starshine entry #1 (seafoam) by simontoffee

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starshine entry #1 (seafoam)

Postby simontoffee » Wed Jul 12, 2017 3:41 am

Here they are! I was going for an ocean theme, so the charm is shaped like a water droplet. The blue fur patches were an afterthought because I thought the design was a bit flat without them. Any suggestions?
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Re: starshine entry #1 (seafoam)

Postby kiwipen » Wed Jul 12, 2017 5:45 am

Oooh. This is a really cute and strong entry. I'm very impressed with your creative charm shape!

Perhaps use that lighter white to do some wave-y markings or at least add some light to the paws? I would love to see some more, well....motion through the design, if that makes sense! This is If you don't want to use the light on the paws, maybe use the darker you chose? I think using the airbrush on this would make it look a lot better, though this is already really great, so good work :D
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Re: starshine entry #1 (seafoam)

Postby simontoffee » Wed Jul 12, 2017 6:18 am

Thank you :D I fixed the paws and I think they look better now.
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Re: starshine entry #1 (seafoam)

Postby kiwipen » Wed Jul 12, 2017 6:25 am

I definitely agree :)
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