Entry #3 Nephele x Gabriel by sapphirelion

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Entry #3 Nephele x Gabriel

Postby sapphirelion » Thu Jun 01, 2017 3:01 pm

Entry #1 Evelyn x Andrean: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=3462339
Entry #2 Sinbad x Rylant: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=3465079&p=109512263#p109512263


Entry #3:
Nephele x Gabriel

Kit #1
Standard: custom shine
Common: longer fur, custom tail




Kit #2
Standard: teeth, hair, custom shine
Common: custom tail
Uncommon: custom tongue, custom pupils








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Nephele
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Gabriel
Standard: teeth, hair, custom shine
Common: longer fur, back mane, custom tail
Uncommon: shorter fur, custom ears, custom tongue, custom pupils
Rare: extra limbs, extra eyes, two tails, glow, horns on head
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Re: Entry #3 Nephele x Gabriel

Postby Aey » Tue Jun 06, 2017 10:49 am

The designs on these are really nice, especially that top kid.

However, copy-pasting an edit is a bit of a no-no I think. If the 2nd kid also rolled a custom tail, it should be unique.

Also, work a bit on your lines. The fur edits on the top kid are a bit choppy.
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Re: Entry #3 Nephele x Gabriel

Postby sapphirelion » Sun Jun 11, 2017 8:08 am

Aey wrote:The designs on these are really nice, especially that top kid.

However, copy-pasting an edit is a bit of a no-no I think. If the 2nd kid also rolled a custom tail, it should be unique.

Also, work a bit on your lines. The fur edits on the top kid are a bit choppy.



thank you for your input! :)

I'm going to leave this batch as is, but I'll keep your points in mind for future breedings :)
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