaud the fact that you drew a fire mane after rolling it for inheritance, as I understand that it is quite the intimidating event rare trait.
I absolutely adore the colors, especially with how they're now leaning more towards the mother. While both viscets are gorgeous in their own rights, I do believe that the color scheme you used this go around is absolutely stunning and works perfectly for this batch!

I wish you the best of luck, yo!

[cyberdragon725]

My goodness! This is beautiful! The colors, the design!!! And the fact that you did the fire mane?! Incredible! Well done blu! You've outdone yourself on this one!

[Vluwu]

Oh my goodness gracious, Blu; this batch is absolutely amazing, and this is definitely quite a jump in improvement compared to the first batch entry that you did! ^u^

I also applaud the fact that you drew a fire mane after rolling it for inheritance, as I understand that it is quite the intimidating event rare trait.
I absolutely adore the colors, especially with how they're now leaning more towards the mother. While both viscets are gorgeous in their own rights, I do believe that the color scheme you used this go around is absolutely stunning and works perfectly for this batch!

I wish you the best of luck, yo!

My goodness! This is beautiful! The colors, the design!!! And the fact that you did the fire mane?! Incredible! Well done blu! You've outdone yourself on this one!

y'all are making me cry omg ;0; <3 Thank you so much! It all means a ton to me, aaa!! <3 I'm so glad you like this one!

[WolfwithWings38]

Okay I really like this, but maybe remove some of the curls in the fire mane because it looks more like sheep wool with some of the curls on the fire mane. But I really don't see anything else wrong with it, so great job!

[Vluwu]

Okay I really like this, but maybe remove some of the curls in the fire mane because it looks more like sheep wool with some of the curls on the fire mane. But I really don't see anything else wrong with it, so great job!

aah, thank you so much wolf!

And omg, xD I see how the name could be mistaken for fluff now! Ahh, I hope they still look a little like fire >0<. I guess I got a little carried away with the swirls x3.

[WolfwithWings38]

Okay I really like this, but maybe remove some of the curls in the fire mane because it looks more like sheep wool with some of the curls on the fire mane. But I really don't see anything else wrong with it, so great job!

aah, thank you so much wolf!

And omg, xD I see how the name could be mistaken for fluff now! Ahh, I hope they still look a little like fire >0<. I guess I got a little carried away with the swirls x3.

No it's great, it's better than how I'd do it so XD

[Mint Chip]

You have blown me away. I meant to comment on this when I first saw you link it, just holy cow. I am just in awe of how much improvement you have made on this. This is just astounding and perfect. This is the sort of batch designing we're looking for in our nursery artist entries. And just hot dang, blu, I gotta commend you on that fire mane! I am just, wow, blown away by that. You took the initiative and re-did the whole batch, rolls and did the fire mane on the oekaki and it looks stunning. I knew as soon as I saw the preview it was a fire mane and just excellent job. With some minor fine tuning on the flames, and it'd be perfectly spot on but just dang dude!! Fantastic job and I am so excited to see what you do next!!