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by spooks. » Sun Aug 27, 2017 8:29 am
Whoo hoo.
look at these.
any tips?
Edit;; thanks for the tips! i moved the mouths closer the center of the face. and will be redrawing one of them in a bit!
anything else?
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by spooks. » Sun Aug 27, 2017 9:17 am
Saeyoung Choi wrote:Change the smiles up a bit, don't use the same mouth for different expressions because even if they're smiling in both expressions, they have different smiles.
Thank you for the tip! i'm still learning how to draw different mouth shapes,
so it's kind of difficult to form a shape that looks right with the expression.
but i will definitely work on that though, thanks!
ogden ♥ wrote:i think the mouth could be a little less to this side, and more to the middle of the face. otherwise, i really like it ^^
ah, i understand. i knew something looked off, but i couldn't figure out exactly
what it was! thank you very much for the help!
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by the golden god » Sun Aug 27, 2017 9:32 am
skellytin wrote:Saeyoung Choi wrote:Change the smiles up a bit, don't use the same mouth for different expressions because even if they're smiling in both expressions, they have different smiles.
Thank you for the tip! i'm still learning how to draw different mouth shapes,
so it's kind of difficult to form a shape that looks right with the expression.
but i will definitely work on that though, thanks!
ogden ♥ wrote:i think the mouth could be a little less to this side, and more to the middle of the face. otherwise, i really like it ^^
ah, i understand. i knew something looked off, but i couldn't figure out exactly
what it was! thank you very much for the help!
of course! i'm still a beginner, though, so maybe get some books in art? (i have two on drawing and one on watercolour)
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by spooks. » Tue Aug 29, 2017 3:51 am
~Tornado~ wrote:Looks nice! What you really want to do is bend and exaggerate things a bit more, the mouth can stretch more, the eyes get smaller or bigger depending on the expression.
thank you! i'll keep that in mind next time! <3
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