[Mintu1]

So I finally gathered the courage to actually colour one of these in! Ah I love it so much <3

This is inspired by Kotori Minamis Cyber set dress ❤

Edits; Shine

[nebulavery]

what a cutie! this is such a calming design, not cluttered but not drab <3

critique, as asked for:
- there's nothing to differentiate the shine from being just another marking! adding some black lines around it and perhaps adding some highlights would help it stand out
- those two very similar blues in the palette could be changed to just one blue in the design - it's a little thing, but it helps make everything more unified
- all of these colors are muted enough that nothing really stands out as a focal point - i'd love to see one color used to add a bit of brightness and contrast!

this is lovely though, and i'm nitpicking - i'm excited to see more entries from you!

[Mintu1]

Thank you for all the input, it looks way better now!

I will keep in mind about having one colour that stands out for my next entry! To be compleatley honest, I was kind of scared to do that so I just played it safe, now I know to just go all out instead of holding back ^.^