[Skylion44]

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Feedback welcome

[kiwipen]

Well firstly, I really love the orange you chose for the shine of this one. It really pops against the blue that you chose!
I would have loved to see some more variation in the body's blue tones. With the solid blue, it relies heavily on those darker browns you chose, and since it's already a darker blue tone, they don't stand out as much as they could.
I might recommend some lighter markings on the end of the tail, or at the paws to help break up the monotony a bit of the design.
That being said, I do like the shape / pattern that you chose for the markings themselves, so you did well there!

[Skylion44]

Well firstly, I really love the orange you chose for the shine of this one. It really pops against the blue that you chose!
I would have loved to see some more variation in the body's blue tones. With the solid blue, it relies heavily on those darker browns you chose, and since it's already a darker blue tone, they don't stand out as much as they could.
I might recommend some lighter markings on the end of the tail, or at the paws to help break up the monotony a bit of the design.
That being said, I do like the shape / pattern that you chose for the markings themselves, so you did well there!

I added the light blue you suggested