[fruitvale]

aa yet another kid . . i always thought the smoothing tool was useless , , i stand corrected
based off of sweets , flavors of milk , and pocky ! !
while making this i watched a movie so that's why the timer's so off ! ! ofc probably half the time is true , it did take a long time .
open !

edits - uncommon kalon
no rarity : chub ( stomach + back legs )
standard : shine , tooth , hair
common : longer fur ( back legs , butt , back of neck )
uncommon : ears , pupil , shorter fur

[Softballpup12]

I think you asked for critiques on the fanclub? If not, I apologize, my brain isn't exactly working right this morning... The only thing I can come up with to critique about this beautiful entry is the fact that there are a couple blank spots in the design that are just a solid color, now, this is good for simplicity, but I think even something as simple as adding more of the chocolate drip design or adding another darker color as a gradient on the back would help. One of the spots I'm talking about is the shoulder/lower neck space. I don't know if this is just me though. I could just be a personal preference! :) Overall, though, Umbre, amazing job and entry! I love it, and would totally claim it as a MYO if it hadn't already been claimed! :)

[fruitvale]

@softball hjflfj ? ? ? ? ur a rly good critique tbh ! ! ill try to make the next design have a more variant of colors ❤❤ i tried to give the back / neck a bit more detail by adding the sprinkle - like freckles , and considered adding more of the ' chocolate drizzle ' , so yeah ! ! u have some good ideas ! ! im so glad you like my entries , the next time I make one I'll be sure to contact you before I post for critique and / or your opinion ❤

[iuno.]

HJFDFDK wth i love this!! what a cutie

[Softballpup12]

It's no problem! Glad I could help! :)

[fruitvale]

hey ! this kid is open fr claiming again 💕💕

[deoxyribonucleic]

super beautiful ! can i reserve? :0c

[fruitvale]

super beautiful ! can i reserve? :0c

aH yeah of course ! ! ❤