kalon entry! by eli ayase

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kalon entry!

Postby eli ayase » Sun May 21, 2017 10:46 am

    so its not perfect but im ok with this??
    not sure how i love the pallet but its nbd i guess

    critique would be much appreciated!

    second entry
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Re: kalon entry!

Postby Aey » Sun May 21, 2017 12:49 pm

I like the edits and the color mixing. I wish there were something in the design that made this kalon memorable, a marking or something.
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Re: kalon entry!

Postby eli ayase » Sun May 21, 2017 1:34 pm

Aey wrote:I like the edits and the color mixing. I wish there were something in the design that made this kalon memorable, a marking or something.


    is there anything you recommend!
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Re: kalon entry!

Postby Softballpup12 » Sun May 21, 2017 2:16 pm

eli ayase wrote:
Aey wrote:I like the edits and the color mixing. I wish there were something in the design that made this kalon memorable, a marking or something.


    is there anything you recommend!

Maybe some yellow designing over the top of the purple?
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Re: kalon entry!

Postby Aey » Mon May 22, 2017 4:53 am

Even just a lighten or darken brush, or add or subtract, in some type of marking style over top of the color wash. It doesn't need to be eye-poppingly dramatic, just a lil something. ^^

Actually you could probably pull one of the lighter colors from the palette you have and... look for images around there, find one you love and give it a suggestion of whatever that is. Circles, flowers, spots, clouds, etc. You seem to love the softer look, so look at some of cicamicu's stuff, her designs are very soft and pretty, but have elements that make them memorable and recognizable from the rest of the kalon horde. XD

You've got the hard part down, now it's just refining! I'm rooting for you. <3

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Re: kalon entry!

Postby the golden god » Sat Jun 03, 2017 9:19 am

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